| "Battle of the Youkai" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: sweet!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 28, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch! Inuyasha definityl opened his mouth and blurted something he shouldn't have said at that time, especially in front of Kagome... oohh... he's in for it now. He also REALLY needs to learn more manners, and you specify that exactly in the right way!! congrats!
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotalyobsessed On: May 26, 2004 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
fist of all great story! second you can spell Inuyasha 3 differnt ways: Inuyasha, Inu Yasha, or Inu-Yasha(so your are spelling it corectly). third you did spell Sango,Kouga, ect. corectly. last 'Kirara' is spelled corectly 'Kilala' is just the pronounceation. i reapete YOUR SPELLING IS CORRECT! hope you up date soon!^_^ JaNe!!
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Reviewed By: Darkness4ever On: May 24, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool story, i must say it's REALLY INTERESTING! please continue!! till then peace! -Darkness- ^_^
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Title: FireCracker3392
Reviewed By: SonicStarlight On: May 23, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job great idea update so i can see the turn out
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Title: Great Start
Reviewed By: RikuJ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job!!! I really like this idea! Keep it going ^_^!!!
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Title: keep going dude!
Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, this sounds very interesting. Please update!!!
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