| "The Worthless Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Title: Whooaa...
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 10:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappy! Now there's a twist of fate! I kinda expected that but the way you write it makes it more dramatic and heart-lurching. *bows down to you* I await your next awesome chapter!
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Reviewed By: lil lovely angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 04:59 PDT
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PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR STORY! ITS THE BEST!
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Title: The Worthless Humans
Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 16:20 PDT
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PLZ UPDATE!!! I really like your story and I hope you update soon!!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 18:47 PDT
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i love you story i truly do and i am so happy my friend sent it to me but i have on little tiny ity bity request please tell us what happens to the black girl i dont care if you do the stero-type or not i just want to know will she make it will she die or if the stero-type afircan american have and attutide and die i juist have to know
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Title: Love it even more!
Reviewed By: The Souija [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply in LOVE with your story TWH! Very inspiring and yes i know i reviewed before (i was one of the first, hehe) but i just wanted to say "Congrats" for going thus far and i hope you keep it up! just love how it is progressing ^_~ ah Kuronue...
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Reviewed By: annemarieh)not signed in) On: April 11, 2005 16:00 PDT
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Thankies for the update! I've been waiting forever! I understand all the things you are dealing with. I can wait awhile for the next review. It's usually worth it in the end! So, here I was thinking the spirit detective was going to be Yuusuke, when really it was Sensui!! That's quite a shocker! No one was expecting that sort of thing to happen!! And FINALLY, Kuronue makes his love for Nari clear. Even though he didn't exactly say 'I love you' or anything, his words were close enough. Now watch. I bet you're gonna kill him off next chapter, ne? Or maybe Youko? Too bad it's not going to be Yomi. I wouldn't mind if that asshole ended up dead! This was a great chapter, and I'll spend the next few days re-reading it over and over again, so I know evey little part. This story is soooo good! Take your time on the next update. This chapter will last me until then! Sayonara.
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Reviewed By: RebelAnimeChick On: April 11, 2005 05:14 PDT
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OMG!! He cannot die! He cannot I tell you! cannot!!!!!!!!! Poor poor Nari-chan! Kuronue-sama may die!
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Title: Split Heart
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! You sure know how to rile one's mind up, in the good way. If I were Nari, I would probably be in the biggest state of confusion ever. If the demons are captured and put to punishment and all of the slaves are to be sent back to the Ningenkai, which decision would I make? If I went back to my home which I would have, in the beginning, done anything to go back to, I would have to leave Okuro and forget about Kuroune, plus I would probably have a hard time accostoming back to society. If I stayed to protect Okuro, then I would be in danger of all the youkai that live in the Makai. Also, what about Kuronue? I don't want him to to be punished, but what can a simple ningen like me do? See, you can really make a simple-minded person like me think critically. Your story's great and I await your next chapter! P.S. Between you and me, I would stay to protect Okuro and somehow save Kurounue!
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 16:44 PST
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This is definitely a story for those with strong stomachs. The overall grammar/spelling is very developed as well as the vocabulary. I loved readin this story down to the bitter leave-off. This comment is coming from a girl who usually loves comedies. As pointed out in the beginning of the story, rape is not an easier topic for authors to write about. Not always is sex about love of that sort of thing. I wonder about the next chapter... At this point in time, the Spirit Detective would either have to be Sensui or someone else. I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon. ~Hanami
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Reviewed By: nari... On: March 25, 2005 02:42 PST
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poor, poor nari! i hope something good will happen to her for once... Anyway, great chapter there! Loved it =) i'll reallly be looking forward to your updateQ!
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Reviewed By: MidnightWolf On: March 12, 2005 21:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUUV IT! poor Nari! keep it up! your spelling and writing skills are improving!
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Reviewed By: whhee On: March 11, 2005 18:36 PST
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Awww!! Poor Nari! I hope something of good fortune happens to her! Please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuramasbluegirl On: March 11, 2005 17:13 PST
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YAY, you updated. I liked this chapter, I wonder if the spirit detective well find the stables...can't wait to see what happens. thanks for the great read. cya
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Title: Poor Nari
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter!! It's a shame that Nari forgot her own name but I don't blame her. I wonder who's going to train Okuro on demon skills if anyone? Poor Nari, seeking just a little bit of love but receiving twice as much sadness. Oh, well. Once again, amazing chapter and I await your next one!! Ja ne!!
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Title: latest chapter
Reviewed By: annemarieh(notsignedin) On: March 11, 2005 13:38 PST
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Awwwww!! This is just soooo sad! I feel sorry for Nari. After all that she goes through, her life just never seems to improve. It's like she's forever cursed, having done something to anger the gods, and now Fate seeks to destory her. What a terrible life for her now. I wish it could improve, even just a little. So it would be better for her, Kuronue, and her son. It would be so nice if this story had a happy ending. Will it have a happy ending? (I don't remember if I asked you this question before). But Nari probably is in for some trouble. I'm guessing the spirit detective must be Yuusuke, and he's planning on freeing her and she'll be free again? (This part of it just seems so obvious. Correct me if I'm wrong, okay?) Great job on the new chapter. I've been waiting on it for a long time!! See you next time!!
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