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Title: GOPD
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: November 20, 2004 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH U UPDATED!!!!! I think they should both live and no rap i'm sorry but i can't handle that ever since my best friend got date raped by her best friend but anyways...I think someone like a best friend of Sesshy's should help him and Naraku and Inuyasha DIE!!!! YAY!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 19:47 CST
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I don't see any update!!... One month had pass already... even more!!... Please update soon... please, I really love your fic! I really want you to update... It was evil to put a cliffy and to let us wait that long..... very evil! Please, I'm begging you (and I'm not the only one) update soon... if it's because of school, well, I know it's hard, but you MUST find the time to write a little chapter (don't mind if it's short, at least you would have update...) so please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 17:41 CST
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cutting off what makes a charater unique, is like trying to read a book upside-down. it's just not right.
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Title: Gomen!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: October 29, 2004 21:53 CDT
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I'M SO SORRY! I haven't had much free time now that I've started high school...my teachers give me like four hours of homework every day...>_____< I'm so sorry! I still check up every month or so but that's all the time I have...Anyways, this chapter was really good! AAAAAAAAH! THEY KIDNAPPED HER?! WHAT?! HOW DARE THEY! I'LL KILL EM! *looks around for a sharp object* While I'm looking for something shiny and sharp, you update, okee?! ^______^ GREAT JOB, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! I'M STILL YOUR FAITHFUL REVIEWER!!! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 21:07 CDT
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coolsa. Interesting.
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 when signed in On: October 03, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH ME OH MY!!!! You bare so mean to just leave us all hanging like this..... have you no heart??? LOL No for real as always great writing to make such an awsome fic... keep it up and if you can, keep it up soon for us. PLEASE???????!!!!
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Reviewed By: sparklerfish [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!! keep writting please!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:33 CDT
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OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS. THEY KIDNAPPED HER?!?!? SICK EM SESSHY SICK EM. That was a very nice chapter, other than the fact that YOU MADE INUYASHA GO TO THE DARK SIDE!! WITH NARAKU MIGHT I ADD. C'mon, that's so hurtful it sickens me. Well anyway. I might go back to the part with Sesshy's shirt off. *drool* well anyway. You know what to do. And nothing better happen to my second favorite couple, but also The hottie with the body (Sesshy if you hadn't noticed) Well anyway like I said you know what to do do you need an reminder? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *rest fingers* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. If you notice if you write a word a bunch of times it starts to look like that's not how it's spelled? well anyway you get the picture. UPDATE!!!!!!! ^_^ Please and Thank You. (also i would greatly appreciate if you read my first ever fanfic. I kinda think the first chapter is dumb but it gets better. so yeah) ^_^ Please and Thank you
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:24 CDT
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I absolutely love your story!! It's awesome! Please update soon! as soon as you can!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Evern On: October 02, 2004 22:20 CDT
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How could you stop there! I can't wait to see Kagome going off on Inuyasha! Naraku's not gonna rape is he?
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Title: COME ON!!!!
Reviewed By: TheHellChild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAmn u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!update now!!!! I SAID NOW!!!!! COME ONE UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: September 07, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!~ I'm not gonna forgive you if u don't!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: GRRRR
Reviewed By: The Hell Child On: August 30, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Y WON'T U UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! AND UPDATE NOW I SAID NOWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Gomen!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 23:25 CDT
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WAAAAAH! I'M SOOOOO SORRY! I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN FOREVER! SO SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE PLEASE!I started high school recently and man, do they give you homework or what! ON THE FIRST DAY I GOT LIKE 50 MATH PROBLEMS! I've been so pooped, and my parents won't let me go on the internet on weekdays anymore. I'M SO SORRY! SORRY GOMEN LO SIENTO(span) SIN LOI(viet)!! I truly am really sorry! Please forgive me. I've also been busy because my school books haven't arrived yet.I'M REALLY SORRY! If it makes you feel any better, I LOVED the new chapters. I like it when Sesshy acts so sweet to Kagome...I hate Inu-chan for interrupting them...Now you've gotten me to go insane. I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I still think your story is awesome! So don't worry, I'll try to be more faithful. I am sorry for not responding sooner.My teachers are giving me sh!tloads of homework...It's a conspiracy I tell you.I'll review lotsa and make them really long too. ^_______^ So I absolutely loved the recent additions. Really interesting. I'm supposed to eat dinner right now, and I'm starved. But I feel guilty that I haven't reviewed so I decided to skip dinner to finish the chapters and review. Please don't hate me. I'm still your ever faithful review! ^______^ I really did enjoy the chapters immensely. Can you make lots of fluff between Kagome and Sesshy? Please? Pretty please? With Sesshy on top? ^_______^ Keep up the awesome work! Toldja your story will be a hit. ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Title: Gomen!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAH! I'M SOOOOOOO SORRY! I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN FOREVER! SO SO SO SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! See, I started high school recently and man, do they give you homework or what! ON THE FIRST DAY I GOT LIKE 50 MATH PROBLEMS! I've been so pooped, and my parents won't let me go on the internet on weekdays anymore. I'M SOOOOOOOOO SORRY! SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN LO SIENTO LO SIENTO LO SIENTO SIN LOI SIN LOI SIN LOI SIN LOI!!! I truly am really sorry! Please forgive me. I've also been busy because my school books haven't arrived yet, and I have just been so busy. Plus, I was addicted to GunBound for a while...Hehe. I'M REALLY SORRY! If it makes you feel any better, I LOVED the new chapters. I like it when Sesshy acts so sweet to Kagome...I hate Inu-chan for interrupting them...Now you've gotten me to go insane. I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I still think your story is awesome! So don't worry, I'll try to be more faithful. I really am sorry for not responding sooner. Please forgive me! >_______< But I'll try to review whenever I can. My teachers are giving me sh!tloads of homework...It's a conspiracy I tell you...Please forgive me. I'll review lotsa and make them really long too. ^_______^ So I absolutely loved the recent additions. they were fantastic. Really interesting. I'm supposed to eat dinner right now, and I'm starved. But I feel guilty that I haven't reviewed so I decided to skip dinner to finish the chapters and review. Pleas |
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