| "My Other Life" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: lolololol On: June 29, 2004 16:10 CDT
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really cool story! update soon!
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Reviewed By: MoonlightMage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyouken is right don't chang this chapter it very good the way it is. Update soon I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Kyouken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:31 CDT
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I like Chapter four, don't change it. And update, this stories really got me hooked.
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Reviewed By: Kyouken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 18:40 CDT
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That was SOO funny! keep writing! I can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: Kaggs On: June 25, 2004 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE PPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE OR I WILL CRY ;_; UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update so on this I like reading it
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 24, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated, hurray, now keep doing that. The story is really good. Now stop keeping us in suspense of what happens. UPDATE SOON. REALLY SOON.
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Reviewed By: Sarah the original On: June 23, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and finish it!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 22, 2004 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really good story. It's sad to really think of Kagome getting beat for things. But I would be happy to be kidnapped also. But really, it's a really good story update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: emelynooopee(nli) On: June 20, 2004 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i think it's miroku. cause it did say that she was kidnapped to be one of inuyash'a brides so it has to be him or kouga maybe they are like the guards or something. ehh.... well i await for you next installment...
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Reviewed By: MikoKrazy777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon it is getting good i wonder who Kagome's real mother was and who that boy was that was threatening the man that is trying to rape Kagome. ~MikoKrazy777
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! It's a really good story.
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Reviewed By: clutzoid On: June 18, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh come on its only been up for since the 17th which is what a day u have to give it more time then that before u put its statis as completed well anywat keep going its good
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