| "Kagome's Return (sequel to Kagome! Where are you!?" Reviews/Comments [ 215 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 01:11 CDT
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cools beans. great chapter.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:31 CDT
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HAHAHA... oh gods... the boys were a HOOT in this one!!! Okay, my family now thinks I've gone round the bend from laughing at the computer ^_^
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 24, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pepporoni, Bacon, Ham, Extra Cheese. My Wife Likes Supreme. Semper Fidelis
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 08:33 CDT
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of u course there r a few things u still need to wrap up there always r!! any way!! i can not wait for the next udpate!!! plz make it soon!! and much love never forget the love!!!
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Reviewed By: jc On: August 23, 2004 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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i think the original plot is still good but your making the story more and more confusing at times, i have to read a chapter at least 3 times to fully understand what's going on, sorry! Im not really flaming u either so no daggers at me! As much as I think this is a downgrade from Kagome, Where Are You?! I think you sould keep it up and try to make events a bit more clear, pretty please? I love the plot and it would kill me if i could never understand the ending!
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: August 22, 2004 22:00 CDT
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One word: Fantastic!
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed On: August 22, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, clear up the loose ends and remember. My offer still stands. Semper Fi, do or die. Brigadier General Thomas B Golladay jr USMC (Ret)
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 14:26 CDT
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excellent as always! Looking forward to the next fic ~ Caliko
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Reviewed By: JadedNamida [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is going brilliantly, Jeff! :D I'm eager to see how the next storyline and the S/K/I triangle will develop. Great job and I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 12:09 CDT
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cools beans. great chapter. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: August 21, 2004 21:02 CDT
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haha great i loved the inuyasha, Sesshomaru, Shippo stuff. Feel bad for Kohaku as well but hey its all plot construction!
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 21, 2004 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this will be interesting
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 08:46 CDT
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*twitch* not what i expected! but still great!! i love it!! and i can not wait for the next udpate!!! plz make it soon!!! and much love never forget the love!!! the love is what makes the story so great and can really help in writing!!!! plz update soon!!! and i hope this love triangle or square if u include shippo.... works out!! and they can all live happily ever after!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 02:33 CDT
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cools beans.
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Oh gods!! I don't know whether to be upset over Kohaku or laugh myself silly over "the boys"!!! Although, given my reactions atm, I'd say laughing myself silly over the boys is winning ^_^ ROFL!!! Thanks for ending the chapter on a light note (IMHO). And I still look forward to the next chapter. hehe.. once you finally get this monster done, I'ma gonna be soooooo busy reading it through with no breaks ^_~
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