| "Breath No More" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: XxXToraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 22:40 CDT
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continue now, now, now, now, now! this is pretty good and im enjoying it so yea i would LIKE to continue reading it! now write, write, write, write, write! -grabs a brain control devise and points it at you- listen, and listen well... continue updating... update once a day... even more then tht if need be... ok i shall go now OH if you would like i could be your betta writer cause no offence or anything but ya gots a lot of messed up words and if thts just on purpose ok w.e but... well whatever bye bye now!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 18:44 CDT
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That's not good if her fathers here. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 18:21 CDT
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That was cool that see won. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hayley/Raven On: August 12, 2004 05:23 CDT
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HEY I THINK YOU WOULD BE REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEALLY GOOD AT WRITING MOKUBA-IS-CUTTING-HIS-WRIST-AND-SETO-FINDS-OUT KINDS OF STORIES YAY!! Yup. Oh man now im in the mood to read one of those stories. Crammit. IM HYPER AGAIN. Its 6:21AM and I havent gone to bed yet!!!!!!!!! Hmmm Im gonna try and write a Mokuba suicide fic. Hmmm I shall post it on here! Good Day!!! *flies away* _> 0_0. IM NOT CRAZY
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Reviewed By: Hayley/Raven On: August 12, 2004 05:18 CDT
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YAY!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *does a dance*
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 23:05 CDT
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I can't believe she almost killed herself, but at lest Seto was there. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hayley On: August 06, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I love it. You HAVE to update NOW. Hmmm Hey Ravens got an idea!!!! *Everyone gasps* errrshutup... Well anyway I think that you should have Drusilla and Seto get into a fight about her dad or something then have drusilla like,Run up to her room to get a really sharp razor then have Drusilla run to the park and start cutting her wrist and Seto finds her doing that and he stops her.That would be so sweet. Anyway yeah UPDATE SOON!! Sorry im hyper. I check this story everyday to see if you updated yet but you havent. :(( Any way PLEASE update!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:05 CDT
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Wow well at lest their together now. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 19:15 CDT
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Wow did she just kiss him because she was hyper or did she mean to do it. Anyway please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was a great chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:03 CDT
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Well it seems that they both like each other. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:06 CDT
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Short, but good. I wonder what's going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 19:46 CDT
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That was harse what Seto did. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 15:59 CDT
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This is good. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo i like this story!!! Drusialla has attitude!!! and she stood up to Kaiba, wow! this is very cool! update soon!!!
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