| "I am The Brother Of The Winged Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 09:29 CST
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hooray for ungrounding! anyway, ack!! wow, this IS a lot like my Taishi's Betrayal and Yami's Hate, Love, and Flaming roses....O.o;; Except it's more like mine cuz Kiba's controlling Taishi, not Kukumon being an imposter...9.9;; still yayness! update again soon pls!
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 09:15 CST
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oops in that chapter there is a isn't that should be an is. ^^; Sorry people!
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:40 CDT
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hehe yay. The sentences were FAR better than I could ever have made them so.........yeah I think I'm going to need help every fight I make in this story lol. I saved the notes and stuff but still.........^~
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Reviewed By: RW [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Milk, cookies, and riceballs? interesting combonation...yay me! when I was iming the sentences to you, I was worried how they would turn out. I still think I didn't use enough pronouns, but that's just me. ^.^ mmm...reese...^^;;;;;;; heh, well, glad to be of service! How else do you think I would rate the chapter?? ;p ttyl
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Reviewed By: RW (sorry I haven't been on in a while also) On: September 04, 2004 11:29 CDT
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Uh-oh, who was that with Zeron and what did he do to Zero?? Heh heh, nice chapter, just a few spot where grammer could have been better, but otherwise it's good. ^~
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Reviewed By: RW On: August 07, 2004 10:48 CDT
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Aww, poor DE. People come...they just don't review? Alright, they dun come, but I still know. v.v it's ok, if Kai ever gets back on, she'll review too. ^^;; Well, u using that song just pushes me to find another, which I wanted to do in the begin with. ;p Hey, at least u have one deticated reviewer. More will come in time. v.v
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 20:41 CDT
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Hey you can still use it. No one comes to my Fic anyway so they are never going to know! ^_~ But yeah Sorry!! But that was my first Evanescence song so I had to put it some where and was the only one that fit that chapter.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:26 CDT
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GRR, well there goes taht song. ^^;; No offense, I was planning on using that song for the last chapter of TB but now I'm not. Looks like that will postpone the end even further until I find a fitting song. ^_^ Oh, btw, we all know about Season two. ^^;;;; We even have pictures. Here ya go in case u dun have them: http://www.network54.com/Forum/message?forumid=10935&messageid=10885351 51 well, nice chapter. ^~ good angst, but we should prgress a little bit in the actual story some.
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 08:20 CDT
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YAY!!! Glad I put you in the mood lol. I'll get started on the next one when I have time today. ^_^
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 20:36 CDT
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Nicely done, I love evanesense! ^-^ WOw, this IS a mixture of mine and Yamis fics! O.o Well, it's original because it isn't Baku's bro/sis so...^^;;; Hope u update, I reviewed like I promised in the soap! ^~ (hey, if u want credit, i thinkt hat chapter put me in a closer mood to write another chapter of TB!)
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 17:25 CDT
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Grrr my stupid computer made a bunch of stuff mess up on this last chapter. Sorry everyone I'll try to fix that.
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 07:11 CDT
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You will see what Zerons problem is.^-^ And in some ways this story I guess could be a mix of both Neo Yami's and your together. I don't think it will be very much like them though.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:13 CDT
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^_^;; It's getting there. The first chapter needed more periods to end the sentence. A little bit in the details department, and it shoudl be coming along fine. So what's Zeron's problem anyways? Is this like Yami's Hate, Love, and Flaming Roses? 9_9;; Oh well, I'm just going to have to wait and find out neh?
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 08:26 CDT
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Yeah I don't think it's very good so far though. I still don't know what to put in the middle. 9_9
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Reviewed By: NeoYami (>.>) On: July 02, 2004 18:47 CDT
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Hey not bad. ^-^ Hope you continue! I wanna know what happens!
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