| "Piccolo's Family" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Chichiri's-Life-mate On: February 19, 2005 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tas-chan that was real good but your so mean to the boys lol. I mean sticking Goten with some bimbo come on, though I can see Chichi doing something like that lol Well I gtg it was still great keep up the good work Saraba. ^_~
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Title: MMMIIIIIIINNNNNNAAAAAAA!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yaoi-junkie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
w00t! Yay! Me love Truten! *Snuggles* If only in the show *sighs* Oh well! Update! Update! Update! LEMONS! Weeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: belong On: November 22, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful ... keep it real dude
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Title: Uhh...a bit scary...
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Up until the last part, the fic was really enjoyable. But instead of making the trio have a "loss of innocence" and start doing strange behavior, could you just make them really close friends? That would be much more normal for boys their age, and it would look really cute. Sorry if you don't like my review, but that's just how cool it would be. Anyways, I like the way you made Piccolo's emotions when he me the girl. It was true romance! Check out my fanfiction if you have time. I'm still looking for one more review in What Goes On in the Meeting Room(s)! Lata!
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