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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 25, 2004 20:29 PDT
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Awwwwwwwwwwww! LOVES IT! that was such a cute little chapter. It turned out wonderfully, Sue! hehehe So how many carots is this rock on Kagome's finger? I'm also excited that the diamond attack with the sword was real, hehe. Once again, great job! Don't change your writing style, ever!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 25, 2004 18:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
congrats on 300 reviews
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Title: Bwaahahahah!
Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I absolutly LOVE this chapter! I laughed all the way though it. Sorry, I have been a reader of this fiction from the beginning and this is the first time I'm reviewing. *chagrin* You see, I dont do well with reviewing every chapter, which is bad becasue then the author doesnt get to feel good about their work. Please forgive me. Your writing has improved so much in this story! I can see it in the way you write as you becoem more familiar and comfortable with the way its going. I wish that would happen with mine....Good job! *is sitting in the edge of her seat waiting to see the boys get in trouble*
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:50 PDT
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who doesn't like it when two men are 'blowing stuff up'?! [lmao] hooo. you KNEW that was going to end in competition between the two. [grins] i can't wait to see what Kagura does to them! update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 25, 2004 15:50 PDT
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hehe i realy love this chapter, so sessomuru can touch the sword cause he doesn't hate humans anymore,right?
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Reviewed By: kane-sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:32 PDT
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Diamond Spear something or other? Nani? Is that a real attack or is it something you made up for the story? If it's real, I need to find that episode. And Episode 35? Are you sure it was 35? Anyway, I love this story! Keep up the good work!=)
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 25, 2004 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two more chapters-- what a great treat!!! Yey! Inuyasha is reconsidering having pups, or babies. Oh god, that last one-- it was laughing my ass off good!!! hehehe Sesshoumaru provided quite a few of those laughs-- hiding his smiles behind his hand, claiming that he didn't fear his mate and lying about it--- Blowing up the forest with Inuyasha.. aaahahahahahahaha. LOVES IT! OH god, I cannot wait to see what happens next! What will they do with all those excess diamonds? lol. Permaybe they could fill a swimming pool with them and swim around in them because they are filthy rich! hehehehehe. Once again, that was an AMAZING two chapters! I'll be waiting! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, Inu Yasha so sweet, and soo dead! Cant wait to see what kagura does to him and fluffy! Cant wait for the next chapter, and i never knew there was a move like that...is it real? what episode is it? well whatever, talk to ya later bye
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Title: charming story
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm amazed--in a good way--at how quickly you've been updating this story! You've got some nice jeopardies, both supernatural (the negative effects of Kagome's wish; the panther youkai; the risks of the marking) and mundane (whether Kagome and Inuyasha should have children). And I'm charmed at the idea that Inuyasha was willing to change and adapt to life in modern Tokyo in order to be with Kagome. My main criticism is the lack of transitions between your chapters. You frequently set up some wonderful tension (sexual and otherwise), then suddenly jump forward weeks or days, leaving me wondering if Inuyasha just took a cold shower or something...it makes the pacing a bit choppy, and I think dissipates some of the IY/Kag romantic tension you're building. It's difficult to have Inuyasha barely able to restrain himself in one scene, then suddenly it's a month later and the unresolved sexual tension is still unresolved. I'm not saying, "jump to consummation," but I do feel the lack of something. The way things are written now, it's kind of difficult to figure out why they haven't consummated their relationship, given that they're wildly attracted, committed to each another at this point, and Kagome has been marked as Inuyasha's mate. Anyhow, please don't let this detract from the fact that I'm really enjoying the story, and that you're doing an excellent job with creating hooks at the end of each chapter to make me want to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: tessie On: August 25, 2004 14:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(holds sides) that was the funniest chapter! i loved it! them trying to outdo each other instead of killing each other! tessie
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 14:03 PDT
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Hahaha they had a contest lmao thats funny this was really good update soon !!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 13:24 PDT
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another really great chapter! i can't wait for more. --Netiri
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 25, 2004 13:22 PDT
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he had better have children with her!!! I mean don't get my f'n hopes up because thats f'ed up!!!!!!!! a litter of 6 would be just fine
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever, On: August 25, 2004 11:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu Yashas just loving the childrent more and more huh? Thats great! Cant wait for you to update again!
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Title: awsome!
Reviewed By: heather ann On: August 25, 2004 10:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story,I'm so hooked!
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