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"Kikyo's Haunted House" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ]
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 Title: fe-fe is mean;_ ;
Reviewed By: fe-fe is mean ;_ ;  On: January 20, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing keep up the good work! I like the part when miroku will get tortoured I think that will happen?Well anyway u r the best writer EVER!WOW I can never be that good at spelling or grammer. I thif *Fe-Fe is mean don't you think. This is Fe-Fe * bla bla bla bla bla BLA!!* Hey I really do sound like her right? well anyway please keep writing.
 Title: still?
Reviewed By: fe-fe^-*  On: January 20, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
y r u still not writing? Man, this is so boring! what kind of author do you think you are? Just waiting until an idea pops into your brain. Well guess what your fans are going to be so mad to hear that their lazy author still didn't write anything for the past 5 months!!! if you don't write another story I'm going to be through reading books or fanfics!Well I don't like reading books but I'm tring to get you mad so if this ain't buying then what i said will be true ok ? sry for all that yelling.
 Title: mad>_
Reviewed By: Yellowchild1/2  On: January 10, 2005 22:47 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
animegrl13 I am so mad! You never write anymore stories. You are my favorite writer!*cries*;_; you have to write the next chapter........
 Reviewed By: Inuyasha=antidrug  On: January 10, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think ur story was great but the songs.........? They sound too old skool.....ya know? the writing was great Just the songs it just ruined everything.......... I am sooooooooooooooooooo sry I had to say that.*cries*But ur story still rocked. I will hold my breath until you write the next chapter. Don't let me die!I can only last about an hour or two....................Or not....takes final breath *dies*
 Reviewed By: n/o  On: November 24, 2004 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
ur stories r still too short! Fix that problem and start updating be4 i turn into hulk and buy a new shirt everytime.
 Title: COOL!!!!
Reviewed By: Sanko-chan (Sango1on1)  On: September 02, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
me: COOL! Inu: You make me look like a baka for not being about to choose Kikyo or Kagome! All IY Cast: YOU ARE A BAKA!!!! Inu: Oh...hehehe Me: MORE MORE MORE!!!! It's so cool! Kag: Update soon... I guess... Kik: I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT- Me: *Kills Kikyo*(Sorry always hated her) Inu: Now I can choose! KAGOME, LETS GET HITCHED! Every one minus Inuyasha: O.o Me: Uh................Cool story!
 Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2004 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was interesting. You need to keep writing soon cuz I want to find out what happens. I want Koga to go first then Sango and Miroku and then Kagome and Inuyasha. best for last eh? But keep up the great work and keep writing cuz i cant wait to see what is gonna happen.
 Reviewed By: A-PERSON  On: August 12, 2004 19:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
MIROKU'S FIRST!!!! TORTURE THE PERVERT!!!
 Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Yellowchild1/2  On: July 29, 2004 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey,read ur story.I liked it. Please don't add any of the 1968 remixes,but I gotta hand it to ya, ya did great.Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the best story I've read so far,keep the good work.
 Reviewed By: fe-fe ^-*  On: July 28, 2004 00:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not to be rude or anything, but, I don't think Kikyo should sing in this FANFIC! It's DORKY and NOT funny. It's NOT cool, not cool at all! >:( No affence! AND THERE"S NO ACTION IN THIS STORY YET! I'm still waiting! Yup , No action at all! I don't think it's good!!!!! Well Here's another tip for you! Write Your Story longer! And whats with the complicated words! I don't understand a thing. And I don't bother looking in the dictionary everytime I see one. Well thats all! Oh And It's also Boring! * SNORING OUT LOUD DURING THE STORY *
 Title: YOUR COOL!!!!!
Reviewed By: Souta's sis  On: July 28, 2004 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I like your story!!! I would like to request a song! Would Kikyo torture the group with a song called..... Well .. I don't know what it's called but It fits perfectly with the cast! It goes a little something like this.." I'm still in love with you boy"..Yeah well I'm not that good at remembering title songs but if Kikyo would torture Inuyasha with this song It would be GREAT!!!! and thank you! Your story is Great! Please R&R ( Write the next chapter longer if you would . Thank You! ^_~)
 Reviewed By: Miriam+mimi  On: July 23, 2004 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And no m&m's!!!!!!!
 Title: Nice storie
Reviewed By: Jordon  On: July 11, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really really like ur story so far; I've read a lot of stories, but this one is quite creative with the haunted house, I also print them off, but not now I'm @ my dads; neways Keep up the awsome writing!
 Reviewed By: Sango#1  On: July 11, 2004 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Will u also write anymore fanfics?!
 Reviewed By: Miriam/ mimi  On: July 11, 2004 00:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, This is Mi-mi!!!!!!! Luv our story!! Can't wait to see what chapter 2's about!!It'll be gr8t. Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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