| "Sorry I'm Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Puppy973277 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 22:41 CDT
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I love it but there is so many big words anywas plz update.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 18:45 CDT
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KURAMA! I want Kurama! And now... let me tell you that I love the way you describe things. And it's angsty too. I love angsty CYOAs. Maybe because they relate to me a lot *shrugs* I dunno. Could you please make it a Kurama/You pairing? I hope that the people who vote like Kurama. Please UPDATE SOON!! *gives cookie* Bye!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: iplaywithfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 17:38 CDT
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wow! can't wait for the next chappy and i vote Hiei. ^^ ja!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf 85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 14:18 CDT
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I think you could have chapters for both Kurama and Hiei or make another story but with the one who wasn't picked for this one. Great story update soon.
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Reviewed By: FireAngel-Kayona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! another excelent chapter! I loved it! Oh, and I would love to be with Kurama! I love him! ^_^ Please make it Kurama...please? ^_^
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Reviewed By: jisAtsU_siLENcE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! that was really good ^^ .. i like it ... i vote for kurama =) .. i hope you update again soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 10:35 CDT
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Hiei pairing! Great chapter! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Jenni aka Kit On: July 18, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a very good second chapter! I liked the first one as well, but i wasn't able to review. Anyway, the pairing should be readerxHiei in my opinion. Though I like both of them... ^_^ anyway, good chapter, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 02:28 CDT
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Very nice fic, i vote Hiei as a couple, this story screams Hiei, no? well... I don't really have any ideas, sorry, but anyways, i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Angeline On: July 17, 2004 23:52 CDT
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I vote Kurama!
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 22:07 CDT
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it must be a hiei pairing!
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Reviewed By: iplaywithfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 13:35 CDT
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awsome you must update.. you hear? you must update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 12:30 CDT
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Great beginning! Please update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 12:14 CDT
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V(^_^)V I like it!
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Reviewed By: xXHakuRyuXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 11:29 CDT
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very angsty ^_^ great! I loved your style of writing as well.. it's very desciptive. update more!
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