| "Never Had a Boyfriend" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazybb03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 14:16 CDT
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I can't wait till JJ comes into the picture!! I think this should mostly be lime lime lime lime LEMON!! jest like the manga goes ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hatsune On: August 18, 2004 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Very nice, and it's actually flowing, so dun worry. And please, I need Lemon. The biggest and freshest lemon from your stock. (run away and hide with tomato face)
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Title: !YAY! No limits here
Reviewed By: Acid Rain Clouds (AkaTsuki) On: August 15, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found you im so glad i occasionaly come to M.M. when theres nothing else to read (no offense this jus isnt the first place i go to read fics) i read your stuff at FF but i dont remember what chapter you left off at but from what others are sayin it was ch.7 so i guess im being forced to be patient (not my strong point) well im glad your here rather than FF anyways cus now you can write as many lemon/lime scenes as you want *hint hint* well hope you upload your (new) chapters ~Aka
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Reviewed By: annushka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I thought I had already read these 3 chappies somewhere else before, probabaly on fanfiction.net from what I read in the other comments... well, this time, I'll leave a review though!!! just so that you know, I happen to really love good fics that put the characters in a different situation/story plot (is that called AU? I'm not sure...), they can be so creative and still keep our favorite characters in the story. so, long live "AUs"! and I really liked your fic the first time I read it... of course I still do! the story is really cute... the characters are quite true to what they are in the manga, though slightly changed of course for the purpose of your story... it just really nicely fits together (I like the idea of a denius drake...). I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!!! (__and do include a lemon if you feel like it!!!__)
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Keira On: August 13, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ff.net mean! make me cry! ok, so they dont really make me cry, but they come close to it an awful lot. so much for freedom of speech and freedom of press and all that stuff i learned in ELPS last year. anyway, i read this on ff.net, and absolutely loved it. it was one of the fics that i looked for every afternoon after school got out and when i went online and checked for updates, and every time i saw that there was a new chapter my day was made so much better. honestly. i dont get to review much because my parents only let me online for, like, thirty minutes a day, so usually by the time im done reading everything there isnt anymore time left. of course then i feel really bad, but eventually i find the time. like right now! ok, wow, i ramble alot, but anyway... way awsome! i kinda wish my highschool life was more like this, well... not exactly, but... my school sucks. a lot. its the highschool of your worst nightmares... and now that the new school year has begun, i like to have nice fics to read in the afternoons, your's especially. it makes highschool not seem as bad as it really is, and i have something to smile and giggle and talk to my friends about as we sit in class board as hell. ok anyway, great job! ill be looking foreward to reading more. big, big, big hugs!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: PIGZ On: August 12, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
go faster i read it on fanfiction.net you need to write more or i'll cry and lock my self in my room and my mom will be like "come out!!! what is it this time" and i'll be like "fanfiction need more" and my mom will have to call the cops thinking i'm on drugs and it will be your falt, but i Love the fic keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 22:37 CDT
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Oh, that was good. I like the younger versions of Dee and Ryo...you did quite a nice job with them *hands you a box of pocky*. And the scene in the bathroom; what a yummy little teaser. Looking forward to more. *hands you another box of pocky* Sorry that ff gave you lip *kicks ff in the shins*.
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Reviewed By: Isuki(2lazy2login) On: August 10, 2004 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!LOVE IT!! WANNA HAVE MORE!!! ^o^ Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shigures girl-942 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story on fanfiction.net. Please hurry and get past chapter 7. I still love this story!!!
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Cool Quartz On: August 04, 2004 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, write more... I am dying here waiting for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Willbur On: July 31, 2004 08:09 CDT
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I'm so happy to see that you're back on track again and decided to keep wirting your stories! ^_^ I've grown quite addicted to this story, so I'll hope to see the end of it one day... keep up the good work!
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Title: ^o^
Reviewed By: Isukichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!! and you know it!!!!! Thabk you for posting it here!!!!! Oh god I love it!! please update soon!!please
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see that you are writing again!!!!! Please hurry and update so I can see what will happen in chapter 7.
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Reviewed By: Vallora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:53 CDT
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YAAAAy you're back. Please Please Hurry and get past Ch 7. This was one of the few AU's that I REALLY liked. So have you though about putting a lemon in or not yet?????? 8-) Oh review, right. I like it. Write more.
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