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| "Untitled but really funny story" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: I'm probably late or don't stand a chance, but oh well...
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NAME: Amaya Takani AGE: 18 SEX: Female HAIR: Reachs the middle of Amaya's back, straight. It's dark brown, with two white streaks right on the front. EYES: Acid green. OUTFIT: A pair of loose black pants and a black chinese shirt, which has a white tiger right on the middle PERSONALITY: Amaya is a loner, but despite the fact she likes to be alone with her thoughts, she always appears when someone is in need. Amaya likes to make people smile, even when she isn't feeling to happy herself (she hates seeing people sad, just like she hates to talk about her own problems). Amaya is very independent and responsible. Paired with: (he's probably been choosen) Hiei, if not, Amaya can be alone. ABILITIES: Amaya as the vision and agility of an wolf. She can also use swords, daggers and a bow. HISTORY: Amaya's parents died when she was only 6, by a group of angry humans (yup, she's half demon just like her parents were.) and Amaya ran to Makai, where she faced the fate of growing all by herself. Amaya became a car-racer (on Earth), because it was the easy way to find money to survive (but Amaya lived in Makai). And, to protect herself, Amaya learnt how to use the sword, the dagger and the bow. EXTRA: Amaya is always wearing a silver chain, which as a white rose as a pendant. It had belonged to her mother (who recieved it from Amaya's father as a gift). --- In case you need more information, just e-mail me. Good luck with your fic!
| Title: I BEG YOU!!!
Reviewed By: kawaii_kunoichi05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Kari Asekawa Age:13 Sex:f Hair:violet, she wears in a low ponytail with bangs on her face Eyes:mint green Outfits:sleeveless midnight blue turtleneck, blue skirt which stops just above the knee with a blue short underneath. Personality:lively, always likes training, and always asking others for battle which gets her into trouble sometimes Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: NEJI OR GAARA!!!!! Abilities: the Asekawa death stance: a graceful dance while chakra strings come out from her fingertips encircles the victim's heart, then when the dance finishes, the strings suddenly tighten killing the victim. she only uses this in serious battles, if not she only uses her two katanas History (optional): clan massacred, i dont know why she is still happy after that tragedy, maybe she just hides her real feelings. Extra Info:hmm... has the tendency to kiss someone if they get to noisy and wouldnt listen to her when she says shut up. (only to guys) she does this so that the person would shut up. (to girls) she slaps them on the cheek. hehehe PLZZZZ CHOOSE ME!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Larka Sikla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:38 CDT
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Name: Maki Chui. Age:15. Sex: Female (no duh.) Hair: Black. Eyes:Sapphire Outfits: A tanktop saying "Your lips are moving, but all I hear is BLAH BLAH BLAH!" and black shorts. Personality: Always calm and never loses her cool. She hates people who think girls are weak, and hates girls that ARE weak. Paired with: Hiei!!! This is my number one choice! If not...Touya or Jin... Abilities: Fire of Hell, Hailing Fire (a storm of fire), telekinese(she can read minds and levitate/throw things around with her mind), Fire Strike (her katana is wrapped in flames), and Flaming Tornado. History: Her clan killed her parents (no idea why) and they shunned her away and she was trained to kill by assassins. Extra Info: She has black dragon wings. She is a Fire/Psychic Demon. She uses a bow and arrow and a katana. She as quick as Hiei and controls fire. Thanks! I hope you chose me! These things are always fun!
| Title: pick me!!!!!
Reviewed By: nikanaru (too lazy to log-in) On: July 30, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Kio Sekozawa~ Age: 14~ Sex: im a gurl~ Hair:medium short dark blue hair~ Eyes: royal blue eyes~ Outfits:A navy blue sleeveless tank top and a pair of knee high cream-colored cargo pants. Her Konoha forehead protector is tied around her forehead wears a pair of blue ninja sandals and a pair of black fingerless gloves.~ Personality: Kio is a very noisy and naughty girl. She is a cheerful, careless, has a child-like attitude and gets bored when it's comes to studying. She dosent show her soft part or whatsoever.... but does realy have one Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: SASUKE!~ Abilities: all types of jutsus (weapon: Katar)~ Extra Info: alwasy being teased by everyone... but is a good sport... sometimes?~
| Reviewed By: IYYYHPinay27 (not logged on) On: July 29, 2004 13:53 CDT
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About my pairing, it's Jin from Yu Yu Hakusho. Did I add that? Ok, now I'm really done. See you soon!
| Title: My character if you want her
Reviewed By: IYYYHPinay27 (not logged in) On: July 29, 2004 13:51 CDT
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Name: Ayume Kiraya Age: 16 Sex: Female Hair: Waist length black hair that is kept down with a few pieces of hair braided Eyes: Black Outfits: #1 Black and red kimono decorated with dragons that is cut in two pieces; a short top and a skirt #2 A black army print tank top with khaki pants and a chain belt Personality: Likes to poke fun at people, but knows when to stop and be serious Always with a smile on her face, she's almost always calm She is quiet and is always the peacemaker between friends She is smart and knows how to strategize for things, whether it be battle or trying to figure out a way to make Naruto shut up She has a sort of "little sister" personality Paired with: Jin Abilities: Able to create fire and weapons made of fire at will, is trained to use throwing stars, daggers, and bow and arrow. History: Parents are demons, she lives in Ningenkai, but visits the Makai often. Has many siblings and she is the oldest. Thanks for considering my OC!
| Title: Oh oops...
Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:55 CDT
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Forgot to add, her hair is long, usually let down, pulled back by a blue headband or that forehead protecter thing, or up in a ponytail. ^^ Sorry...as you can see, I'm a bit new on the Naruto thing...ehehe.
| Title: Uh...can I join?
Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:52 CDT
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Name: Mayko Shimizu Age: 15 Gender: Female Hair: Violet Eyes: Blue/Violet mixture Outfits: 1) Just like Sakura's only the top japanese/chinese shirt thingy is more of a bluish/violet color 2) Blue cotton shirt, black velvet pants, black tennis shoes and blue and black fingerless gloves Personality: A really calm person, always happy, and a bit on the slow side Paired w/: Sasuke, Naruto, Kurama, OC or single (Don't really care) Abilities: Cleverness, speed, jumps pretty high and scares people with her always happy personality (^^) History (Optional): Doesn't really know much about her past, that's why she's usually calm and happy. She doesn't really mind that she doesn't know much about her past because she always had this feeling that maybe something bad happened to her and she wouldn't want to remember it. Extra Info: She's really best with stelth, anything sharp (daggers, swords, etc) and the fact she LOVES to scare people with her always happy personaily. She can be a bit childish at times like prank a few people but she's can be mature for her age. ~*Good luck with this story and I hope I'm picked!*~ ^^
| Title: pleez let me in your fic!!
Reviewed By: Kai the Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 21:13 CDT
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Name: Kai Habits: Late sleeper,he likes to kill himself, but he has never succeeded. age:15 abilities: Left Eye sharingan, right eye byakugan. Demonic Ice Mirrors. Dressed: Sasuke's shirt, his headband tied on his knee like shinguard. raggedy jeans. Gender: male History: raised by gangsters in the water country, is related to Haku in some way, and wants to kill Sasuke. Favorite food: grapes and orange juice. and Airheads! Other info: Kakashi's books, he likes to steal them and alter them by drawing...well yeah. Looks: Shoulder length dark blue/black hair, really really pale and sunburns easily. Please update soon!
| Title: pleez let me in your fic!!
Reviewed By: Kai the Avenger On: July 28, 2004 15:42 CDT
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Name: Kai Habits: Late sleeper,he likes to kill himself, but he has never succeeded. age:15 abilities: Left Eye sharingan, right eye byakugan. Demonic Ice Mirrors. Dressed: Sasuke's shirt, his headband tied on his knee like shinguard. raggedy jeans. Gender: male History: raised by gangsters in the water country, is related to Haku in some way, and wants to kill Sasuke. Favorite food: grapes and orange juice. and Airheads! Other info: Kakashi's books, he likes to steal them and alter them by drawing...well yeah. Looks: Shoulder length dark blue/black hair, really really pale and sunburns easily. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: I would really like to be in your story, if posible On: July 27, 2004 22:34 CDT
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Name: Ang Age: 23 Sex: Female Hair: Cherry Blond, with a short boyish hair cut. Eyes: Dark Blue Outfits: Long Black T-shirt says "Normal People Scare Me", Dark, faded blue-jens. Plan sniker. Personality: Reserved, and cold when in larg crowld, but friendly, kind, witty and loveing in small friendly cricles. When provoked is aggressive, and will tell everyone how it is. She has a very short temper, that she can not control at times. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: Koenma from YYH or Gara from Naruto Abilities: Anger blast. Can give out an blast of energy, that can crush, smash, or desolve anything it tuches or comes into contate with. But this energy is uncontrolbe, and unproditable, Ang her-self can not control it, when she loses her temper. Ang also has the abilitie to see in the dark. History (optional): Ang is the youngest of two brothers and one sisters. There is nothing really spichle about her, other than her destrutive abilitie, when she loses her temper. Extra Info: Has to ware sun-glass when in a bright lited area, day or night. She is very loyle to her friends and family. She lives by one role, "Stay out of her way, and you will live to see morrning."
| Title: yay
Reviewed By: Heeroschibiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Angel Age:16 Sex:f Hair:blue/black Eyes:same as sasuke's Outfits:simaler to gaara's Personality:sweet yet feirce when it comes to those i love. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto:Gaara (naruto) Abilities:sand/copy ninja History (optional): Extra Info:fave food is strawberries.also wears a charm bracelet with a single flame charm on right wrist.on the charm is gaara's name with his nick name on the other side. Panda*lol*
| Title: pick me, if I'm not too serious..
Reviewed By: LavanderScent On: July 27, 2004 13:55 CDT
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Name:Aliya(ali) Age:14 Sex:female Hair: wavy chestnut with auburn streaks that reaches mid- back, small cat ears just barely visable. Eyes:brown with gold flecks. Outfits: black jeans and a form- fitting blood red t- shirt that says 'all stressed out and no one to choke.' she also wears black boots and lots of those thin elastic bracelets.(umm, I guess I need more than one)jade green halter top that says 'I am not A bitch, I am THE bitch' and baggy, cargo capri pants with a green dew-rag over her hair. Personality: she has a huge temper and can sometimes be quite the bitch! She could definently be considered the smart one, and she spends a lot of her time thinking of sarcastic comments. If all of this sounds too serious, I'll tell you her fatal flaw, PIXIE STIX!!! she can get seriously hyper and high off pixie stix, then she's kind of fun! Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: preferably Hiei, yusuke, teenage koenma, or Touya Abilities: demon speed as well as strength. She can also have little visions once in a while, as well as the usual demon claws and fangs. Extra Info: she is a neko (cat demon) and therefore DOES NOT like water or anything wet.
| Reviewed By: howlingwolff On: July 27, 2004 07:59 CDT
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Name:Kira Fushita Age:15 Gender:Female Hair:Long red(in a ponytail). Eyes:Ruby Outfits:A short black dress(comes to about midthigh)with small slits, a white scarf tied around her neck so it flows when she walks/runs, and black boots that come a little over her ankle. Personality:She is sweet and nice towards friends and family, but merciless and cold towards enemies. Paired with:Hiei Abilities:Move with blinding speed(like Hiei) and can use fire-based attacks. Weopons:Two daggers and shurikens. Extra Info:She is a ninja. For more info, my email is pichu457@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Kyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Kitsune Kyo Age: 14 Sex: Female Hair: Waist length, icy blue Eyes:icy blue Outfits: white chinese blouse with light blue trimmings and a matching skirt, blue slippers Personality: calm and reserved, but is kind a caring for friend but cold hearted to enemies. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: Sasuke, if not Touya Abilities: Controls ice and snow, immune to any type of poison and uses poison, and can control illusions Extra Info: Pale skin tone and can't think of anything more need anything email me at hino_mina@yahoo.com
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