| "Kagome's Realization" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 19:53 CDT
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She WHAT!! said SHE was SORRY! wow the bitch is sorry for something... now is that a I'm ssorry or a I'm soory but i don't give a dam kinda sorry....?
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:35 CDT
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I... am... going... to........GGGGGGGGRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! I HATE KIKYO!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU HAVE INU CHOSE KIKYO OVER KAGOME!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRRR!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 01:12 CDT
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it was a choppy beginning, there were a lot of grammer and spelling errors, but your story out shone the rough spots. I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: September 12, 2004 17:12 CDT
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Grrr! Why did Kikyo have to be involved? You know Kagome's soul would have passed on and the man would have revived her if Kikyo's *snakes* would not have brought her soul to Kikyo. That clay woman is bent on going to hell but she would be condemming KAGOME'S soul to hell also. If she was such a good strong miko she should have known it was not Inuyasha that day in the meadow and some other demon. And now she thinks she was cheated in her life and wants to be a 'normal woman' like she will ever be a normal woman now. She is still clay and dirt. It is not that Inuyasha is choosing Kikyo over Kagome because when it is all said and done I don't think Inuyasha would stay with Kikyo now. She says she is sorry but now sorry enough to give up Kagome's soul. If she really loved Inuyasha like she says she did then she would do whatever to make him happy if she loved him with her whole body & soul. Anyway great chappie update soon
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Reviewed By: cries On: September 12, 2004 11:44 CDT
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oh! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shjorpa On: August 31, 2004 19:54 CDT
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..and so the plot thickens.. :) What will poor Inuyasha do now? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter so I can find out. This is a great fic, thanks for writing it. Til next time /Shjo
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Reviewed By: Shjorpa On: August 31, 2004 19:51 CDT
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The plot thickens :) What will poor Inuyasha do now? I'm looking forward to finding out so much! This is a great fic, feel proud of yourself :) Til next time /Shjo
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 31, 2004 09:02 CDT
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Great chapter some how I knew it woudln't be that easy after he agreed to revive Kagome. So Kikyou has all of Kagome's soul now I wonder what will be next. It didn't sound like Kikyou became "alive" as in her body being flesh instead of clay. Update soon this is an excelent story.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 13:51 CDT
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Great story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
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Title: Thanx
Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Yeah! Thax for finally updateing :) i'm so happy. i'm glad the wizard said he would break his vow to revive kagome.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 28, 2004 02:55 CDT
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This is a cool story I am glad to see that man decided to help. Update again soon
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
too bad u didn't get many reviews on M.M.org.. i really enjoyed reading this story so far. i hope the wizard dude helps Kagome... I hope you get more reviews on ff.net :)
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:02 CDT
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too bad u didn't get many reviews on M.M.org.. i really enjoyed reading this story so far. i hope the wizard dude helps Kagome... I hope you get more reviews on ff.net :)
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:57 CDT
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too bad u didn't many reviews on M.M.org.. i really enjoyed reading this story so far. i hope the wizard dude helps Kagome... I hope you get more reviews on ff.net :)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 04:45 CDT
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I've been following this story on FF.net and I'm glad to see you moved it here because I like MM.org better. This is a really good story and I hope to read the next chapter soon. Thanks!
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