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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was beautiful. It was weird, actually feeling what Kagome felt because her emotions were so strong. The ending had me in tears though, it was bitter-sweet but the story was still very touching. I've never read a story like this on any site, especially one that actually made me cry. The parts when Kagome was sinking into her depression was tough to read but that's what made the story so excellent, because it seemed so real. And also finding out that Sesshoumaru was basically the last youkai was also hard to read. I can't wait to read more of your fics, especially if they are as touching as this one.
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Reviewed By: Shavaineth On: March 16, 2005 16:50 PST
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Well that was an achingly depressing story. So much unresolved pain... quite a well written story actually. I personally could have done without the lemony stuff but it was so interesting when I started it over on the fanfiction site I just had to come see the rest. Nice story.
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Reviewed By: Midnight Lady On: February 28, 2005 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaarrrrgggghhhhh!!!!!! holy crap that was amazing! normally i'm not a big sesshomaru and kagome fan, but oh golly gee whizzzz! i don't know how many hours it took me to read that whole story, but it was worth it. i loved your sesshomaru--so reserved and just fantastic. i loved your idea about memories. recalling the first part but nothing else. that just rings so true. i'm a wussy romantic at heart so i am a little disappointed at this ending--but i know had you done it any other way, you would have compromised the story, which would not have been good. so the bitter sweet ending will have to do. *sigh* i did enjoy it though. kudos to you.
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Title: Fuque
Reviewed By: sesshy's_jaded_samuri On: February 24, 2005 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was extremely well written...very enthralling...completely different from 90% of the other InuYasha fanfics that I have read. in short...I LOVE IT...GREAT JOB...ONE OF THE BEST ON THE SITE.
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Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer On: February 23, 2005 08:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I look forward to reading your other stories. Peace.
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: February 19, 2005 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic, however, why leave us all in the dark where Sess was in chapter 3???? I couldn't have been that forgiving, im sorry! That was truely mean to make Kagome believe many of the things she believed because of Sess. Yet, where would this story be without all the different plots and reasons!!
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Reviewed By: LoriUWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 22:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In this fanfic of yours i have found a new meaning to eternal love, and i thank you for it. This fic of yours as a meaning all its own, and i wish that our lives could be like Kagome's and Sesshomaru's. It is always a mystery as to what true love felt like, and in my opinion, i think Kagome has found it in your Fanfic.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 12:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that your writing is absolutely beautiful and compelling. The characters are mastered well in their protrayal, and you have a wonderful sense of drama and meloncholy throughout your entire story. I thoroughly enjoy reading it, and I see precious little mature, well written stories out there, especially believable Kagome and Sesshoumaru stories, and I'm ever so glad I read yours. Keep up the good work. Blessed be.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 16:25 PDT
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i dont know what to say, it's romantic, depressing, scary, happy, exciting, lusty, and just, perfect. i, i really cant think of anything to say. you have completely blown me away. there is no other way to put it. this is definatly my favorite fic. it's a sess/kag, it's a tear jerker, it's byronic(yes that is a word) and i guess thats all i have to say
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 12:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God!!*sigh*This is the most profund(sp?) story I've ever read!I cryed so many times trow it, and at the same time my heart hurt, like i could feel just the way she felt, you can really write feelings and I never thought it possible (at least not this way).It's really sad that in the end they can't be together (at leat not forever) nor can they have pups ;_; ....Well i congratulat you for the most beautifully written grief story ever written ^___^
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was a great story O.O i have not once got up from my bed (where my laptops sits) and now my chest and stomach hurt. ouch! lol:P but it was well worth it. wow this was a great story!!! you did a wonderful job with detele it's amazing how well this fic is written ^^ great job :P hope to that you might possibly write another ^^ -jinx
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Title: What to say...
Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read and read and read your story. I have absolutely never been so dumbfounded by a story before. This story hurt, it was a different hurt than saying I cried or I got angry or something like that. This story hurt because it is the truth of so many lives. I recognized myself and my life in this story and it gave credence to hurting is ok. I did cry, just so you know. I have not cried after a story since i read Where the Red Fern Grows, roughly a lifetime ago. Thank you, you are an amazing writer. What else can I say than... you are amazing.
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Title: Wonderful, just wonderful
Reviewed By: taylerkaler [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sat down and read it ALL at one time. That was a wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: Lease [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 05:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your your story again from start to finish. Once again when I finished I had tears in my eyes. A truly remarkable story, quite possibly the best I have ever had the sincere pleasure of reading. Literally I am at a loss.....any words of praise I can think of seem inadequate. Amazing work!!!
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Reviewed By: Ophelia Revived [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible work of wrenching angst and pure, beautiful redemption. The pain in the characters was palpable and so well conveyed that I found tears in my eyes. With the background of a seasoned reader and writer, I recommend this story to anyone who asks.
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