| "Black as Night, White as Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: BLAH1231532567 On: August 09, 2004 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm ....God I dont kno what to say.I guess ill start with saying Excelent job it compels me to read more Update soon . Nirvanafan1
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Reviewed By: chickenlover2_nli On: August 09, 2004 00:29 CDT
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CHICKENS WHERE ART THOU?! KISSY KISSY WIDDLE YASHA...YEES YOU DID!YEES YOU DID!NOW WASN'D DAT FUUN?! NAUGHTY KAGOME!BEING NAKED IN THE MIDDLE OF A ROOM...TSK TSK MY WIDDLE INU KINS CANNOT BE SEDUCED BY SIMPLE BODY GESTURES. ISN'D DAT WIGHT, WIDDLE BABY INU KINS?INU KINS?!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! YOU WIN KAGOME,BUT BEWARE FOR I WILL GET YOU...WITH CHICKENS!!!!!!!!!!!!^-^ HAVE A GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD DAY, NOW YA HEAR?
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Reviewed By: JerySpringrFAN [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, please update your story is hilarious.
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 05, 2004 10:23 CDT
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Ooh! They kissed! Well actually, he kissed her. BUt still! *hugging Kagome crazily* HE KISSED MY HALF SISTER! I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU KAGOME! Wonder what he's gonna do when she comes back! Please updates soon! Buh-bye for now!
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Reviewed By: kiawtha On: August 04, 2004 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix_of_the_Moon_nli On: August 03, 2004 23:51 CDT
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JUST TODAY I WAS OBSESSING OVER HOW STUPID AND DOPEY DISNEY'S VERSION OF SNOW WHITE WAS. HOW COULD SNOW WHITE AND THE PRINCE FALL IN LOVE IF THEY ONLY SAW EACH OTHER LIKE ONCE? STUPID DISNEY BELEIVING LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. GRRR HOW HE SPOILED THE NAME OF ENTRANCING FAIRY TALES. YOU CANNOT SOFTEN THE EDGES JUST FOR THE SMALLER. THEY NEED TO LEARN THAT NOT EVERYTHING IS FAIR AND BEAUTIFUL. THOUGH DISNEY'S SNOW WHITE WAS UGLY AND ANNOYING WITH THAT VOICE AND HER STUPID WEIRDO CRAP HAIR,AND HER HORRIBLE SINGING, AND HER HORRIBLE LAUGHTER AND WHY DOES DISNEY ALMOST ALWAYS MAKE THEIR VILLIANS UGLY? SURE IT PLEASES THE MIND THAT GOOD PPL ARE PRETTY AND "EVIL" PPL ARE UGLY BUT...wat was I sayin? oh right, We are...on fire We have...desires But one...is that way One Backstreet Boy is gay ,D me names kaede, child and i smell like an old peice of rotted meat. wat do ye smell like, child???? Die unworthy fools,I am coming through. -said from the mouth of sloow and stooped Hojo
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Reviewed By: chickenlover2_nli On: August 03, 2004 23:43 CDT
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:D :D :D :D :D ;D Could you PLZ include chickens...or Jaken? PWEESE? MHA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH AH HA HA AHDHSDFIUHDFI! YES, YES I SHALL HAVE THE CHICKENS SEDUCE HIM THEN I SHALL COME IN! OR I COULD ALWAYS DISGUISE MYSELF AS A CHICKEN AND...YES THAT'S WONDERFUL. EH, JAKEN? MHA HA HA HA HA HA AH AHUHSIUHQSIUDHWEILK! -solemn notes from Kikyo
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Reviewed By: kiawtha On: August 03, 2004 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a curse? how orignal :P update soon! even though i know i don't need to say it :P
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Reviewed By: kiawtha On: August 02, 2004 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o kikyou shall never be beautiful! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! and never shall she win yasha's heart...or so i hope..updaters sooners!
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Reviewed By: kiawtha On: August 02, 2004 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o kikyou shall never be beautiful! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! and never shall she win yasha's heart...or so i hope..updaters sooners!
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Reviewed By: kiawtha On: August 02, 2004 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o kikyou shall never be beautiful! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! and never shall she win yasha's heart...or so i hope..updaters sooners!
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Reviewed By: dena151 On: August 02, 2004 03:18 CDT
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yeah i agree with the whole kikyo thing she seemed like you a great person before she died i can see why inu fell in love with her. but i mean it was for all the wrong reasons just cause the were both outcasts doesn't mean they have to be together but at least they understood eachother. then kikyo wanted to change him i mean who wouldn't want a hott half demon for a husband. i mean how could she try to get rid of those cute ears!! n-eways that was all beyond my point. this is a really great story update soon!
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Reviewed By: ME On: August 01, 2004 10:51 CDT
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Interesting, so far!! I like how Kagome is not just a 'sweet young thing'--she's got some backbone!! Can't wait to see how the whole 'fairytale' thing unfolds as the story progresses--should be fun ^_^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kiawatha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I haven't actually read a mediaminer story for a few years. but now that I'm back, I'm glad. This story is very good. It has a bit of it's own originality even if it's based off of snow white. And must i say that Kikyou is one nasty bitch? she's gonna eat kagomes tongue? -or try :P- update soon though! this story is awesome!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW PLEASEUPDATE SOON!!!! IT WAS GETTING GOOD ^_^
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