| "Helping the Helpless" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: ihatepurplemonkeys
Reviewed By: ihatepurplemonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 13:51 CST
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Hikari Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:59 CDT
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OH!!! you have got to update!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 19:27 CDT
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need more update soon.
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 03:01 CDT
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Awesome story!!!!!! Update soon!!!!
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Title: the story in which i have just read
Reviewed By: The_PUNK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story! write more or i'll pummel u with a monkey wrench!!!! ummmmm sorry(sugar for breakfast, doesn't mx with my hyper active brain which iz always on the go, like a car, i likecars theere sooo.... sorry)but seriouslyv i'll hurt u
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 08:38 CDT
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great story..luv it...hope to see more chapters up soon..keep up the good work
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Title: tryin to help out new writers with reviews
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 05, 2004 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i like this story and its very good for a begining.You got eveything rite about the cutting thing.Of course i would know sence i do it so you get and a there but you dont bleed alot as u said unless i misunderstood how many cuts she has.8 cuts will bleed alot though but i dont think u said how many she had.Sry if u said it and i missed it!! But i like this story and i would like to read the next chapter please so update!!!UPDATE!!! Its good believe me ive read alot of storys and your is....good. I think so at least!! ^_^ yup yup very good!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress not logged in On: August 04, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.......... thats really good!!!!! i hope u update soon i can't wait to see what happens!!! i like that u put alot of detail into the story way to go!!!! ^_^!!!! Ja!!!
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