| "Halloween Par-Tay" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUEAL SEQUEAL! *(If I spelt that right!)* ^_^ THankies for the update
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Reviewed By: c0nfuslon On: September 11, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
thas confusing t read becuase of all the @ and and especially the ='s but otherwise it was good.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 On: September 09, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad work my freind. Some grammar mistakes and the spelling needed work. All of the +=@ symbols throughout the story made it a pain to read. But overall a very enjoyable fanfic.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love your story!
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story but I like it, Keep going, use that brain of yours, if you can come up with this, you can do anything.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took me a while to review... my comps been acting all crazy and shit.. Anyway, i must say this is quite the improvement, i really like this, it's well made, good grammar, nice style of writing and the lemons are more hotter too! All in all, excellent job, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One On: September 06, 2004 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, That was just, Woah. Got to go. Keep Writing, I need to read the next chapters. This is awesome better than i could ever do, but i can try, Keep writing.
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Title: Inu and Kag NEXT
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome NEXT!!!! PLEASE! ^_^ BTW Rin and Sess was a yummy Lemon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: XxSaNgOxX On: August 30, 2004 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... i like the way that u put every1 in the story and hooked ppl up. i also like the hookin up ya did, and the truth or dare part was funny and unique. i cant wait 2 read about what happens w/ inu~kag. it would be funy if koga walked in on em and 'interrupted' em. i like ur stories, they r really gud. kep up the lemons and limes~.^.... O!!!! and the good work. lol. UPD8 PLZ!!!
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Reviewed By: lunatrick114 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is pretty good..... the whole "=" thing is fucked up... probably should fix that. is it just me, or was something left out between the last chaps? i don't remember reading anything about inu rejecting kikyou... i'm confused. lol. but other than that, it's a good story. keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dana G On: August 26, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol i love the story, just whats up with these thigs '=' they drive me crazy, well over all good story, please update soon. Ja ne
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! I liked it! I am all about Inu/Kag pairing! ^_^ Ja`ne
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
you're right, miroku's got a cheesy idea...but im waiting for Inuyasha and Kagome's lemon! Woohoo!
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Reviewed By: wowzer On: August 20, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another chapter! awsome, well not a chap, but hey just to let you know! kagome/inuuyasha, sango/miroku, and sessho/rin, no others! cant wait!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wowzer On: August 20, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
back again!! i love this chapter! miroku is so funny! cant wait fo rthe partay! okay, kagome/inuuyasha, sango/miroku, and sessho/rin thats all folks! cant wait! write soon!!!!!!!!!
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