| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 23:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just began your story yesterday, and now i am almost half finished. i can't believe how much i like this story. i swear there really aren't enough good fics out there. especially sess/sango fics. i dont think i have ever even heard of one. very unique pairing! but, i must say,"i dont hate it". because of you, i've found one of the best fics out there right now. so, thank you for being an embarassingly HUGE inuyasha fan like myself. it's wonderful fanfic authors like you that make my day(s)?! =P
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Title: Sesshy fan
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You Rock!!! I love it pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassss update soon.
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Queen of Hearts On: April 26, 2005 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am most depressed because you did not really finish your fic entitled Youkai and the Exterminator.... you left it hanging with no end!! Please finish it, its an awesome story... u captured Sessh sooo well and I would hope he would get the chance to rip Naraku's head off ^_^ Please continue it!
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: New Watcher On: April 17, 2005 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done wonders with a difficult pairing. It's been a joy to read. Keep up the excellent work.
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Title: Yay! New chappie...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: April 14, 2005 18:40 PDT
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Oh my...Sesshoumaru attacks Kohaku?! Somehow, I don't think that that was really Sess... Just because he is in the current habit of sending detachments and swarms of lesser youkai, we often forget that Naraku is a shapeshifter. That's how he eluded Miroku's grandfather in the beginning and that's why Miroku couldn't tell InuYasha at the start what Naraku looked like. I have a strong feeling that this "Sess" is only Naraku in disguise...preying on the emotions of others in some twisted game of his making. He could have taken the shard from Kohaku at that time, but where would the fun be in that? There is one question I do have; where is the real Sesshoumaru right now? I can't imagine that he would stray too far from Sango and unborn pup. Not now that he understands better how this mixed-heritage pregnancy will effect his human mate. -- As always, rivited by your storytelling!
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Title: Foul Evil Shape shifting Liar
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGrrrr!!! Who was it?! Naraku, that other one, that I'm thinking is someone, but I don't want to say cause I don't want it to be true even though It would be so dramatic if it was...ooh ooh ooh I can't stand it, why oh way must my most favorite storys always end in unbearable cliffhangers...if I didn't have school to occupy my time I'm sure I'd suffer a horricfic death from having to wait, even if the waiting only made each chapter that much more devine...Your muse is indeed a wonderful one and I hope the the devine creature visits you soon. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat bitting my nails waiting for more of this story and for more of Possesion...DAAII SUKI HONTO NI DAI SUKI DESU YO
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Reviewed By: InuKaglover815 On: April 13, 2005 18:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter, but I gotta a question. It wasn't Fluffy that attcked Kohaku was it? It was Naraku pretending to be him, and without a demon's sense of smell Kohaku couldn't tell the difference. N-ways, I can't wait for the next chap. u picked a very good spot ta stop at, and fer that I complement u.
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Title: chapter 43
Reviewed By: demetz (not signed in) On: April 13, 2005 17:32 PDT
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Either Sesshomoru has stepped far away from the character you've established him as or Naraku has disguised himself. I'm hoping its the latter or something along those lines or you're looking at consistency issues. You picked a good place to introduce the details of Rin's history. However, a little less side story and a little more plot progress would be nice at this point.
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Title: Had more to say about Ch. 42
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 09:29 PST
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(apparently I had more to say, LoL) I was so proud of InuYasha for apologizing to Sango for his brash words said in the heat of anger. He's come a long way since the beginning of their quest. Matured. (we'll forgive that little hentai-ish thoughts about Kagome, only natural with the new level of their relationship. That Monk has finally rubbed off on him. LoL) When he pledged that he would be there for Sango's baby, to not let he/she grow up lost and alone, hated and reviled like he did...I could almost hear the intensity of his promise. My pride in our doggie-boy just grew even more. And then he turns around an cusses out Jano! Hehehe, gotta love it!! But booting Shippo *gasp giggle guffaw* from the sleeping bag was priceless! -- I still beleve that Kikyou's assessment is wrong. I don't think that powers can be taken away so easily...especially powers as strong as Kagome's. When Kikyou's powers seemed to wane after falling in love with InuYasha, it could have been because of her distraction with her new realtionship (you need concentration for the work she did) and possibly a softening of her resolve. If your heart isn't in it, you begin to question 'why' your fighting and 'if' it's the right thing to do. So many doubts...that eat away at your will and subsequently diminish your confidence. -- Well, we will see.
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 12:00 PST
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great! i can't wait untill the next chapter! please hurry up and update again soon! please?!!
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Title: Sorry for taking so long to review...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 07:21 PST
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Kagome is agonizing over her supposedly lost spiritual powers. I'm wondering how much of what Kikyou told her is actually true or just what Kikyou believes to be true. There is 500 years between Kikyou and Kagome's worlds...500 years of development and progress...and whose to say that physical 'purity' actually dictates whether or not you can be a Miko? The mind is a powerful thing and mostly a mystery about how it works. One thing is very true; if you believe something, the mind can make it happen. For example: in medical tests, people given sugar pills but told they were something else, the majority of the subjects actually experienced the effects that they were expecting...because they beleived it would. A person can 'will' them selves well and they can 'will' themselves to death. Why not 'will' yourself powerless if you so beileve?
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot! i feel honored! i was the first to read chapter 42! awesomeness! wonderful, wonderful writing! keep up the frigin awesome story! just what is going to end up with houshi-sama and aiko is one question i wanna know...^_^
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Title: aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh run for you lives
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its Naraku, Its Naraku, Kohaku run...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh *runs around the room in a craze* Its not Sesshomaru... Man it seems like everyone thats writting good fics suddenly found lives, and know I don't have anything to read *sob* please oh muse, steal their minds back to their keyboards. There is still lots of people out here in the boring world that don't have lives and need these beautiful storys to fill up the void.
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Title: *Staring fixedly at screen...riveted*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 10, 2005 09:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's so easy to get sucked into the story you are weaving. I'm glad InuYasha worked out some things in his head. I loved how he played guinea pig for Jano's stew! LOL - When Kohaku finds Sess, and-Sesshomaru smiled at him, a cruel twist to his mouth...- I have a feeling, because of your choice of words...that that isn't Sesshoumaru. This wouldn't be the first time that Naraku has assumed another's form to trick them. But that would also mean that Naraku is behind Kohaku's "spectral visitation" from his desceased father. Naraku had poor Kohaku in his clutches for so long, even without the controlling aspects of the tainted shard, it's not too farfetched to think that Naraku has some other lingering hold on the boy...and mind games are right up that nasty, fabricated-hanyou's alley. --- I'm really loving this epic-legthed tale. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 09:28 PST
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Ah, Naraku's going to play brainball again? That makes sense, especially considering that Sango and Fluffy don't have much of what I'd call "trust." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hmm. I wonder if Kikyo is right about Kagome losing her powers. I wonder if it would be all at once or slow. I wonder if Kagome is different -- if Kikyo would have lost them but Kagome wouldn't.
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