| "a new life" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:25 CDT
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You got the format thing down! Yay! Well now that I'm back you need to update!
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Reviewed By: evilJuice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 11:11 CDT
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WHY DID YOU SHOVE BILL UP RYOU'S ASS?!!!!! err...sorry....but why?!!!!
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Reviewed By: brokensoul13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 22:36 CDT
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PATTY! HI IT'S ME! YOU KNOW ME! YOU GO TO SCHOOL WITH ME! CAN YOU TELL IM SUGAR HIGH?! HE HE HE! I LIKE YOUR STORY! A LOT! IM SO PROUD YOU PUT UP A STORY HERE! GUESS WHAT!? BILL THE 6 FOOT KANGAROO IS UP SOMEONE ELSES BUTT, GUESS WHO!? RYOU! HA HA HA HA HA! now that my sugar high has ended seriously, update ^_^ for me? your bestest friend?
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:01 CDT
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I am so sorry I haven't been able to read your story!!! But I finnaly did... hmmm.... Koir already told you the browse thing... do you write the story on Note pad or word perfect? Just a question.. well update soon!!!!! Please!!! great story!!!
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Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Yay!!! You updated!! Um.. I for my stories I write my story in word or some program, save the chapter and then click the browse button and click the file where I have the story saved. Um.. I hope that helps. Well that seems like it, hope that helped and Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: black_leopard_9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:39 CDT
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IM NUMBA 10! wheee! Oh yes, you may have to put ur sentences in paragraphs, and stuff like dat [like what Master Duelist Kaori said] and i dont wanna be mean either [i dont like being mean, except to ANZU! HAHAAHAA! Sorry] anyhoo this story is preeettyy coo, if ya ask me! Plz up-date soon!!! Kay? Rock On! ~Black Leopard~
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Title: AGAIN I MUST REVIWE!!!
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 11:05 CDT
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Wow good chapter!!! I love it!!! I was reading before but then I had to get off!!! so update soon!!! Oh and do you like Anzu!!?? because I don't!!!! I hate her to the wery core I being.
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Reviewed By: evilJuice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 10:10 CDT
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thanx for the help ^.^ it doesn't seem mean to me
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Title: Reviewing yet again!!!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 21:19 CDT
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I am reviewing yet again!!! Muwhahahaha!!!! er... yeah.. anyways you have a very good story and plot, there is just about two little things you can do to make your story alot easier to read. First try making paragraphs no more than like 8 sentences long. When you have a huge paragraph its sort of hard to read. And second when some one says something, start a new paragraph, and put who said it. You can make up lots of things to make it interesting such as Ryou said very quietly, or Bakura said coldly, glaring at you, or you said looking very confuzzled. I hope this isn't coming across as mean, it will just help your story be easier to read and everything. Well look forward to your next update, Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: evilJuice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 15:06 CDT
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Master Duelest Kaori just read my fanfic and reviewed...breathe..breathe...breathe....darn it i can't breathe!!!!
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Title: Reviewing again!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 12:42 CDT
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I'm reviewing again!! Okay, just wanted to tell you that this story is great and I hope you get alot more reviews as you update. Oh and I liked your "its sleepy time" in your story. I think I used that line in my story too, but its a great line either way! Well thats about all, Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: evilJuice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:59 CDT
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O.O ppol actually reviewed my story....my face is red right now....i can't believe it...umm sirius the dark angel i'll let u noe
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Title: oh and forgot this.
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hear voice inside my head too.... they tell me stuff like... watch Foamy... or RP (role Play) and stuff. If ya need an oc just e-mail me!!! and I love Evanescence!! oh and this *gives Ryou plushie with cute cat ears and tail* isn't it cute?!? Update soon!!
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Title: oh poor you!
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 01:52 CDT
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Oh man it must suck for you to have 2 reviwers.. well i wanted to reviwe to tell you this story rules!!! Please update soon!!!! and yes Pliz-E is here with me. Pliz-E: *holds up pills* Extara medication for all!!! I don't pop pills I eat them!! Needle in your eye. Sigmata is bad! Okay update soon!!
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Title: First review!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 18:48 CDT
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I'm your first reviewer!!!! Anyways your story is great from what I read and Evanescence is awesome! So update soon! *gives cookies*
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