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"Effects on You with the YYH Gang" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ]
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 Reviewed By: Ciral_Fox [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2004 22:19 CDT
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I wanna be in it!! plzzzzzz?? ok Name: Yukiko Hanari Age: 16 Height: 5 ft 1 in. Looks: silver hair a bit below her shoulders and deep saphire eyes Clothes: she wears a dark blue long sleeved shirt with little silver stars on them with sliver baggy pants and a dark blue chain on one side. Weapon: Shards of Ice(same exact to Sards of Winter from Touya ^^. she's Touya's sister) Ice katana and for extreme cases, she can make a blizzard and anyone in the 2 mile radius of her will die, yes EVERYTHING and EVERYONE will die. Food: Pringles Sour Cream and Onion and chocolate milk!( I dun like sodas) Personality: nice and calm RARELY gets angry. Is flexible with anything(like u tell her to go and get sumthing for her, she'll do it BUT she'll ask why should she get it but does anyways) (I hope that made sense for ya! ^^;;) Song: hmmm.. wow Idk what to put for a song... O.O I know!! ocean Avenue by Yellowcard!! ^____^ ok thanks for reading this! ja!
 Reviewed By: Sakura_Mikomi [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2004 18:25 CDT
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 Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2004 14:15 CDT
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glad to get so many reviews
 Title: Ending part of my song (And mm.org DID let me sign in,don't be fooled,I'M IZUMI PRINCESS OF DARKNESS UP THERE WITH THE SONG NUMB!!!!!! You've got my OC in there too!)
Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've become so numb........| I can't feel you there.........| (I'm tierd of being what you want me to be)| Well there ya go! That's MY kinda song!!!! Oh this "|" Was there to show you when a line ended and I changed my mind about the bishies I ONLY WANT SESSHOMARU! But if you CAN make it Jin WOULD be nice.......BUT I ONLY REALLY WANT SESSH! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!! JA NE!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
 Title: Here's a song!!!!!!!!!! (Part one)
Reviewed By: Izumi (a.k.a Izumi Princess Of Darkness,Mediaminer.org won't let me sign in for some wack reason.....) [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2004 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NUMB I'm tierd of being what you want me to be| Feeling so faithless| Losst under the surface| Don't know what you're excpecting of me| Put under the pressure| Of walking in your shoes.......| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| Every step that I take is another mistake to you...| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| I've become so numb| I can't feel you there| Become so tierd| So much more aware| I'm becoming this| All I want to do| Is be more like me| And be less like you.........| Can't you see that you're smothering me.....| Holding to tightly| Afraid to loose controal| 'Cause everything that you thought I would be| Has fallen apart| Right in front of you...| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| Every step that I take is another mistake to you.| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| And every second I waste is more than I can take!| I've become so numb| I can't feel you there| Become so tierd| So much more aware| I'm becoming this| All I want to do| Is be more like me| And be less like you| And I know| I may end up failing too| But I know| You were just like me with someone disapointed in you......| I've become so numb| I can't feel you there..| Become so tierd| So much more aware| I'm becoming this| All I want to do| Is be more like me| And be less like you| I've become so numb..................| I can't feel you there| (I'm tierd of being what you want me to be)| I've become so numb.
 Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 23:29 CDT
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 Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 21:53 CDT
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 Title: Please Pick Me
Reviewed By: Pharaoh-Yami-Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 20:49 CDT
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Food: Pizza, Cheese Sticks, and Dr. Pepper I'm not very creative Song: The Dance by Garth Brooks Character: Name: Larien Orofarn Age: 15 Hair: Long light brown hair Eyes: bright green Skin: Pale Personality: Cheerful and very polite. She always uses her manners. Clothing: She wears black denim jeans, a horse shoe ring with turquoise in the center of the horse shoe on her right hand on her ring finger, an orange tank top, a pair of roper boots (look like cowboy boots), with a necklace that has a silver scarab pendant, and two arrowhead earrings that have a piece of turquoise is the center. Weapons: Well she always carries her knife. It's hilt has amber at the top and on the blade there is weird writing on it. Paring: Hatsuharu, not black haru, but white haru.
 Title: sequal
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 15:57 CDT
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there will be sequals to my stories
 Title: ...
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 15:56 CDT
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 Reviewed By: Saku_Chan  On: August 15, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! Kurama kissed me!^__^v I gots more songs!!! I dunno if ya want 'em plz tell me if ya do. I'll be here all day. Other Persona(Arisa):All that soda has gone to her brain.-_-;; Saku:You bet^__________________^
 Title: hey ppl
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 13:33 CDT
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don't forget the song!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Saku_Chan  On: August 15, 2004 13:22 CDT
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food and drinks: sushi, odon and lotsa coke(the drink, I never get hyper)Song:Failure's not Flattering by NFG Name:Sakura Mikomi hair:Shoulder length light brown, bangs above eyes, eyes:normally ocean blue eyes (red when angry), Age:15, Height: 5'5", clothes: blue shorts or jeans, black, red or blue chinese shirts, weapons:tonfa blasters(like that girl on Rave Master), and bow and arrows, personality:nice person, quiet, kind-hearted, takes a lot to get her mad and when she does she gets black cat ears and a tail that disappear when she calms down(eyes change back too), when angry she's like Hiei. Bishe:(I only want one)Kurama!!!!Plz!!!!!
 Title: My character part one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN I BE IN IT PLEEZ!!!!???????
Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Here's the food and drinks:Sake (Sa-key),and some fried noodles! And here's my character!: NAME:Izumi Tanashi AGE:Well she's around 79 years old but she looks like a 17 year old HAIR:Waistlength dark red hair with triangular shaped bangs falling into her face,and tied atthe back in an extreamly low ponytail(Like Sango's,or Kikyo's) Eyes:Blood red whe demon, Siverish grey when human. SKIN COLOUR:Incredibaly pale,almost white. CLOTHES:Well she wears somthing more or less like Kenshin's clothes, the top is like a yukanta's and is sleevless and a little tight,and the bottom is like Kenshin's clothes,only Dark blue,she wears ninga gloves like Sango's on her arms. PERSONALITY:Quiet,mild-tempered,and minds her own buisness,she's also a terrific fighter! LIKES:Training,being by herself,silance,darkness,and looking at the stars and moon. HATES:Traitors,pain,and haveing the ones she loves hurt. WEPONS:Daggers,twin swords,and whip. Bishie:Only one is okay fer me,Sesshomaru,or Jin if not. WELL THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! JA NE!!!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
 Reviewed By: Houshi_Grl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 01:56 CDT
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Ok,here's my character! Name:Harukigi(Goes by Yami) Hair:Black with red and white streaks with bangs slightly overing her eyes Eyes:Indigo Age:15 Height:5'4 Clothes:Gothic,ALOT of black,red,fishnet,baggy jeans Weapons:Twin katana's,boomerang Can I really have two to bishes?!I want Miroku and Naraku! Need more info?My e-mails Miroku_Hentai_Grl@yahoo.com!
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