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"Effects on You with the YYH Gang" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ]
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 Title: Here's a song!!!!!!!!!! (Part one)
Reviewed By: Izumi (a.k.a Izumi Princess Of Darkness,Mediaminer.org won't let me sign in for some wack reason.....) [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2004 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NUMB I'm tierd of being what you want me to be| Feeling so faithless| Losst under the surface| Don't know what you're excpecting of me| Put under the pressure| Of walking in your shoes.......| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| Every step that I take is another mistake to you...| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| I've become so numb| I can't feel you there| Become so tierd| So much more aware| I'm becoming this| All I want to do| Is be more like me| And be less like you.........| Can't you see that you're smothering me.....| Holding to tightly| Afraid to loose controal| 'Cause everything that you thought I would be| Has fallen apart| Right in front of you...| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| Every step that I take is another mistake to you.| (Caught in the undertow,just caught in the undertow)| And every second I waste is more than I can take!| I've become so numb| I can't feel you there| Become so tierd| So much more aware| I'm becoming this| All I want to do| Is be more like me| And be less like you| And I know| I may end up failing too| But I know| You were just like me with someone disapointed in you......| I've become so numb| I can't feel you there..| Become so tierd| So much more aware| I'm becoming this| All I want to do| Is be more like me| And be less like you| I've become so numb..................| I can't feel you there| (I'm tierd of being what you want me to be)| I've become so numb.
 Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
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 Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
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 Title: Please Pick Me
Reviewed By: Pharaoh-Yami-Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Food: Pizza, Cheese Sticks, and Dr. Pepper I'm not very creative Song: The Dance by Garth Brooks Character: Name: Larien Orofarn Age: 15 Hair: Long light brown hair Eyes: bright green Skin: Pale Personality: Cheerful and very polite. She always uses her manners. Clothing: She wears black denim jeans, a horse shoe ring with turquoise in the center of the horse shoe on her right hand on her ring finger, an orange tank top, a pair of roper boots (look like cowboy boots), with a necklace that has a silver scarab pendant, and two arrowhead earrings that have a piece of turquoise is the center. Weapons: Well she always carries her knife. It's hilt has amber at the top and on the blade there is weird writing on it. Paring: Hatsuharu, not black haru, but white haru.
 Title: sequal
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
there will be sequals to my stories
 Title: ...
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
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 Reviewed By: Saku_Chan  On: August 15, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! Kurama kissed me!^__^v I gots more songs!!! I dunno if ya want 'em plz tell me if ya do. I'll be here all day. Other Persona(Arisa):All that soda has gone to her brain.-_-;; Saku:You bet^__________________^
 Title: hey ppl
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't forget the song!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Saku_Chan  On: August 15, 2004 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
food and drinks: sushi, odon and lotsa coke(the drink, I never get hyper)Song:Failure's not Flattering by NFG Name:Sakura Mikomi hair:Shoulder length light brown, bangs above eyes, eyes:normally ocean blue eyes (red when angry), Age:15, Height: 5'5", clothes: blue shorts or jeans, black, red or blue chinese shirts, weapons:tonfa blasters(like that girl on Rave Master), and bow and arrows, personality:nice person, quiet, kind-hearted, takes a lot to get her mad and when she does she gets black cat ears and a tail that disappear when she calms down(eyes change back too), when angry she's like Hiei. Bishe:(I only want one)Kurama!!!!Plz!!!!!
 Title: My character part one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN I BE IN IT PLEEZ!!!!???????
Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Here's the food and drinks:Sake (Sa-key),and some fried noodles! And here's my character!: NAME:Izumi Tanashi AGE:Well she's around 79 years old but she looks like a 17 year old HAIR:Waistlength dark red hair with triangular shaped bangs falling into her face,and tied atthe back in an extreamly low ponytail(Like Sango's,or Kikyo's) Eyes:Blood red whe demon, Siverish grey when human. SKIN COLOUR:Incredibaly pale,almost white. CLOTHES:Well she wears somthing more or less like Kenshin's clothes, the top is like a yukanta's and is sleevless and a little tight,and the bottom is like Kenshin's clothes,only Dark blue,she wears ninga gloves like Sango's on her arms. PERSONALITY:Quiet,mild-tempered,and minds her own buisness,she's also a terrific fighter! LIKES:Training,being by herself,silance,darkness,and looking at the stars and moon. HATES:Traitors,pain,and haveing the ones she loves hurt. WEPONS:Daggers,twin swords,and whip. Bishie:Only one is okay fer me,Sesshomaru,or Jin if not. WELL THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! JA NE!!!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
 Reviewed By: Houshi_Grl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2004 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok,here's my character! Name:Harukigi(Goes by Yami) Hair:Black with red and white streaks with bangs slightly overing her eyes Eyes:Indigo Age:15 Height:5'4 Clothes:Gothic,ALOT of black,red,fishnet,baggy jeans Weapons:Twin katana's,boomerang Can I really have two to bishes?!I want Miroku and Naraku! Need more info?My e-mails Miroku_Hentai_Grl@yahoo.com!
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