|"Adolescent Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]|
| Reviewed By: Brian On: November 29, 2002 01:03 CST|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
This is a nice short story exploring a scene; it does a good job of introducing the concept, and then stopping before the joke gets old.
| Reviewed By: rei inverse On: August 27, 2001 13:40 CDT|
Wow.. this is good. sorry about picking on you befor, but now that I can read it, I must say it is very good!