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Title: Ah- I got the "Error: Missing Information! Who are you? Please enter your name" again
Reviewed By: Aitu-- thought I was signed in but not On: September 30, 2004 10:02 PDT
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ONLY ONE CHAPTER A DAY?! What ever are we going to do, hehe. Just kidding-- I'm sure that some how, someway, we will all survive. Fabulous chapter. I can't even begin to express how much I loved it so! So happy that the monk-in-pain red made its return. And the poor math book- RIP. Lots of laughs, lots of tender moments, and definitly lots of "awwww's." Can't wait for more! I'll just hum some onhold music until the next update-- Until then, Aitu
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Reviewed By: jc On: September 30, 2004 08:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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really a good pic. I loved how you got inuyasha and kagome together in the beginning by making kagome following Inuyasha, THAT i thought was a brilliant bit! I also luved how Inuyasha uses his ears as a bargaining tool because it would be so like him to do so, but i think Kagome would have been a bit more hesitant about Inuyasha reading her thoughts about him. Cant wait till you get to the meeting Kikyou part in the diary though! Keep it up and I look foward to more chapters (hint hint, make a nice long story :D) and more recent updates!
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Reviewed By: peachykeen(not signed In) On: September 29, 2004 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so sweet, everytime i read these romantic and adrorable moments it brings a smile to my face, you're doing such a great job with this story! i was going to say something else but once again i totally forgot it lol... keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 20:36 PDT
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That Shippo-- he sure knows how to play his cards right! Use everything and everyone to your advantage, hehehe. And aww to the Sango/Miroku moment! And awww, the Kagome and Inuyasha moments. Hmm, what else can I "awwww" about? Just everything in general, I guess. This chapter has been a lovely break from this Macro-Econ that I've been working on. If only I could read the text book pages as well as I can read the pages of your stories... if you figure out a way to make that possible-- please, let me know. Great, great job! Take care---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 19:49 PDT
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Well i really am enjoying this; especially the last few chapters. So far you've had me in fits of giggles. That classic scene between Miroku and Inuyasha had me in tears of laughter; the way the monk just described Sango's rear was hilarious, but Inuyasha's reply to it just got me laughing out loud. You mentioned something in one of your author notes about Inuyasha reading a certain entry; finding out Kikyou really did try and kill Kagome... I am highly anticipating his reaction to that! 0.o; I liked how you kept Sango and Miroku's marriage proposal, but added a twist... he wants to train in her ways! I loved that! And of course the Inuyasha and Kagome hints; and beside that, the reason they're all on another journey! To find out what is in that book (beside the obvious journal entries!) The diary swap ear petting is by far my favourite past time! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Aphae On: September 29, 2004 18:34 PDT
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::laughs:: They fell out of the tree. I can see them doing that in my mind's eye too. Heh, another great chapter. Are you going to use scenes from the movies as well? Because I was wondering if you are going to mention when Kagome kissed InuYasha in her diary.
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Reviewed By: Aitu --pretending to be signed in but not really signed in On: September 29, 2004 17:12 PDT
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hehehe-- Thermal underwear. That makes me giggle too. Great chapter, as always. Then again, is it possible for you to ever write a bad chapter? Right now it's to the point where if you wrote sentences that looked like this: 09328klwmfklsdf klmf031409u mklsfj0329403 lksjfd038r092341 lsjflwjef092u30329u!!#()*$)($-- I think that I would enjoy them as well. An, the economy just called, it looks like pages of your stories are now being used as currency in Argentia! (Wow, that's good!) I was wondering if there were going to be anymore ear/diary sessions but it looks like you even found a spot for that. The group just brings even more entertainment around, so you're absolutly right-- gotta have some group shots. Random thought of the minute: I wish it was christmas time right now, like the night before christmas eve. It can snow just a little bit but then it has to melt the day after christmas and warm up a loooot! Back to the review- Awesome work, loved it! Good luck with your writing and have fun with it! I sure do, hehe. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:35 PDT
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lol! nice chapter!^_^ XD! hope u update asap! ~Melissa~
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Title: Chp 16
Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm catching up on more chapters now, but felt the need to say: Adorable! I cooooooooed so much; their first date. Oh our Inu-chan is growing up so fast *sniffles* Onward bound!
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 14:14 PDT
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I hope that you will keep the "Review Q&A " section intact because like in some movies ending (example: Shrek 2), sometimes the Review Q&A is almost - and take it in a good way, please - like the bloopers (when you respond in chapter 8 to akuma_river: "101 Ways to Tick Off Your Readers" or to LeeLu: "It's Hanyou Potter and the Sesshoumaru's Stone - it crack me up, and still does LOL) or the previews (hints) of the next show (in this case: chapter!). Keep your Fantasic work! All of your stories are great. And I know because I read a lot of books and you're exceptional. One of the best there is. **throws flowers** ^_^
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: September 29, 2004 11:53 PDT
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YAY! You put up lyrics for the lullaby! Aw, and it was so cute, too! I was waiting for him to get into her bedroll with her. Hehe. And I actually have a question this time! This lullaby, does it have anything to do with this journal? I mean, I know his mother used to sing it to him as a child, but it has to be related to the journal somehow. Right?
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Title: mscongeniality
Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 11:51 PDT
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Handprint-of-Love... Sneeheeheehee! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- ___ ______ __ On: September 29, 2004 11:16 PDT
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hehehehehe. You make me giggle, both in the story and in the review section. (Excellent shoes, by the way)AH, love the way the color of Inuyasha's face was described,and then again when both Inuyasha and Kagome were blushing. Perfect. hehehe. And Inuyasha carrying the box of Ramen-- for some reason I saw it as like refridgerator box size, hehe. Seems about right. Loved the end too. Yey! I'm just going to go giggle some more while I think upon this last installment. Buuuuuuuuh-bye
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Reviewed By: Above the roof On: September 29, 2004 09:43 PDT
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I really love this story! Your idea to let Inu-chan see himself through Kagome's eyes is really sweet. And thank you for the fast update!
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Reviewed By: tessie On: September 29, 2004 07:30 PDT
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i love this story. i mean i love how fast you update! i was checking my email when sundennly there's an update from you! i love it! i never lose interest cuz you update so fast! tessie
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