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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Title: hey
Reviewed By: tinak142 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like to see a number two to this i really like the stuff u wright u r really good i think u sould keep wright u r really good at it good luck
| Title: chap 30
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 06:19 PST
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awwww how cute!!! inuyashas so dumb to be crawling around wen he practically has his guts hanging out...
| Title: to patriot
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 06:35 PST
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y would u drop the enjoyment factor from a 10 to a 1 based on one little chapter that u were uncomfy with? that's stupid...its a great story and just b/c u dont like one part doesn't mean it deserves a 1...but hey w/e its ur opinion....
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 06:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Title: Don't be a stupid SOB
Reviewed By: to the 'patriot' On: December 03, 2004 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic. I was ready to review. Til i saw the retarded little baka who reviewed before me. listen, boy, if you read the same fic i did, then you'd have noticed that NOT ONE of the main characters had any real FUN at the respective parties. are you fucking stupid, kid? in a phrase? Go blow yourself. On to the praise: Sueric, i don't know who you are or anything but you're just spectacular. fantastic. this is, hands down THE BEST FANFIC EVER! the plot twists and turns are astounding. even the prerequisite plot devices like the thing that will make kagome live on were beautifully done! laughter mixed with angst mixed with action mixed with romance mixed with oh everything! emotions run the gamut, and you handle them in such a way that i felt the emotion carried thru your words! Keep it up, i say, and tell those freaks who say stupid ass stuff like "i'm giving you a one because i'm an ignorant humanoid" for ONE part that he obviously didn't read right to go stick tessaiga up their asses!! WOO HOO!!!
| Reviewed By: Patriot On: December 03, 2004 21:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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Started reading this story from the beginning several days ago. On ch. 77 now. I was going to give it a 10 for enjoyment, but ch. 76, 'Bad Ideas' made me drop it to 1, at least until the impression that chapter left on me fades. Chapter 76 offended me in a way I cannot describe. I did not know what went on at those kind of parties at all until I read that chapter, and now that I do, it made me decide that when I finally do find my woman, I'm going to make sure our friends do not throw us bachelor and bachelorette parties. It was the strippers you put in that burned me up. It makes me sick to think of any couple letting themselves being tempted like that before they exchange their vows. Yeah, you can say I've got InuYasha's attitude when it comes to bachelor and bachelorette parties.
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 21:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story!!!
| Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 21:00 PST
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ooo i like it!! =D
| Title: perfect
Reviewed By: inuyashas_love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 16:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect i loved it i love how u wrote this and i will read all ur fics cus they are awesom thanks
| Reviewed By: NissiCat On: December 02, 2004 04:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finlay finished this fic and let me tell u it was a long ride. didnt think it would ever happen. I say it again i think it is a great story alone with your others. i am gonna start o read your newer one so i dont get left behind like i have on the other ones. i started torrent forvever ago and never finished it. but i did read purety and loved it . and this one is they say way. nothing can beat it and i think u are one of the most talented writers i have come accross. One of my faves and i have never been disapoiuned with anything u have written... ::huggles:: lots of love
| Reviewed By: Sari15- who can't log in...ever On: December 01, 2004 20:31 PST
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Just for you!!! Because this was the absolute BEST fan fic EVER. I have read them all and NOTHING even compares to this masterpiece!!! All hail the queen of Fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: u r the best!
Reviewed By: Inuyashagurl44 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 18:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap! u are sooooooo good at writing, I can only dream to write this good! I love the story so far, and I especially love the Inu/Kag moments. One thing i've always wondered and i have noticed that other people wonder this as well: when people write that inu balls his hands into fists why he doesn't get cut by his claws. I know it's a minimal thing but the idea seems funny. I love your fic though, you really are a good writer. If you could spare time to read mine and give me some pointers I'd be forever greatful to you, the story is (on mediaminer.org) Together Forever. Well I'm off to read chapter 20! Ja ne!
| Title: Chronicles Rev. Pt 1
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 04:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chronicles brings one phrase to mind. Shock and awe. I think that it was that phrase encompasses the entity you've nicknamed Bertha. When I first stumbled across your fic, I thought, no way, there's no way something that LONG could be decent. I thought it would be a series of meaningless babblings that couldn't possibly worth the long read. Because I'm always up for a challenge, though, I thought ... what the hell! Let's do it! Boy, was I glad I did.
| Title: Chronicles rev. con't.
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 04:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm an aspiring writer, and I don't think that you have to be a published writer to be a good one. So many times, from what I've studied, writers get bogged down in the entire 'conformity' issue, and while I can say that your style does remind me of Anne Rice and other great writers, there is a freshness to your approach and an absolute artistry that one cannot help but be dragged into this world you create with such vivid words. As a senior in college, one of the things that my creative writing instructor has had us do is read some of the worst bits of tripe imaginable. Being a devout believer in written word, he had us look up fanfictions. Yes, I'm serious. He challenged my class to find one decent fanfic. The only catch? It had to be completed. When I found Chronicles I guarded it jealously from my fellow classmates. Would you be interested in knowing that, out of a class of twenty, TWELVE of us brought in YOUR story? That intrigued my teacher to no end. he looked it up, read the first chapter in class, and, knowing nothing of the anime Inuyasha, he still was just as spellbound as those of us who do know and love the anime and manga.
| Title: Chronicles rev. cont.
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist - tried three times to log in... [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 04:56 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the end, my teacher had this to say: "Sueric's style is rich and colorful. The way she brings images to life is amazing. The depth of emotion she uses to portray these two dimensional bits of colorized graphics are amazing. In the course of this work, she has delivered every single human emotion on paper through words, and that is a feat that isn't easy to accomplish. Grammar mistakes, which are but a few and spelling mistakes that are rare, can be forgiven easily in a story that makes you forget to look for such things. Raw though it might be, this piece of fanfiction is simply astounding. Work that keeps the reader turning the page or clicking on the next chapter just to see what lies ahead." In other words, the highest of praise, and so well deserved. As for critique? A few minor grammatical mistakes but nothing that diminishes your story. A few minor spelling mistakes on things that are easily overlooked by any computer office program. Stylistically I'd have to say that your ability to deal with feelings and emotion is astounding. You've done with words what great artisans have done with their hands. You've created such vivid images that I think you could read the story to a blind person and they would still be able to conjure the images you've so readily put to paper-or to computer screen. It is amazing what you've done. Take a breath, sit back, and enjoy the praise because it comes as your absolute due given what you've created.
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