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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 › » ] | Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 14:01 PDT
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OMG, lol, I've never seen the tampon bit mentioned before. I think I scared my kids when I laughed out loud. Good trade off, though, and I have to wonder what Sesshoumaru had done to that fang... -_- Looking forward to the next update. ;D
| Title: *growl*
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 24, 2004 13:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who did what!? *growl* This is a great fic, people shopuldn't steal it! Who was it!? \/_\/+ -Kitsu
| Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (notloggedin) On: October 24, 2004 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your fiction for a while now, but never got the chance to comment until now. I just wanted to say that I LOVE YOU. You rock at writing, you update SO OFTEN, which I love, and yet your writing still remains flawless. I wish every writer would be like you (so I wouldn't get so bored in between updates that I'd jump off high things.)Thanks! ~Julie
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 11:23 PDT
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Who ever that other Author is, they have to be truly stupid to think they could rise up to your quality of work. Imitation IS the most sincere form of flattery, but in order for it to work, you have to be talanted enough to support it. They can try all they want, but they can't even come near your style, grace, timing, humor, and empathy for the characters. I haven't seen this story, and I'm not going to look for it. It would be like choosing Carnation Ice Cream over Ben & Jerry's. Even haveing the worst case of munchies, NOONE would make that kind of stupid mistake. As for the story, he shredded her tampons. Gods above, where DO you get the inspiration for this stuff? I must have laughed for 10 minutes. I love angst, drama, and adventure, but, (as you've probably realized) nothing gets me better then humor, and subtle sarcasm. Love your work and your muse, and you.
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 09:40 PDT
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It amuses me that after a chapter about "ownership" that you yourself are defining the "rules" to a plagiaristic reader. Coincidence? You are, of course, totally in the right so don't worry about being perceived in any of those ways you listed...
| Reviewed By: Gaudy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 09:22 PDT
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OMG! This was so funny!!! The whole tampons thing. Personally if it had happened to me I would have died. I loved this chapter. It was just too funny.
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-nsi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 08:49 PDT
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That was hilarious, I could just picture Inuyasha's face when he read the package insert on tampons. Hey, if Totosai's old butt is still alive, then wouldn't Shippou still be alive? Will the go look for him in the modern world?
| Reviewed By: Morly On: October 24, 2004 08:41 PDT
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oh my gods this chapter was hilarious. I love the possessive this is my body bit. Geesh he'd rather she bleed all over the place than have anything even something inanimate in his stuff... thing... pleasurebox.
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 23, 2004 22:34 PDT
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Oops. Little error in my review. Just ignore that "you" before Kagome. Half my mind is asleep and the other is trying to comprehend things. LOL
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 23, 2004 22:32 PDT
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I really just thought you Kagome was gonna die a slow and horrible death. She tweaked Sesshy's nose? Is she crazy?!? I mean, yea she's gotten braver in her years but...Sesshoumaru??? Crazy wench. GIRL! I meant girl! Ack! You've got me talking like InuYasha now. Am I gonna get tweaked? LOL TOO MUCH TWEAKING! But I want more!!!! Hehehehe
| Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 18:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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O_O;; Right, your chapter 'Beautiful' was exactly that. I wasn't going to review again (after those last few, of me being silly) but I had to say something now... I don't remember the last time I read something (if ever) like that... that was written more like... Hm, this might sound overly silly, but it's like painting a scene that, in person, is so beautiful that there simply aren't enough colors on the palette to really do it justice. (Which, being a mother and wife, I just sat here, jaw gaping, nodding blankly as I read your description...) I was amazed at how well you wrote this chapter. Amazing. Simply amazing. Ok, must take a break... but... good lord. wow. I wish I had something to really suggest or critique on.. But I'm really quite hopeless. >_
| Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 17:50 PDT
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Ok, whoops, somehow the link to the next chapters hadn't loaded, so I thought that was it. hehe, *feels sheepish* Perhaps something happens soon that I've been waiting for, and I'll feel like an absolute moron for mentioning it in my earlier humongous reviews. Still about five chapters to read... Yay! No more 'real life' for a little while longer. ^_^;;
| Title: Muahaha, continuation!
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 17:27 PDT
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I love all of your OCs, they fit their roles well, and you've made it difficult to guess what mischief they'll cause next. You've portrayed everyone so well! You probably don't even need to indicate who is speaking, and we'd be able to tell who it is. Great work! I'm still amazed that you can write this much. Do you make a living from writing fiction? You'd be a great asset to publishers, being able to create so much, so often, so well. ;) Am I going to far? Perhaps... ;) Got me interested in writing more, even if I don't have the time or ability to write like you!! Of course, there are things I'd *love* to see Inuyasha do, (namely, taking his aggressions out on people who probably seriously deserve it) but, as this is your writing, (and I can't hope to compare) I couldn't possibly suggest, (or even guess!) where this story may end up going, who will kick who's rear... Although you seem to drop hints quite often about certain things to come, it's not a good idea to get my mind set thinking things will happen one way of the other, simply because, with a good story, you should never truly know where the author is going to take you. ...Unless you flip to the end of the book to read the last paragraph, which is unfortunately, impossible right now. ;) Right... I think I've gone on enough.. I think I have to get back to (*sniff*) real life, and look forward to your next update. (I can't believe people want you to write MORE often, that's insane!!) -Ales
| Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 17:20 PDT
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Hm, only 1500 characters allowed for this review... Where shall I begin? I'm amazed that you can write so well, so much, and so often! The only stories I've ever seen with this MUCH have been poorly arranged... pieces of... ugh, time consuming drabble. But your fic, ...I started on it yesterday some time around lunch, and caught up with the last update today around lunch, and I must say, "WOW!" You had me hooked from the first chapter. :D I had to tear myself away at a semi-decent hour to get some needed rest... and then, back again upon waking to read more! I'd been putting off reading this fic simply because of the sheer number of chapters, and now that I've read it, I'm simply astounded that I waited so long. (perhaps that was a good idea, though, so I had *more* to read once I finally sat down to take a gander at what was flooding my author-alert-box.) I could continue with the praise and adoring comments, but I'll move on to more useful things to say. In each chapter (namely, the more recent ones) I could only find about one misplaced punctuation mark, or misspelled word. And for as much as you write, that's amazing!! If they had been that bad, I would have taken the time to stop and make a note of it, but truth be told, your fic didn't allow me the break (nor patience) to even write down one thing. Ugh, running out of room, will post the second half in another review. ;)
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 15:51 PDT
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OMG! I am so blessedly amused! I WISH I could have seen sesshy's face when she tweaked his nose!!! That is just Classic!! *sigh*
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