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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 › » ] | Reviewed By: Telos On: October 21, 2004 12:58 PDT
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I seems like sessy is going to give Inuyasha some share of his power in the future.He's going to be a nice, caring brother for once? How scary....wait totosai is still alive? Isn't he human...wait no normal human would breath fire and make swords for demons. I wonder what the fang is for if its not for concealment...maybe its not even for inuyasha ..maybe kagome...so she can live long as inuyasha. I'm just babbling don't mind me. Love your story, never stops suprising me...thank you for that. But Inuyasha has to get his ass in gear.
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 21, 2004 11:07 PDT
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What the hell is going on?!? No matter how much I love him, of all people I would never figure Kouga to be the voice of reason here. Was that Inuyasha's fang future Sesshomaru and his son were playing around with? What the heck are they planning? Please tell me Inuyasha's not gonna be so stupid and let Kagome get away. I beg you to post another chapter today, I can't handle suspense.
| Reviewed By: jc On: October 21, 2004 07:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sorry i havnt been reviewing frequently, my internet was down for the last 5 days, grrr! i agree that kagome is a very sneaky wrench, my boyfriend calls me that sometimes so i also know how she feels! i love your word choice and how ideas are intwined with each other. Looking foward to more chapters! will review better next time!
| Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 07:14 PDT
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Shippou succeeded in his best illusion yet, go Shippou! Locking Inuyasha and Kagome together on the one night that Inuyasha couldn't just break the handcuff's was simply a wonderful idea. Shippou is definatly getting smarter, although I'm not sure whose influence that's from, maybe Kaede's. And I love the minor time paradox you've alreaddy created: Inuyasha has his mother's dairy in the past, yet Sesshamoru had it in the future, and gave it to Inuyasha for his fang. Does that mean that somewhere down the line Inuyasha either loses his mother's dairy or he gives it to Sesshamoru for some unknown reason? Or wait, maybe he gives it to Sesshamoru to give to his past self, but then why the fang, unless the future Inuyasha knew something, and had Sesshamoru get the fang. (Screams) I'm so confused, please write more before my head explodes.
| Title: Mission: Kitsune
Reviewed By: mystechj [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 06:39 PDT
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Was anyone else able to hear the Mission: Impossible theme during this chapter? Then he tries to crawl "into" Sango?! 0.0 How old is Shippou supposed to be? And why didn't the Monkinator join in the thumping?
| Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 06:09 PDT
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Ooo, handcuffs;-) I wish Inuyasha would just tell Kagome what's going on! I love the fact that everyone's in on the trick. Hope it works! Come on IY, fess up to the girl. Please. Great chapter. Thanks for the angst... I think.
| Reviewed By: Morly On: October 21, 2004 05:49 PDT
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after reading the chapter where Kags burnt Inu it occurred to me... did she mark him?
| Reviewed By: MouF - To sleepy to log in On: October 20, 2004 21:58 PDT
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I have a couple of questions here! Sesshoumaru's box, what form as it? A box the form to contain Tetsusaiga or the Shikon Jewel? If it's the sword, won't we have a Time Paradox on our hands? If future Sesshy's waiting fot it to appear, is it because the hypothetical future InuYasha will die or our present Yasha is to die in the past? Or as it something to do with Inu's fang??? Hmmm And the thing (beside reading his mother diary) InuYasha has to do before they purify the Jewel, is it claiming his mate? Did Izayoi had prescience? Did she forsaw that if they purify the Shikon jewel, Kagome won't have any reason to stay in the past and have to go back automatically to the future? So if InuYasha claims her, she will still have a link to the past and be able to stay? Ok, to much thinking here, going to sleep! Read you later and drink lots of fluid.
| Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 21:41 PDT
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Oh no, now we have 2 sneaky wenches, and I have a feeling that the guys are going to be losing thier collective cool soon, not that they seem to have any. I, too, have been sick, and just caught up with the last 3 chapters. I love this story so much I hope it never ends. So much has happened. I almost laughed myself unconcious when he wanted her calc book, then buried it, THEN sat on the place where he buried it so she couldn't dig it back up. Then did it again when Miss Kitty showed up and licked Inu. She's lucky Kagome didn't purify her tongue when she did that. I'd have been firing purity bolts at her feet and making her do the "keep your tongue off my guy" dance. Fang marks in her book, oh god, Do you understand how hard it is to laugh when your sides hurt that much? Also, when he BELLOWED at Kag that he thought of them as mates. I thought I was going to choke on my tea. Just like a man. On a more serious note, all of you who are bothering Sue for lemons, stop it, just stop it. Can you tell me just where she was supposed to put them? We're talking about 2 shy, inhibited people who aren't very old or very experienced. Just how fast are they supposed to go? The're doing just fine. Patience is a GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD thing. Specially when you are reading something this entertaining. Sueric, you get one very deep, very respectful bow, at least you will when I stop laughing so hard, one last thing, how will you solve the life term difference? I want to know ;D
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 20, 2004 21:05 PDT
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BakaYasha!!! What's wrong with you?!?! Holding her doesn't hurt, does it??? *sigh* Men...they always find excuses to avoid cuddling and hugging. They think it's a chick thing. LOL. And the Monkinator is back! Wow. I didn't think Sango could be so...brave! But I respect Miroku's wishes to hold off until AFTER the wedding. Hehehe. I'm so glad you're feeling better. You're one of the lucky one's that get well so quickly after having the stomach flu. I bow down to your immune system. LOL!
| Reviewed By: DNineAsher On: October 20, 2004 21:00 PDT
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"Maybe you're not scratching in the right place." LMAO! That was CLASSIC, LOL!
| Title: hello again!
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 20, 2004 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again, didn't know about the cold water thing, lol. When exactly (though trust me, I don't mind) are we stopping with the "Monkinator" thing? I'm just worried it'll get old, I was also wondering just whocould be such an A-hole as to leave this story cause they can't take the sexual tension? Answer me! oh, by the way, was this a filler, there wasn't a shit alot of plot in this one.-Kitsu
| Reviewed By: Sozoteki On: October 20, 2004 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Sango misses her 'Houshi-sama'. That's just so cute! Excuse me as I gush. Finaly a fic where Miroku gets some lovn' and not just a large hand print or a goose-egg care of a gaint boomerang. I have to say that I love your writing. This story is amazing. I'm glade you didn't jump into a lemon just for the sake of having a lemon. In my oppinion it would have taken something away from the story as a whole if you did. The best things are the ones you wait for, or so they say. I say "good for you" for sticking to your guns when it came to all those Hentai trying to push you into it. Not that I mind a good lemon now and then, mind you. But this is your story and only you have the say as to what happens. Excellent job by the way.
| Reviewed By: Asa Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:18 PDT
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This Ayamakita person is quite the slut. Coming out of nowhere and just licking ppl and whatnot. Please get rid of her fast, may she die a miserable and painfully slow death. :)
| Title: Stupid Inuyasha
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:42 PDT
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That's right Inuyasha you are being selfish! Hold Kagome! And poor Shippo wants him to be his daddy. He should let him call him father. lol. Oh wells. I love your story and I'm obsessing over your Alex's Gift.
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