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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 07:12 PDT
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Inuyasha getting mating advice from both Kouga and Miroku, now that's funny. Then again Kouga has a mate and Miroku's going to marry Sango. Oh, am I invited to the marriage ceremony? I'll bring whatever you tell me. Anyway, Kagome laying in nothing but a towel and then waking up to Inuyasha I bet she turned darker than "fire-rat-haori" red. All in all good work. And Inuyasha figure it out, the sword turns blue only around Kagome.
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Title: I'm a lil behind....
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan_17 -not signed in On: October 18, 2004 03:42 PDT
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Well, I've been quite busy lately so I had to read from like 49 to 56 which was a good few hours worth of reading but I must say that these chapters were WONDERFUL and now I can't wiat till the next chapters. On the other hand it's now 6:30 in the morning and I am quite sleep deprived and I've listened to 'Dearest' so many times it isn't funny. I HATE Katosan even more every single time he appears and this he interupted them which really pisses me off... InuYasha should really kill him now... I mean really. And what's the deal with Sesshi-poo? What's with his little box and what is it the time for.... I really can't go this long without reading again.... This last chapter was especially cute... Inu's anger for some reason is so amusing and Kouga's casual visit is just all to funny. Fire-rat-haori red Oh, thats great Sue.... I just love you. Post SOON! PLEASE OH ALL MIGHTY ONE!!!! I as addicted to this fic as I am the show and now my friends are too. Look what you've done.... btw I'm looking for those warnings b/c I think InuYasha is a little late with this defiling business.... I mean come on even Kagome is getting anxious. Kouga and Miroku, even Shipou is on his ass about taking Kagome as his mate. What's the hold up InuYasha!? Surely a hanyou that is stronger than any youkai I know isn't fraid of a pathetic human girl now is he? NAH!!!!! Maybe you should listen to Kouga and the Monkinator on this one boy........ |
Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 22:58 PDT
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I Loved that conversation between Kouga, Inu Yasha, and Miroku (especially the dialogue shared between Miroku and Kouga almost acting like Inu Yasha wasn't present)! *giggle*
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 17, 2004 22:58 PDT
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YES! What DID InuYasha wish for?!?! This STILL has not been explained!! You're gonna make us wait, aren't you? *pouts* It's not fair. I hate waiting. *sigh* I guess I'll just sit here some more and wonder about it and make predictions that will be wrong. LOL
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 22:35 PDT
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Roach yokai! Oh gross! That is one of the most frightening and disgusting things I've ever heard of.
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Reviewed By: trace On: October 17, 2004 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed your fanfic and I believe you are quite the writer. Creativly speaking, your characters remain true to the serious and are growing in a direction that I, as your reader, have enjoyed. Keep up the good work and may the gods be with you with your talented writing ability.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 17, 2004 19:47 PDT
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Good question, what the hell did Inuyasha wish for? I feel sorry for him, there are so many questions rolling around, I can't even keep it straight. I'm still on the fence about Katosan, is he evil or just an ass? Thanks for the little Kouga interlude, I just love him
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 17, 2004 19:37 PDT
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((("We like to call that one `Monk-in-Pain'," Miroku supplied. "Yeah, it's gonna be `Monk-is-Dead' if the monk doesn't shut the fuck up!" InuYasha snarled))))) Definitly one of my favoite parts-- Ah, the color system. Just thought that I would let you know I took about a five minute break to laugh over those few sentences. Absolutly priceless. hehehe. Kouga seemed a lot friendlier this time than last-- maybe his mate is whiping him into shape? hehe Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the amazing work, Sue! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: firehairedpixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:18 PDT
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OOOOh!! BakaYasha strikes again!! How can he be SUCH an insuferable baka?!!! I would have sooo given him a "nose tweak" for that! So we get another new character (yay!!) I wonder if she'll actually be able to get a response out of the great "Ice Prince"? And what's with the Sessh and the box? I mean, waiting to see if something shows up in the box to tell him if anything has happened isn't very proactive. He doesn't seem like the "wait and see" kind of person. Then again, its hard to tell since he's so adept at hiding emotions that you have to check to see if he's breathing to make sure he's still alive. :-)
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - not signed in On: October 17, 2004 13:53 PDT
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Inuyasha sure can say some of the stupidest things at the wrong moment. He should take a class to learn when to say things and not say things. :P At least he's keeping his temper in check. Can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 13:13 PDT
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great chapter! hope you update asap^_^ ~Melissa~
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 17, 2004 11:51 PDT
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Ah, return of the BakaYasha. Actually, I don't think that he ever left. He was just laying dormant until the worst possible time. hehehe. Great chapter!! I loved it, as always. Still thinking about how you have to go back and erase all previous Q & A's… It's sad really! Lots of laughs came from that section. I still think that FF.net has a stupid rule.. Sure it's good for those people who do write stupid things but yours isn't stupid-It's the BESTEST! Hehehe. I think that they should amend that rule and make it exclude you! Yea, that's what I would do if I ruled ff.net. Anywho-damn that evil Katosan; what is he up to now? I wish that I could just know everything right now so if you want to slip me a few secrets I will not be complaining. Keep up the great work and take care! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 17, 2004 11:41 PDT
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Awww and I thought this was gonna be some big great battle chapter!! Katosan's a wuss. He just doesn't want to break a nail and mess up his hair. He sorta reminds me of Sesshoumaru. Haha! I want to know what that wish is!!! *tries to wait patiently for an update*
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 09:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Katosan is 'begging' to be cleaned from the face of the Earth...and Inuyasha is clearlly up to grant his wish >:D The nose tweaking thing is just so damm KaWaI^^and Inu's reaction to it when Kagome did it :3 If Inuyasha doesn't grow up and ask Kags to be his mate he's going to hurt her heart more it was necessary ;_;...Well inu boy is going to get seriously hurt himself if he doesn't ask her soon *hint*trees*hint*sit*hint*Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 07:35 PDT
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I was wondering: If Kagome tweaks InuYasha's nose, what will be his reaction to that form of punishment? :-D You know, she could do it to him when she's studying or taking tests. What to do: a SIT command or a tweaking? LMAO
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