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Reviewed By: D. Nine-Asher On: October 15, 2004 22:34 PDT
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Awww! InuYasha found a friend in the supermarket, LOL. Do you think he thought it reminded him of Sess? It's so sweet, him thinking of Shippo like that, and bringing him all that stuff...but if Shippo eats all that pocky at once, there's gonna be a new meaning to 'stuffed animal'! ^_~ And GAH! What happened to the jewel?! Did it get purified, too? That's bad, at the moment, isn't it? I'm bitin' my nails, here. You are the Queen O' Suspense, Sue. (Hope it'll last, heh.) LOVE IT! Dev
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Reviewed By: tessie On: October 15, 2004 18:43 PDT
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awww! inuyasha was so cute in this chapter! and i am so glad that he is back to normal. this was a sweet and cute chapter. till the next one! bows to the queen of updaters. tessie
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 18:20 PDT
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I like it that the romance scenes in your story never seem forced ... they come across as natural and real. *sigh* Thanks for another fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell - not signed in On: October 15, 2004 17:10 PDT
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Yea! Shippo's up again. Whew! And Inuyasha is hanyo again. Double whew! I loved how Kagome calmed Inuyasha's demon side when they kissed. Is she going to put a new rosery on Inuyasha? What happened to the jewel? When is Kagome going to get around to defiling Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 15, 2004 16:29 PDT
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I love you so much. You brought Shippou back to life and you also brought back the EARS! *ahem* I mean, Hanyou InuYasha. LOL Hmm, I'm curious to see what Kagome's gonna do with that stuffed dog that resembles InuYasha...
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 15:22 PDT
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I think it's kinda cute that Inuyasha wants Shippo to learn to read and write, maybe Inuyasha thinks of Shippo as a son. Inuyasha sniffing a stuffed puppy dog, how cute. Sounds like a few dogs I know, and Kagome bought it too I wonder if that toy goes to Shippo or if Inuyasha claims it. As for the magic tricks I could see Shippo using them with his kitsune magic to really mess with enemies.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 15, 2004 15:02 PDT
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AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH!!!! What's wrong with the jewel?What is it doing?! Must know must know! How much did they charge on the mom's card?hahaha. Loved that part. Are Inuyasha and Kagome going to play twister? ;) Must find out what happens next! *waits by computer to see!* tiwsts and turns, twists and turns! Ps- loved it. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 15, 2004 12:12 PDT
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Oh. My. God. I tried crying but I'm in too much of a state of shock! InuYasha human?! Shippou dying?! What is going on here?!?!? That was like a total slap in the face! What's gonna happen now? Every though I had for a possible ending is completely gone now! I can't believe this! Oh please, please, PLEASE don't end this so soon! I hope it goes on for years and years...okay, maybe years is pushing it a little. LOL Oh please let Shippou be okay. And maybe you can turn InuYasha back into a hanyou? Ohmygosh! THE EARS!! THEY'RE GONE!! WAAAAAAAAAAAH! What a cruel world! *sob*
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Reviewed By: Telos On: October 15, 2004 10:57 PDT
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Poor shippo...i almost cried when i read this chapter. I hope he will be alright. THat will really suck if he dies. Oh and is Inuyasha going to stay human? Or its a just for that day... Well i'm nervous to find out whats next, but i'll reak any way
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 15, 2004 09:32 PDT
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So much gonna on here. Please tell me Shippou is gonna be alright. Was Kagome close to purifying the jewel? How much stronger has she gotten? Myouga is pissing me off, he keeps dancing around the topic but what is up with the Tetsusaiga? How long will Inuyasha be human? Okay, so now we see why Katosan want's Inuyasha to take back his land. Where is Katosan, what's he up to now?
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Reviewed By: jc On: October 15, 2004 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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completly love your story, especially when each chapter is nice and long, detailled, and always recently updated! A great acheivement. I rank this as the 4th best story i have read so far :D and ive read at least half the stories here and on different sites :)planning is coming out really well, you should make kagome a bit more dominantover inuyasha somtimes in my opinion, like when he wants to do something, they argue, she gets her way, WITHOUT having to use "sit", i think it would be very funny to see inuyasha cringe from her at some time :P looking fowards to the rest of the story! hope you can make a sequel... if it makes sense to make one of coarse :)
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell - not logged in On: October 15, 2004 09:07 PDT
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Um... Woah.. Too much to wrap my puny brain around. Inuyasha and Shippo purified. Kagome and Inuyasha estranged. The prayer beads broken. Ouch. What's happening to Shippo that's got the monk so upset? Augh! A cliffy. Poor Inuyasha, now he's just a human and Kagome doesn't love him so much anymore. He can't protect her anymore either. Now all we need is for some horrible bad guy to show up at this time of weakness. Inuyasha's foul temper led to this disaster. Has he learned anything from this? Maybe Kagome should put two sets of prayer beads on him if he ever regains his powers. Assuming she still wants him around after this debacle, that is.
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Reviewed By: Serendith (at work so I am not signed in) On: October 15, 2004 08:59 PDT
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Eeep! I hope InuYasha doesn't stay human! No more puppy dog ears?!? Say it ain't so!!
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Lazy yet again On: October 15, 2004 08:49 PDT
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Awwww. Poor Shippo. Is he alright? Inuyasha really does need to control his temper. What would have happened if Kagome didn't stop him? Oh wait... I already know. :P I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: tessie On: October 15, 2004 08:45 PDT
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o hell no, you better not kill off shippo. that runt is my fave little guy! and inuyasha as a human? damn, poor kagome, the guilt she must be feeling but she had to do it. baka inuyasha. that's men for you, they never listen.
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