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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 07:44 PDT
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Inuyasha purified? I hope it's nothing permanent, he'd never defeat Katosan has a human. Maybe Sesshomaru knew this was coming and that's why he wanted Inuyasha's fang, maybe that can turn him back into his old half-demon self. Well, thanks for updating so much, I can barely keep up, oh and get well soon Shippo! (Places box of chocolates near the kitsune cub)
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Title: look look
Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I couldn't resist. I signed up to this place to review your fic, so feel special =) hehe. I think your story so far is absolutely amazing, but I never expected anything less. I thought it was great in your last chapter to have Sango and Miroku caught in the acts (plural for kissing and spying hehe). I hope we get to see how Kagome's powers have increased from all her training. And finally, a question you won't answer, what will happen when the jewel is purified? Well thank you for all the quick updates, it helps make my day go by faster. =) p.s. Aitu if you need any help defending Sueric, I've got your back. =)
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 21:59 PDT
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Look!
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Reviewed By: Asa Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 21:21 PDT
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OMG YOUR STORY IS SO AMAZING!!! I didn't get a chance to tell you before but I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that Waku payed with his life for interupting Miroku and Sango like that. AND HE BURNED IN HELL HAHAHAHA!!! And the Monkinator, oh what could be better. I can just picture him in that demon slayer outfit. *shivers* Keep up your good work and UPDATE SOON ALMIGHTY ONE...
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Title: Training?
Reviewed By: mystechj [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 21:21 PDT
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Yeah, it seems as though Kagome's got BakaYasha trained to kiss on command. What what did happen to Shippo? He hasn't blackmailed anyone in ages.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 14, 2004 20:23 PDT
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Wait a sec...where has Shippou been anyway?? I know you mentioned him helping with Kagome's training, but poor Shippou is so ignored!! All they do is give him some pocky and expect him to disappear while they can *ahem* do stuff... LOL. Awww and I was expecting Goshinboku to interrupt again! Hehehehe
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell- not logged in On: October 14, 2004 20:21 PDT
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Poor Kagome, all bruised up. Good thing Inuyasha wants to kiss and make it better. Where is Kotosan? I think Kagome somehow accidently purified him, sealed him or sent him to the future when her barrier flashed and he vanished. Just a thought. Right now I'm more worried about Sess's uncle. He's obviously still alive and causing trouble in Kagome's time. Does that mean Inuyasha will be fighting him for the next 500 years? Hey Shippo, here's a Gameboy. Go play so the adults can kiss some more.
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Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 19:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you dont think you're work is fantastic??? are you nuts??? its better than fantastic and you got a great talent cuz you written the best fanfics ive ever seen but i guess you're your best/worst critic im kinda like that too, im sure everyone else is like that to themselves. Its all good :o) awesome work sue!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 18:19 PDT
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I love it that InuYasha is always the one stopping things when they get a little too hot between him and Kagome! Who would have thought that he would be the more grounded one and she the impulsive one when it came to *cough* physical expressions of love ... *grin* And the falling out of the tree - brilliant!!! *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 14, 2004 17:01 PDT
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hmmm. What would happen if we entered your stories for you? muhahaha. Once again, great chapter. hahaha, monk and Sango finally got caught-- excellent. Not for them---for our viewing pleasure, hehehe. hmmmm. Why is the shikon turning white?! =O ! You really had me scared there for a second! ps-- to bad that tree moved on ya, hey Inuyasha? =P This final thought that--- that's great. Makes me laugh everytime. *waits merrily for more* hehehe ---Not signed in (I feel as that has became my new name)
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Title: great fic!!!
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 16:34 PDT
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gods, you update faster than i read... i FINALLY caught up, since my last review in like, chapter 17 (i am so slow, how pathetic is that?. the goshinboku, huh? oh yeah, miroku is gonna be so proud of inuyasha. on norimitsu... gods, how many women did inutaisho actually impregnate in his lifetime?! horny dog... imuyasha must take after him. lol! and hehe... monk in pain red... i have still yet to stop laughing, and i read that part ages ago! this is absolutely one of the best fics i have ever read! keep the chapters coming, i am ready with my contact lenses! ^_^ take care!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 15:27 PDT
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I finally had to come forth and leave a review for this - just to thank you for writing such an entertaining and enjoyable story! I think this is my favorite depiction of both Inuyasha and Kagome in your stories to date! Kagome's strong character and honesty shine through along with Inuyasha's sense of humor and tenderness. I just adore it when he calls her "sneaky wench" -the affection just leaps across the computer screen. Everytime I get an update alert, I feel excited...it almost seems as if I'm reuniting with long lost friends, just checking in to see how they're progressing. Of course, this is a testament to how truly 3-D you've created the characters. But Inu hasn't read through Kagome's diary in a while...though I suppose her biggest "secret" - her love for him is out now. Still, the reading of diaries has been a wonderful device to introduce honesty into Inu-Kag's relationship. I've often wondered how everyone would react if there was more of it (honesty)...none of the pussyfooting about feelings, brushing things off as if they didn't exist or weren't said. Lo and behold, you've created a fic that does just that. And I find it sort of ironic that Sessh has a blood relative who's been out to kill him over the centuries...for who he is. Hmm....is that karmic justice for Sesshie? The Inu brothers have way more in common than they think.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel8138 On: October 14, 2004 15:06 PDT
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wow...where to begin on this one. tweaking noses, huh? hmm...intresting. and InuYasha knew what he was donig to, which makes it worse! and in front of sesshy? wow...now onto the Goshinboku...they fell out of the tree. thats priceless, absolutly priceless. what got me is that they did this IN HER TIME! where was her mother in all of this? good thing she was not UNDER the tree. wow....another very intresting chapter. i think Miroku would be proud of InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 14, 2004 13:51 PDT
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He tweaked her nose in front of Sesshoumaru and his nephew?? HAHAHAH! I never thought he'd show that kind of affection in front of such an audience! LOL A lil' hot and steamy there at the end, but it was all worth it. Stupid tree keeps making them stop! *ahem* I'm not begging for a lemon. Noooooooo never. Although you are pushing it just a lil'. Not that that's a bad thing! *giggle*
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Reviewed By: Aphae On: October 14, 2004 12:39 PDT
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Wow, congrats on your steadily increasing amount of reviews. It shows that we readers love you ::grins:: Ha, they fell out of a tree.
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