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Title: KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 13:20 PDT
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This chapter was UBER cute. I just love Inu's reaction to Miroku's teasing.... Oh, btw... Can Kotosan like, DIE yet? I really, really dun like him.... grr. Awesome work though. UPDATE SOON PLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 12:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ good chapter this one, the litle 'game' Inuyasha was playing with Kagome, that moment with Sesshoumaru, the 'asking' game of Miroku and Sango,and the enconter with Katosan were the best! And off course the Flufffffffffff!!! =3 =3 Update soon!! ps.: Just one thing, have you said that inu wasn't going to mark kagome?
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Reviewed By: D. Nine-Asher On: October 11, 2004 09:52 PDT
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Ha! I love that you've given Miroku and Sango a 'life'. What I mean to say is, a lot of fics have kind of made it seem like 'oops, there's the citrus between Miroku and Sango, she's preggers, they'll pop their heads up for a few paragraphs every chapter, seemingly between dozens of babies, and then - oh, gee, they're dead.' ::shrug:: Am I making sense? Anyway, I think having Miroku take up Sango's profession is brill, and VERY original! As for Kag and Inu - talk about UST! LOL! You just write them so damn well! I'm new to InuYasha, and I FINALLY got to see some eps and movies not edited for Adult Swim, and I get everything SO much better now. I was sitting there watching the first movie, outright bawling at parts, and thinking, "Oh, man, this is where Sueric is coming from! I think I love her!" LOL! Anyway, I DO love your writing! THANK YOU! ^_~ Dev
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Title: chapter 41
Reviewed By: blazingnymph7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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congrats on a great story. love the fluff and how it actually makes sense according to their personalities. Hopefully Fluffy-sama would alow himself to be seen more often. ever had a Pixie Stix? they are full of sugary goodness ;)
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a great story! It's emotional, dramatic and adventurious. This story is really well written, and I have been addicted since the first chapter. You are able to make the OC situations work so well that you don't even notice, in fact your just cheering them on. I can not wait for the next chapter! I really hope you get a chance to update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 10, 2004 19:30 PDT
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LMAO! You would at least think InuYasha could sense them nearby but he's too involved with teasing Kagome. *shakes head* I'm still laughing. And I'm amazed that you were able to pull of 3 long chapters today! Hooray for you! I applaude you. Plus, you made me all happy to see a new chapter was uploaded. =P
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Title: tsk tsk
Reviewed By: Kagome_chan_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 19:12 PDT
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Awesome chapter! Shame on Inu and Kagome getting caught like that especially by Miroku and Sango... tsk tsk. His own fault for being so careless now he'll have to deal with Miroku's all but merciless teasing. LOL. He's only that careless when she's there though so by now she should get that she is his weakness. Adorable.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 10, 2004 19:00 PDT
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Awww! hehehe. Cute moments. I'm glad Inuyasha started reading his Momma's diary. Great journal entries too! Just how do you come up with them all? hehe. Loves it! Keep up the amazing work. Have I started an epidemic of not signing it? It's very contagious-- beware! hehehe --Aitu
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:26 PDT
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THat was good! hehehee, pour Miroku.. He shall suffer for that asking thing. Go Sango, go sango! Update soon again. But you don't seem to be bad a doing that! i can't wait!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 10, 2004 17:42 PDT
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I liked this little Miroku/Sango story. Is she gonna go for his butt now? That would be funny. One thing I was wondering, if the reason the book can't pass through the well is because it can't exsist in 2 places, does that apply to people as well. Does that mean Inuyasha is not alive in the future like Sesshomaru? Hmmmm..... Anyway, thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: peachykeen(not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i haven't read this story in awhile..damn computer..le sigh..but i love whats going on, its sad but sweet all at the same time, i think im on the verge of tears lol.. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 10, 2004 15:00 PDT
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Hahah! I like how you described Sango's reaction to Miroku's first kill. That was great! I got a lil' nervous when you said it was near the well. I thought we were gonna be introduced to a whole new story! LOL
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 14:30 PDT
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mmm, Miroku in tight fitting clothes... **almost drooling here, have to keep a hold of myself** And youppi!! **start jumping around the room** InuYasha's saying to stay clear of Katosan!!! LoL Finally he's listening to Kagome's feelings and reasoning! **big happy smile**
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Reviewed By: not signed in--Aitu On: October 10, 2004 13:23 PDT
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Amazing. Such powerfull words. You had me near tears with a few chapters back. wow! hehehe. Great job, Sue! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 13:22 PDT
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I'm still loving this story. I think you are very accurate with how Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship might slowly build to a more intimate level and you're good at keeping them in character. I like the fluff [a lot!], but I like the fact that you are avoiding a lemon too soon. They touch often -- very often -- in the manga and anime due to battles, traveling, or just sitting near each other, but they are shy of touches that might be called intimate. Even hand-holding is a rare event for them. It will be a very slow progression in the manga before more physical things happen between them and, in the end, we may only see it implied, like the gentle smiles, non-intimate touches, and leaning-on-each-other scenes in the manga and in the last episode of the anime. Don't get me wrong; I really want you to add a lemon to this story but only at the appropriate time. Thanks and update soon, please.
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