| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] |
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Title: Chronicles
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:42 PDT
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OK, that pissed me off. I think its time for Kagome to fire a miko arrow right into Katosan's butt. Maybe then he'll get the point to BACK THE FUCK OFF. Just my opinion. I like my opinion. Fried Katosan butt on a platter, yeah, it sounds better all the time.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 09, 2004 09:09 PDT
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*JUDO CHOPS KATOSAN!!!* muhahahaha. There, he's gone. No more problems, hehehe. That guy--- I'm really starting to loathe him!!! Great chapters Sue, as always. Lots of cute-sie parts, priceless moments, hehe. Keep up the great work. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Dragon Hositle 17 On: October 09, 2004 00:48 PDT
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My God! These people have more drama in their lives it puts Passions to shame! Your story keeps getting better. How long do you plan on continuing the story? Not that I'm in a hurry to see it end.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 08, 2004 22:13 PDT
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Weeee! New chapter! But the thing that bugs me is Katosan and what he said to InuYasha. I wanna bop him on the head for saying those things about Kagome. And now it's getting to InuYasha and he's gonna tell her to leave and not fall in love with him. *sigh* When will this boy ever learn to listen to his heart and not his evil mind?
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 20:08 PDT
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Excellent chapter. It was great the way you explained Inuyasha's reluctance to get involved with Kagome. He's trying to protect her by staying away. How terribly sweet and sad. Looking forward to the (hopefully) very fluffy part where Kagome convinces Inuyasha she wants to be with him. I'm feeling angstful about all the trechery brewing behind the scene. Shiver. Thanks for updating so frequently. This story has become a high point of my day.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 19:57 PDT
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Poor Inuyasha. You think mabe he would understand Kagome a bit from the dairy when it comes down to it. But, then I can't blame him. He is just so protective. I hope you update soon. Very nice chapter. Ja mata for now chika~!
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - too lazy to sign in On: October 08, 2004 19:47 PDT
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The fluff between Inuyasha and Kagome was cute from last chapter, same with the Miroku and Sango one. Inuyasha having internal conflicts? He needs to have a little for faith in Kagome. And what the hell is Katosan up to? I want to know!
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 18:47 PDT
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great chapter....at the end i had a big smile on my face and it just wont go away (mmmm love those fluffies) i love this story and im always so excited when i see an email from mmorg because im like ooooo new chapter happiness(does little happy dance)...anyway i just wanted to let you know that you make any bad day good when you update...and although the chapter had a big fight it was well worth the end. So keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 08, 2004 18:41 PDT
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Holy crap, can Inuyasha ever get it together?!? Is he ever gonna learn how Kagome really feels? I am still patiently waiting to see what Katosan is up to. When are we getting back to the whole Sesshomaru-in-the-future thing? You keep me in suspense every day!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 08, 2004 11:17 PDT
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Omg...I'm actually crying. That was so good! And it doesn't help when you listen to a song that fits this chapter too! I haven't cried to a story like this...ever. It was really good! Okay, I'm gonna go read it again and cry some more. LOL
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 08, 2004 10:33 PDT
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I really loved this chapter. I think you did a great job with your portrayal of Inuyasha's feelings. I could really imagine him acting that way. Still patiently awaiting what secrets are hidden in the diary. Any chance I could talk you into updating more than once a day? =)
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Reviewed By: Telos On: October 07, 2004 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ACTION!! Leave it up to Inuyasha to kick some major ass for Kagome. I thought this chapter combined humor, suspense, drama very well. I really like the part where Kagome was embrassed to show inuyasha where the scratches were.I was having a nervous break down. WHERE THE HELL ARE THEY!!! So good chapter overall. I give you applause*claps* Bye
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 13:45 PDT
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Nice fight scene. It was exciting and had very good pacing. Thanks for updating so frequently! I really look forward to each chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 07, 2004 13:11 PDT
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hehehehehehehehe. You really made me giggle with the (hates to sign in bit) Ah, loves it. Hmm. Fabulous chapter, as always. I do beleive that you have no knowledge of how to write a bad chapter. Loved the action scenes, and usually I don't like action scenes because some people just can't seen to make them interesting. But with yours, they're just amazing! hehe. How did you get so good at writing them? (opps...you might find this entertaining.. I wrote this review-- went to class-- came back-- and saw that I never pushed "Submit") But yea, great job! --Aitu
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Title: Animator
Reviewed By: Dragon Hostile 17 On: October 07, 2004 10:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brillant story! I always enjoy reading your material. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Are the gang's "little secrets" ever going to be revealed? And when are our favorite couple goning to quit beating around the bush?
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