| "Fade and Flare" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang ... that is some good story plot ... anywayz I started reading your story just today and thought it was pretty good ... please continue with the work
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Reviewed By: naughty angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 22:12 PST
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Love the story, but please get rid of the bastard Hojo. He drives me totally nuts. And update soon. PLEASEEE!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 21:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. I like your story and I hope to read another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 18:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayayyaaaa!!~! um....plz dont tell me kag loses her virginity to hojo!! ewwwwwwwwwwww! i like the way you start your story slow and get into it fully developed! good job! hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: DraGonMistress704 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 18:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...OMG!!! i ABSOLUTELY love this!!! i mean, ive seen fics with kagome as this great star and everthing, but this focuses more on her personal life, and i like this inside take to it. you keep writing damn it!! write or i shall...release the the giant golden retrievers on you!!! muwahahahahahahahahaha!! DraGon
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: January 19, 2005 12:46 PST
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excellent addition to the story, i'm glad to see it. intresting mix with the roses from Hojo and his random appearence. sure yash won't like it. i love how you mixed his feelings of her and what seh stands for in the beginning with the way he was looking at her. the forbidden fruit. intresting.keep it up!
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Title: Fade and Flare
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 17:22 PST
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Yay!First review for this chapter....I think...anways, GREAT, grea, great, great, grea, great, GREAT job on the chapter. When is Hojo out? I don't like him:( Oh wells, thank god you're a Inu/Kag fans :P(right?)
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Title: Fade and Flare
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 20:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going awesome so far. I hope you update real soon because I absolutely love this fic.
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 16:44 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story! I just read it for the first time. I can't wait for Kag/Inu to get together. Yay!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 21:13 PST
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AWESOME!!!!!!! But could you pleasssssse have Kag and Inu come together a tiny bit faster!!!! AND GET RID OF HOJO!!!!! Sorry, hardcore Inu/Kag fan. Anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 20:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow...you have a lot of negitive hojo reviews. well,i shall change that. this is wonderful as it is. as the opening of teh story, it is perfect. you have such great stuff mixed together here. such vivid description and wonderful character depictions. hojo is a loving yet all be it busy boyfriend, Kag a young girl struggeling with innocence/time/stardom and Yash as the angelic HOTTIE manager. i think their relationship is WONDERFUL as to how you have the kag/inu story set. it makes me smile, honestly, to see their interactions. its heartwarming. i was a little confused by the interactions of the flashback of Kag's to the concert and the whole shabang with the guy, i guess it was a lot to taken in along with the noise level i was trying to read under. but honestly, this is an awsome fan fiction. i hope to see you continue on it.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 19:10 PST
Comment/Review:
I like your story so far and I hope to read more. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: little - kag On: November 26, 2004 04:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS COOL. WHY DOES KAG'S HAVTA BE WITH THAT FUCKING FAG HOJO,HOBO,MOBO - DICK FOR BRAINS!!!!!!!! I HELLA HATE HIM THAT DICK HEAD BESTNOT BE CHEATING ON KAG'S. BUT I NO HE IS!!! I HOPE THAT KAG'S & INU HURRY UP AN GET TOGETHER!!!!! DAMNT!!!!!!!!!! PLEEAAASSSEEE! HURRY AN UPDATE I'M DIE'IN HEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute but why does she hafta be wit hobo
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: lanllnems [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good start, i hope you update soon. i can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work! good luck^_^
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