| "Temple of the Dog" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: Temple of the Dog
Reviewed By: NeverTooOld [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for a very entertaining story. I don\'t normally enjoy AU stories, as I see too many people use the AU genre as a way to avoid stretching their talants. This is absolutely NOT the case with this story. You have done an excellant job of combining the Inuyasha story with the world and culture of ancient Eygpt in a believable and entertaining way. I very much look forward to reading more of this story, and hope to read more of your work soon. Thank you very much, Jon Schuman NeverTooOld
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 21:50 EDT
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Update soon please! This story rocks!
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 21:30 EDT
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Heh. Egyptian formal dress is just so much more sexy than all those kimonos man... Love the story.
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Title: Nice Job!
Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 03:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I really do love this story. I hope the format gets better. I can't wait for an update! ^_^
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Title: Beautiful! *claps*
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 07:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter. I could see Inuyasha cutting wood and making beams effortlessly. And Sesshoumaru on the throne of the pharoah. I was begining to wonder when he'd come in. I can't wait to read what happens next! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 16:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will you be updating soon??? My god, this is like an addiction!!!! =D please update soon!!! i can't take any more of the waiting!!! it's okay if it's a short chapter, the long wait is KILLING me!! i swear it is!! lol i've been waiting for your update, more so than any of my other favourites....PLEASE UPDATE!!! I love this fanfic!!!
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Title: Temple of the Dog
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it.But is it finished?If it is please e-mail me Janie50989@sbcglobal.net well 'till next time bye.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated!!! yipee-doodle-do!!! :P i'm so glad! will hojou just give up?? i'm not interested in a kag/hojou relationship, but it WOULD perk my interest to see how Inuyasha would act! *wink*wink*hint*hint* well anyway, i totally hope you update soon! P.S. i checked out your fanart page on deviation, and i made my own account, but i couldn't seem to find any of your art again on the search pages!!! :( so i couldn't leave a note or anything! lol i was so frustrated...
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to give up on this fic? i mean, PLZ don't abandon us!!! i am totally ABSORBED!!! I NEED to read more! plz update A.S.A.P. or leave a note saying whether you will continue to update or not!! PLZ!! just a little note!!
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Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 08:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. It was cool how you made them egyptians and all. I haven't read the last couple chapters but it is really awsome!
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Title: Temple of the Dog
Reviewed By: punk_rock_viper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 00:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. It was very discriptive and just all around awesome. Love it! Keep it up dude! You are a really talented writer.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was that the end? if it was..*ahem* NOOOOOO!!!!! why was Kagura surprised at the new guy? (The new pharaoh) urg! this was a amazingly fantastic fic! why are there only nine freaking reviews?? This should deserve OVER a million! wowy wowz! I hope you make SOME sort of epilogue or sequel, because I absolutley ADORE your writing style!!! One question Urdchan!! where is Inuyasha originally from? you never told us.....im dying to know!! LAZY PEOPLE! REVIEW THIS FIC!!
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Reviewed By: Laurachan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:16 EST
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Great story! Original and absolutely stunning! I love the lemons, they're great! Please keep updating! ^^
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story ROCKS!! It's so original and I love the setting(I'm big into ancient Egypt). I hope more people will realize how wonderful your story is!
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Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 10:30 EST
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Hi, I just wanted to leave a quick review for you! I read through your story, and I enjoyed it. Your pride in your work showed in the way you made sure to pay attention to grammar and such, which is a *HUGE* thing IMO. Impressive! It's hard to find fics (especially Yasha ones, go figure) where the author cares about such things, and I'm so glad you do! I enjoyed your story, and wanted to offer you encouragement to keep writing because I think you have the skillz. The only thing that I wanted to point out to you, and I hope you don't become offended by this, is that you really might want to watch the POV changes. They're frequent and often misplaced, making it a little more difficult to truly 'get into' your story. I don't know if you're seeing to hone your skills toward a professional publication, but this is one thing that I've had problems with, myself. I do hope you don't think I'm being overly critical. I don't review unless I see real potential, and I hope you take this in the vein intended, and that is that I really think you've got talent and would love to see you perfect that talent! Good luck with your future writings, and thank you for sharing your story!! ~Sueric~
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