| "Broken Reflection" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Reece On: February 08, 2005 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story so far. I cant wait for the next chapter to come out.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 23:09 CST
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no way! excellent chapter, as always. i loved the diseases thing they did for when the sub came. that was crazy! though i'm sure Kurama had fun & Hiei enjoyed it. :D also, i can't believe they made Quat wear hot pink. that's too funny! but what a way for everthing to turn out. Dorothy is an evil, bitchy whore (excuse my french). i so hate her now. & Trowa wasn't any better. he should have tried something to escape! and now i'm wondering what'll happen when kitten meets Kura & Duo on their own turf, since it seems to be going that way. and guess what, i think i've finally figured out why they wear the wristbands. took me long enough, i know. but at least i'm pretty sure now. only, criticism for this chapter is that it was really short. not much seemed to happen, but you ended it on a good part so it's okay. btw, thanx for the special shout out :D update soon!
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Reviewed By: Firefly_of_death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 00:29 CST
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I really like it. Keep up the good work. I really found some of the parts in here to be really funny. bye Firefly
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 11:14 CST
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hey I like please finish,
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 17:14 CST
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You have to finish what you start! *grin* I have to finish the fic or I'll be forced to kill my sister who is bothering me at this very moment.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (not logged in) On: January 22, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this just keeps getting better and better! i don't even know how to comment on everything. i am wondering though about why Duo was so freaked by the car lights. and why Kurama seems to have slit his wrist & almost allowed himself to bleed to death. this chapter was great, but the preview for the next chapter was just awesome! omg!! you have to hurry and post that chapter! have to!!! thanks :)
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Title: I forgot to review sowwy!
Reviewed By: Nitaboo* On: January 19, 2005 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was hilarious! Well, so far. I still have to read the last several chappies. I'm thinking about writing a fic of my own, but haven't got the nerve to post one yet. Wish me luck. *waves bye*
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (not logged in) On: January 12, 2005 23:43 CST
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O.O oh my gosh!!! okay, the sex ed for dummies was...omg! i can't believe those two. and Quatre!! ahhhh, they have tainted him!!!! on a more chapter worthy note, the club scene was cool. this is getting more and more interesting. and the way you keep hinting at a secret between Kurama and Duo just keeps me guessing. i reeeeeeally want to know what that's all about. please update soon. i seriously can't wait for your next chapter.
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Title: L-O-V-E I-T
Reviewed By: animecrazer1 On: January 10, 2005 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LIKE HELL MAN!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D keep writing cause this story rocks :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:DD:D:D:D:D::DD::D:D:D:
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 22:25 CST
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one of your weridest chapters yet. Kurama threatening Trowa, then the Quat/Tro scene. really wasn't expecting that. & whatdya mean about 'the problems it would cause'? mean cliffie! oh, & Duo's extra thing was kinda sadistic. it was a great poem though. i really liked it. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 14:01 CST
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HILARIOUS CHAPTER!!! oh my goodness, Kurama was too funny in this chapter, & in your extra story thing. i almost fell out of my chair laughing at this. and Hiei's reactions were great! i love this story!! before all the craziness happened, the 'love' thing from Duo was very...weird. wouldn't expect something like that from him. anyway, great story. update soon! pretty, please!!!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy On: November 28, 2004 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot and hope you keep it up! I think Wufei and Treize should get together. *evil grin*
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 16:21 CST
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wonderful chapter. i love it when Kurama & Duo tease them. and the dirty dancing thing was hilarious! not to mention Quatre & Trowa finally got a moment. but what's the thing about Duo wearing a mask? can't wait to find out! please update soon! oh, & i vote for Wufei & Yukina. if only to irritate Hiei:)
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Reviewed By: Tsumi On: November 24, 2004 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovve this story I think Wufei should end up with Zechs
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! i love it! it's way too funny! and Duo kissing Heero was perfect timing. omg! lmao! and Kurama and Duo's attitudes are great. too great. please, please update soon.
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