| ""The Matrix Has You"" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lamp On: May 31, 2005 00:03 CDT
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I like your story but you might wnat to reload chapter 6 or something cause i don't know about other people but it just comes up as a blank page for me
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Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: May 02, 2005 17:44 CDT
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^-^ I love it! please update as soon as possible! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: April 10, 2005 20:31 CDT
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hehehehehe-- That was funny, the end scene, the breast punch and slap-- I wonder what little old inuyasha would have thought of that gesture. Hmm-- Maybe it's for the best if he doesn't learn of that--- Or it could be a double edged sword and if he finds out that Kagome kept it a secret he'd blow it even more out of proportion. Just can't win with those jealous types! haha, But ya gotta love him. Great job! I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the great work!!!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: March 28, 2005 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there. This is a very interesting story that you have here. I have really enjoyed reading it and cannot wait to see what will happen next! Everything is set up so well and the story flows wonderfully! I love the tender moments between Kagome and Inuyasha; and the other characters are so much fun too! Hmm, will anyone else be showing up in the story from anime? Great job! Once again, I cannot wait to read more! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: whirleeq(not logged in) On: January 27, 2005 20:36 CST
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Very, very good. I'd like to see Inu go up against Kagome though, with all her 'new' training :). It's too bad you made all the other characters programs... they could have been...fun. O'ell. Over all, great job!! Thanks for the update!!
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Reviewed By: xdfdsfab On: January 25, 2005 00:00 CST
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This story is awesome. Please, continue to write. However, if I may make a suggestion, it would be cool if somehow, Inuyasha began to show demon traits in the real world.
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Reviewed By: Io14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It's very interesting. I can't wait for another episode. You've got me hooked. >_
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Reviewed By: whirleeq [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:34 CST
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I think it's okay that you've killed off most of the characters in the show. I take it Naraku was some kind of agent program, and isn't as dead as we think him to be??? Oooh, can you pull sesshy out of the matrix? C'mon, wouldn't it be funny for mr. lord of the west big powerful demon to wake up human, bald, and covered in goo??? ;) Anyway, great chapter. I like the fact that you have placed this story outside of the timeline in the movies. I gathar that they are now in an era of tentative peace. I also liked the little fluffy interaction with kag/inu at the end of the chapter, and the fact that you made Kikyou a program. Kudos. --julie
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 22:44 CST
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Not too shabby. Watch for spelling errors, though.
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Reviewed By: whirleeq On: December 03, 2004 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... what an original crossover. I don't understand why Inuyasha would accept the concept of the matrix easier than Kagome though - at least she's had some access to technology, and could understand the references much better, but I guess you'll explain that soon. Some character point of view insight would be great! Very good so far, I really can't wait to see where you go with this. I love original crossovers. This is just great! :)
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, now you've hooked me, reel me in!!! update soon
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Title: MATRIX!!
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 16:08 CST
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*huggles Agent Smith plushie* I wuv the Matrix. Your story is great, update soon. -Riley
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story ^_^ please update soon i want to know what happens ^_^
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Reviewed By: I don't feel like logging in but my real name is AndreahTreole On: October 17, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AnTr: This is interesting........ uhm continue if you value your life ^^ Crim (my dragon): Leave the author alone, no killing him.... again AnTr: SHHH! That didn't happen you can't blame me... MUHAHAHAHAHA Crim: Nevermind her, she's insane... AnTr: CHERRIES! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Crim: Case and point.... .___.;
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Title: made it!
Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (offline) On: October 14, 2004 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha HA! told you i would get to it! awesome first chapter, it was pretty captivating! you left the readers wondering what was going to happen to kagome, what inuyasha would do about kagome, how he fit into the events occuring in her time, and who that strange little man was. lol great job! ~*~*~*suteki~*~*~*~
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