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| "Halloween Party!" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 ] | Reviewed By: Yamifanner(never bothered to log on) On: October 22, 2004 23:51 EDT
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Hey! Haven't heard from you in awhile. Here is my info. Name:Jacquelyn Age:16 Hair:waist length black hair with golden brown highlights Eyes:blue-green Personality:is kind,sweet and brave. She can be angry when you annoy her too much. Clothes:a black fubu jersey with tight deniem capri pants and black and white phat farm shoes Paired with:Yami
| Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! This first chapter's really good- Can't wait to see more! Thank you for turning my day from beyond hell to... great!
| Reviewed By: Trunks' Girl 787 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 20:09 EDT
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Hehe...*sarcastic* Very funny on the test part...I'm only rushed because I'm a lazy studier. ^_^ A nice start. You better continue!! I'll kiss you if you do! ^_~ Please invite Hiei, Naruto, Gaara, Hinata, Yugi, Bakura, Heero, Duo, Yoh, Ren, Horo Horo, and Lyserg to the party! I know you didn't have the Naruto Anime in your list, but if you can add them, it would be cool! If there's anything you need to know about Naruto-chan and company, just ask. And please, don't add my little girl (you know what I mean), no matter how much you like the kid. You can use the you-know-who costume on me, just don't be too "kinky" or I'll kick your ass later. Say, will the Anime people use costumes too? Hmmm, I wonder what my mentioned friends could dress as. Oh, well! Music! *music plays* Me wanna dance! *starts dancing*
| Title: Are we invited
Reviewed By: R.G. WolfBlade On: October 22, 2004 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
R.G. WolfBlade and Julie here this party rock D.J. Julie:Yeah this party is so cool hey D.J. let's kick it into high gear with Aaron Carter song (Have Some) Fun With the Funk from PokeMon:Frist Movie.So dose Moukuba want to dance with little old me. R.G.:I wounder if Tea wants to dance with me=^_^=
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay,i am adding an extra girl to the pairings for u to choose who im gonna be with *laughs a bit* how about *laughing a bit harder* the *is uncontrolably laughing now* dark magician girl. *laughing so hard he falls off of his chaor he is sitting in* *back in chair* i only added her ,seeing as she is my favourite card EVER,tho i am not sure i could be paired with her, but, if i did,that would be cool. *statrs laughng again and falls off chair* p.s. i ahve read the beuty peagent story u made and it is good as well. shane.
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 19:10 EDT
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really good first chapter,you must update soon, this is such an awesome story and i have read/seen all of the anime/mangas/comics you have listed,thats right, i am one hell of an anime fan, so far i have watched *starts counting* *half hour later* 35 animes and still counting,such as all of the sailor moon shows when i was aroun 8 all the way to inuyasha,with hunter robin and HELLSING. keep up the good work and update soon. (ps. i know loads about sailor moon,pokemon and yugioh and inuyasha,so i cant really be stumped to easily) shane.
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar On: October 22, 2004 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah^_^ Muses.....(Glomps them) Loved it DJ^_^ Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol... this story sounds really fun! The prologue's pretty good... My name: Meira; Age: 13 (that's my real age... you can make me older if you want...); Personality: Nice, caring, occassionally curses, (is it possible for me and Yami to torture each other relentlessly?) Loves writing, doesn't talk that much; Outfit: Erm... jeans and a black orange county choppers t-shirt(?); Description: Black hair, blonde highlights, black eyes, about 5'1" or 5'2" (no, I don't know how tall I am... sad, isn't it?), pessimistic at times, mainly optimistic; Pairings: Ash or Yugi... (pick one, please); And... if you need a Halloween costume, maybe a goth... (Can you tell I'm horrible at this kind of stuff?) Anyway... I know I took up a lot of room, but please keep on writing!
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please pick me and update soon with the story, it sounds really good so far. shane.
| Title: ME!! PLEASE?
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar On: October 22, 2004 11:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I'd want to join ^_~ If you need my description just ask me through E-mail KK? Keep up the great work!
| Title: *twitching*
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i forgot to add that i can also see through the darkness, no matter how thick or dark it may be. very good prolog, please update soon. shane.
| Title: oops again
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again, i left something out so here ya go: i am able to transform into a giant black wolf demon with pitch black fur with blue streaks in them,in demon form i stand about 3o stories tall and i still have my silvery blue eyes. my eyes change color as well in my demon form,also i shall protect all of the good guys, even if it means putting my life on the line to save others, i am very protective when it comes to protecting my lover. i will dress up as count dracula and my lover will be draculas' bride (vampiress, female vampire), i will take my costume off when i have to fight as i wear my fighting outfit (black kimono with blue linings) under my costume. plz pick me, i love self-inserts. shane.
| Title: oops
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i also forgot to add in some other stuff: i also have a black wolf tail with blue streaks and my eye color changes depending on a certain situation: silvery blue eyes mean im normal,such as not injured,healthy etc, crimson eyes mean im angry,mad or pissed off at someone calling my lover a name or taunting her, dull grey eyes mean im dying and pitch black eyes mean im dead. hope this helps and plz pick me. shane.
| Title: pick me plz!!
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Shane age: 18 Race: Black wolf demon ( as in a full youkai ) Personality:nice,caring,helpful,loving,brave. Powers: shadow powers: creating darkness only i can see thru,making little blacke needle like things attacking from every corner,blending in with shadows and so forth. has ultimate shadow technique: shadow volley of armageddon,doomsday: the attack drains most of my energy,making me fall unconcious for at least one week to four weeks,able to destroy anything. Description: slightly tanned but noticeable,short black hair with blue highlights,silvery blue eyes,black inu ears with blue highlights,wears a black kimono with blue linings,muscular (like inuyasha),also wears black shirt with courage symbol on the back in dark blue with blue denim jeans when with humans, has silver hooped earing on right ear. why you should pick me: i love self inserts and i will protect anyone and everyone on the good guys, i am willing to protect anyone and everyone whenever possible,even with my own life. paired with: serenity wheeler ,mai valentine or ishizu ishtar. plz pick me. shane.
| Reviewed By: Lady D 10290, Brittany, and Laura On: October 21, 2004 23:59 EDT
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Me: Hey DJ, just got the author alert. It's a good start and I look forward to what will happen next. Anyway we'd all like to come to the party. I'll be dressed as a geisha, Britt is dressed as a doll, a normal doll not the evil killer dolls, and Laura will be a demoness (fancy word for female demon) We're not asking to be paired with anyone, we're giving the other girls a chance. Anyway update soon. And I know it's not Halloween yet but "Happy Halloween"!
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