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| "Spring Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Rania On: October 30, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!! A definite change from your Kagome/Inuyasha focused fics. I loved it!! I hope you get a chance to write more fics like this one!
| Title: well needed one shot
Reviewed By: Sari15- who can't log in On: October 30, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something all of us have been clamoring for in the Manga, the first real kiss of Miroku and Sango. Although engaged, they rarely show any intimacy towards each other, and you do a wonderful job of giving reasoning behind both of their minds about this. Beautifully written, and as sweet as their first kiss should be...something that isn't easy to do when Miroku's leacherness comes out too often around her. I thought this was the best one shot concerning Sango and Miroku I have ever read. It really touched me.
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