| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 17, 2005 14:27 PST
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Special eeh? Can't wait to see what Inuyasha dreams up. I'm sure it will be wonderful. He really does have a good heart. I'm still fairly disturbed by Sango's baby. Means Kagome could be her own ancestor. Wierd. I can't wait to see how Kagome's gift works into the story. It's a cool present. I can't help but think it may turn out to be significant. As always, thanks for sharing your work! This is always one of the high points of my day.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 14:16 PST
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Poor Yasha, lol, I think he's learning a valuable lesson about patience, ne? =) What a fun chapter! Makes me glad to NOT be ticklish.
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Reviewed By: BradSpecker On: January 17, 2005 13:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i havew to say ive been reading your stiry for a month or so now and i have to say im enjoying its very refreshing, no major descriptive lemons, i can tell people just hound for them with reviews and all. i just have to say its refreshing no major sex acts. keep at it, theres talent in your mind Cya Bradley Specker
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 12:30 PST
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Looks like it's Kagome testing the waters this time, so to speak. Not exactly 'aggressive' but definitly instigating *cough* intimacy...and then laughing! So inappropriate! Poor InuYasha again. It's a wonder he's not tearing his hair out in frustration. LoL! -- Aww...ramen peace offering followed by snuggles. What a unique courtship! LOL
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: January 17, 2005 12:28 PST
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Hmm, seems that alot of people are confused as to the definitions that are in the whole citrus thing. Sorry that you keep getting bombarded with that...it isn't right. Your story is awesome, the way you tell it and make all the things come across. I like seeing Yasha-boy squirm and such under Miroku's interrogation. Nice job! Very nice!
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: January 17, 2005 11:56 PST
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Oh so Kagome's finally ready, huh? Hahah! I can't believe she started laughing. Poor Inu thinks she was laughing at him. Aw, there there, Inu. And Inu is getting all sentimental now when she said she wants it to be "special". AWWWWWWW!! LOL Hmm, I think the next time a chapter gets limey, you should throw Kouga in there for an interruption. That will DEFINITELY get Inu pissed off. LOL Hey, I would pay to see that!
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: January 17, 2005 11:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: serendith (not signed in) On: January 17, 2005 11:04 PST
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There is a line from an episode of scrubs that always amused me. One of the Doctors was ranting and said, "If you took all the porn off the internet there would be one website left and it would read 'Bring back the porn!'" If these "readers" (and I use that term loosely) really just want the smut then there are tons of outlets. I think in truth they have way too much time on their hands and just want to annoy you ... in truth I would even go as far to suggest that they are jealous that you can write quality literature. It seems like this happens every story you write ... you may have some sort of scary "lemon stalker" who gets his jollies annoying you. *rolls eyes* It is at times like these that I loose faith in the maturity of the general populace (not that I ever had much seeing as how my job includes me dealing with them). Anyways, great chapter - love your romance scenes (your description of kissing alone is enough for me to need a cold shower!) and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 10:52 PST
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wow.. i loved it.. poor inu..the sexual frustration is driving him crazy isn't it..o well it's not all about sex right?..till next time
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 10:42 PST
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"special" she's getting the guy she loves, she want atmosphere too??? sorta demanding of the dog-boy isn't it?
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 10:23 PST
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oh wait...huh that was odd...it signed me in...huh....o...k then...i guess i was signed in...lol
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Reviewed By: Snowluva420 (wont let me log in grrr!!!) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 10:22 PST
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I just think that people who ask you to write a lemon are just...ugh! I can find a word to explain 'em! Oh well. All I can say is that you write beautifully and all of those people who just want a lemon obviously cant see that beauty. Keep doing a great job.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 08:24 PST
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well now i get to wait for mondays chapter. lol. anyway another good one, ja ne. kurisu
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 07:59 PST
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oh! how oblivious can I get? Pardon my rudeness earlier, but happy belated birthday Sue. nice chapter btw
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 07:59 PST
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oh! how oblivious can I get? Pardon my rudeness earlier, but happy belated birthday Sue. nice chapter btw
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