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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 › » ] | Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 01:40 PST
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HA!! I wondered when the ol' "Gotta pee, you gonna watch" scene was gonna show! Gotta give you kudos for making it happen!! K, all I gotta say for this chappie, on to the next!!
| Reviewed By: BloodyKitsune (They really need a stay signed in button on this site....) On: January 04, 2005 23:54 PST
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Ooooo..... poor Kagome, now just wait till she has her period....... I begin to pity the dogboy...... .......I'm actually a little surprised he doesn't just leave her in her time, then go find Hisadaicho.... I mean, Hisaadaicho doesn't know about the well, so the next time she visits Inuyasha, if Kagome is in her time.......
| Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 20:25 PST
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Poor Inuyasha at some point he is going to have to tell her. I mean, he can only take her baggering for so long. Hope you update soon. Later.
| Title: i can finally log in WOOWOO!
Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting ... acting out the dreams huh ... I wonder if they will ever get to that lol ... btw i love the tree and the Sexxhoumaru/Kagura scene... and what kind of monster has Kagome created by agreeing to always been in InuYasha's sight lol, poor girl can't even pee in peace ... wonderful job as always =)
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:26 PST
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By the gods, I know I've said this about a jillion times but I really want this Hisadaicho bitch to die! I am amazed how much i hate her! I don't think I even hated Naraku this much! Anyway, as usual your sexual/romantic tension is tortuous as ever. Damn, just act the dreams out already. Everyone will feel better and Hisadaicho will die quicker. LOL. No, I'm not demanding anything, just being cute.
| Title: Yeah I can FINALLY REVIEW!!!
Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter and thank you for answering my question. I was a little unsure but you or should I say Kagura cleared it all up for me! This chapter was really sweet and I really like how you have made Kagura seem a little more... compassionate because I must say she is not one of my most favorite characters at times but because of your story I now look at her in a new light. Oh one more thing then I promise I will end this long review. I read somewhere that episode 167 leaves everything up in the air with no ending to Naraku or the jewel. Is this true and are we looking at an OVA? Just wondering! Anyway great chapter and a beautiful job done in writing it! MR
| Title: Metamorphisus
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 17:45 PST
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Ah, Sueric, you never fail to delight and amuse me with everything you put Inu and Kag through. It's like you're their older sibling and know EXACTLY how to torture them. I want to tell you that I'm sorry for not reviewing over the past couple of months, but I got really sick, and am just now starting to recover my energy. One of the thing that helped was being able to read your stories. I've gotten lost a few times due to being unable to concentrate, and not being able to sit up at my computer long enough to catch up to the current chapter you placed up. I was grateful when you went on vacation, becuase I thought I'd be completely caught up when you started uploading chapters from the internet cafe near where you were staying, and you left me in the dust AGAIN. LOL. OK, lets see how I'm doing. Inu and Kag are looking for Madam Butterfly who brought Kagura back (thanks, I've always liked her), Susshoumaru is glad, but suspicious, no one is sure how the jewel got slightly tainted, and even though Inu has participated in Kagome's dreams, he won't tell her what was in his. NO WAY, not an ice cubes chance in hell, and Myoga and Baksanou telling them to live the dreams to break the toxin is only causing Inu more discomfort. So, Hisadaicho was created like Kagura was? That means she is bonded with her Koishii like Kagura is bonded to her? The difference being she is willing? What are you hiding? Where is her Koishii? Somehow, I don't think your done confounding us.
| Title: Good Stuff
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it took me two days, but I did manage to read this fic from beginning to end (I didn't get much work done though). I have to say you've got style, and I love both your ideas and your dedication. Also, I am OCD about grammar/spelling in fics, and I am glad you seem to put effort into that as well. Thanks for the effort. I could do without the answering to your fans, but mainly because I figure you could write more if you didn't do them :P I stopped reading them after the first one. Other complaints? None Other praises? You're "Final Thoughts" are great. I am expecting great things from this story, but I have a feeling you won't disappoint.
| Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 12:09 PST
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YAY! MMorg is back up! Ah, so are you trying to hint to us that there could be something "interesting" happening to Kagome and InuYasha in the near future? I'm not begging for a lemon. I swear! Hehehe. But to me, it sounds like that could be the only thing to cure the toxin. I mean, that is if InuYasha can't kill Hisadaicho if she looks like Kagome. And the way you answer flamers and "critics", you make me laugh so hard. I don't know why. I just love how people like you handle situations like that. Just curious, and not like it's important or anything, but is Kaugra staying with Sesshoumaru in his castle or does she just happen to appear whenever he's around? Just want to refresh my memory. :)
| Title: bravo!
Reviewed By: JadeFighter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 09:37 PST
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yet another wonderful chapter... but i do have a question about the tainted aura... is it from the master who the ichisaru was serving?... he had to be evil to be that mean... lol, just a guess. and as for kagome being out of character for running... how does whoever it was explain every time shes caught inuyasha with kikyou... she ran...lol! o wellies... kudos for your time, peace for your future, Jade
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 08:36 PST
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Kagome needs to figure this all out. The tree has told them that Kagura and the evil are one in the same - well, sorta anyway.
| Title: quick question
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 08:13 PST
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have you ever read The Story of O by Pauline Reage? Hisadaicho's little affair to please her lover a few chapters back seemed reminiscent of it. It's a great book, in case you haven't read it. Exemplifies the extremes women will do for love. Which brings me to Kagome. I think she is the best written character in this story. She is willing to lay her heart on the line for Inuyasha, but she is not about to let him overlook it or take it for granted. She wants him to see how far she's willing to go for him, not because she's submissive, but because she's strong. At the same time, she needs him to be supportive of her, and she knows how to elicit that reaction from him without asking or making him feel weak. She knows Inuyasha, knows his heart, and knows her own. She's no simpering school girl. Everything she's done in this fic has illustrated that. Bravo.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 07:47 PST
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yes finally.. loved the chapter can't wait to see what they get into next. and i'm so happy mm.org is working again.. yay..
| Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 07:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... OOC???? I just have to say ... there is no way Kagome's reaction was OOOC... She is a young woman who ALWAYS ALWAYS reacts with her heart, and that's what she did! This wasn't as simple as having an arrow pointed at you. In that instance, InuYasha did know, because he WAS able to think with his head. Had he found her about to kiss another guy, then yeah, I think he'd have reacted with his heart, instead, just as Kagome did. She does have a tendency to run, and only AFTER she's run back home does she ever realize that MAYBE there was something more to it than meets the eye. Talk about weird. I think you handled it exceptionally well! Thanks for another fantastic update!!! I *MUST* ask though ... the entire situation with Kagura ... I know you love happy InuYasha/Kagome endings... but what about Sesshoumaru???? I hope, I pray, you make it good... Thanks again! Till next time! =Diane=
| Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 05:34 PST
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Gah, finnally got around to reviewing for you some more...... sorry... been kinda busy...... ehehehe......... expect more reviews from me!!!!
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