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 Title: Evil Hisadaicho!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2004 11:19 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa…Is that hanyou-girlie thing picking on *my* Sexxhoumaru? No. Way. She can't! Dangling Kagura-the one lure that Sesshomaru can't ignore-in front of him? Pretty puppy? Them's fightin' words, ain't they? Awesomeness abounds, Sueric! Gotta love the whole exchange between InuYasha and his stubborn pride and Kagome's naiveté. It is so interesting to see them captured in the midst of this maelstrom of emotion! Can't wait to see what your next update brings! About your father in law: that has to be tough. Don't feel bad if you can't update as frequently as that to which we have grown spoiled. Family should come first, and you obviously know that! Thanks for taking care of your readers, though! It is so appreciated, in a realm where updates are normally sporadic at best and neglected at worst. Your fics brighten so many days (not just mine, I'm sure!) keep it up and take care of you! With all the luuuuuuv of THE Fluff! =Diane= ... PS... Angelica... you're so dreaming! 7h3 FLUFF is MINE! lol ::wink::
 Title: pretty puppy...
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2004 11:17 PST
Comment/Review:
She called him pretty puppy to his face?! I can't pick whether I like Sexxhoumaru or pretty puppy more....::pouts:: Hisadaicho is hanyou then...I wonder more and more about her past since we saw her being "born" from her cocoon. So I don't think she was born hanyou--this situation has an eerily familiar ring to it doesn't it? Kagome has had dreams about InuYasha? I'd buy it, lol, who here would complain about dreams like that? ::listens to the crickets responding to that question:: AS I THOUGHT. Hmph. Now Sue, I have a bit of a bone to pick with Kagome's subconscious... "FOOD?!?" >_< I very much pity dog-boy about now. What an ego killer and he's already so insecure... but it was pretty damn funny. When will Kagome put him out of his misery? Or when will he give in and take what he wants? What is happening with the seal? And will we get to see these theoretical dreams of Kagome's? ::eye twiches:: and someone mentioned they were the biggest Sexxhoumaru fangirl out there...I've been told I'm not allowed to start fights on the review board... but piscesanela007 and I would beg to differ... roflmao
 Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2004 10:40 PST
Comment/Review:
wow.. can't wait to see what happens next..
 Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2004 08:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for the clarification! They also said something fairly interesting, which was that the FIRST InuYasha series was ending. That would be fantastic! I can't get enough of silver haired men! *swoon* ;)
 Title: Grr...
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2004 08:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Damn you Inuyasha. I wanted to know if Kagome dreams about you too. You should of just answered her. Stubborn! This is a great story.
 Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2004 08:03 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
loved the chapter, it just keeps getting better and better.:P
 Title: I'm a bad person, lol
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (I know I'm signed in....grrrr)  On: December 02, 2004 22:34 PST
Comment/Review:
So, I might have missed a review or two... I hope you don't mind too much Sueric. Hehe, soooo, the bonding didn't quite work... that's absolutely--delicious, lol. Oh, and side effects too... I'm intrigued, very intrigued. I'm so glad the Wizard bit was workied in there with Hisa, I really don't think it could have worked for anyone else. Somebody else who reviewed might have something there with the Cruella DeVil bit... lol... I have this picture in my head of InuYasha with chicken pox looking rather dalmation-ish... LOL Sorry, I get weird after 47 hours without sleep.
 Reviewed By: xXInuyasha_LuvaXx  On: December 02, 2004 20:30 PST
Comment/Review:
Been a while since i reviewed hehehe! anyway..."I'll get you my pretty...and your little dog too!" HAHAHAHA I could NOT stop laughing! OW! thanx...cuz of that line I just fell out of my chair and hit my head! Hehehe. It was great though. It fit in with her character really well! Update soon! Oh and haven't heard much from sesshy lately...
 Title: Still snickering over "my pretty" ...
Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2004 20:24 PST
Comment/Review:
I was reading your comment about the series catching up with the manga and then you said "The manga is still going till the end, where they'll either option it for an OVA or something of the like . . ." Excuse my lamentable obtuseness but ... what did you mean? Is the manga continuing past the series (in other words - contains the ending the series used and yet has more stories after that) and what is an OVA?
 Reviewed By: surreal life_inuyashalover  On: December 02, 2004 20:07 PST
Comment/Review:
hey, are you taking funny phrases now to use in your fanfic? cuz i got one! the cruella de vill! lol, except put the butterlady in her place! like..." Poison them, drown them, bash them on the head. I don't care what you do to the beasts, just do it, and do it now!" okay it might be corny but... if you think about it, she seems exactly like her. scaring puppies everywhere, poisoning ppl, and ...well the sez part isn't really the same... at least i hope not! well you don't have to use it, but it certainly would make me very happy! but don't worry i won't stop reviewing if you don't. ttyl, sueric! bye byes!
 Title: It was me! and I am still laughing!
Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2004 20:05 PST
Comment/Review:
I'll get you, my pretty . . . and your little dog, too . . . .' *Falls on floor laughing!* You did it! You really, really did it! You are my hero! This made my week - Thank you! *sigh*
 Reviewed By: BakaYasha's Biggest Fan  On: December 02, 2004 20:00 PST
Comment/Review:
okay this is my first time reviewing, so don't pick on me. i assure you it won't be the last! i love the wizard of oz thing! maybe you should introduce inuyasha to bacon bits! lol, ya know i don't recall the last time miroku was slapped. *deep inhale* has he been slapped or beaten with the boomerang yet?! and i just haven't noticed? oh yeah, this evil butterfly woman is scaring me half to death! i mean she could be put in jail for breaking way too many laws! she has sexually harassed, pratically raped, murdered, abused, and poisoned people so far! she's like the boggie man, except in female form... lol, well good luck with the writing business! buhbye!
 Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel  On: December 02, 2004 19:45 PST
Comment/Review:
well, back to reviews huh? wonderful descriptions on the fights, so he got hurt this time? ouch. i think it's all too sweet how he struggles for any little amount of Kagome's attention. it must be hard writing a terrific story, right? i know i could never use such diplicit words to describe each and every scene to bring a story to a gigantic climax and then suddenly change it into something other than what the reader thought would happen. inuyasha is having some big issues about himself, isn't he? wanting to be with someone, but not feeling worthy enough to be near them. and it must be hard for kagome also, always trying to get close to him and show her love. but he just keeps trying to restrain himself...*sigh* this is what you call mental distress, folks. this is why so many people go into psychiatric institutes... or they turn gay. (no offense) i also don't see how sango could actually give kagome permission to use her husband's 'sperm' to create a baby inside herself. and then give that newborn to sango. it's really sad too how she can't have a baby though, so i can see 'why' she wants a baby, just not 'how' she could accept her best friend's infant-even if kagome declares it doesn't belong to her, that it is only formed by her. i could never give my baby away, much less accept a close friend's offer to have one for me. this is a wonderful story that makes you think, alot. so i guess thank you sueric, for helping us use our brains! lol, till tomorrow tootles!
 Title: WOW@
Reviewed By: Lean17  On: December 02, 2004 19:26 PST
Comment/Review:
" I'll get you and your little dog too"....Lol, you put in the one thing I never thought you would have,a Wizard of Oz reference. Hmm..wonder if that kind of thing was actually said to InuYasha, what would he do...interesting prospect. :P Anyways, good job, and keep up the work!!!
 Reviewed By: inu-hanyou06_cherryblossom  On: December 02, 2004 19:23 PST
Comment/Review:
gotta hand it to ya sueric, ya sure make things difficult for BakaYasha don't ya? lol, i really missed that name! and what ever happened to 'monk-in-pain red' and sneaky wench? as for your new character... monkey shakes? omg lol, wat next? slappin sango? shorty shippou? mischievious myoga? lol! keep up with the name-callin, who knows maybe one day they'll all get into a name-callin brawl! yep i can see it now... "Come see the Inuyasha gang beat each other to a pulp! Now featuring Kagome with a chair!" ...lol somehow or another crazy ideas like these are what make your story so great! so keep up with the wackyness and 'always follow your heart.' be bak soon! to read and review! tata!
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