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Title: Laughing. My. A**. Off!
Reviewed By: erinlin(not logged in) On: November 19, 2004 14:21 EST
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This is so good! Man, where to start? The ending is perfect, the characterisations are spot on, the dialoge is wonderful! Loved the "Fluffy-sama" referance. Sesh's internal monologe is so funny! And Inuyasha makeing him 'dance'... Oh God,...can't breath! My other favotite part was when Rin hugs Sesh, and he "Didn't hug her back, but made no effort to remove her, either." That was very subtle, and says so much about him. And congradulations on useing the "It was all just a dream" ending, and makeing it work. The red herrings were the key.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (lazy) On: November 18, 2004 22:40 EST
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I'm back!!!!!!! And that was so uniquely eeeevil! Your right though, there are alot of Inu as a dog fics. Love the idea of Seshy as a kitten, he'd be so adorable! But jeez Sesh is so mean to Kagome! I guess he doesn't really like humans other than Rin. I love the Kitty Dance!! It's so mean but cute!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR MY FAV!! I LOVE YA!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER!!!!! Im adding you to my fav. list!! CONGRATS!!!
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Reviewed By: shirahime (nli) On: November 18, 2004 00:38 EST
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This has to be one of the best comedies I've read based on inuyasha! Kudos to you. I think u pinned how sess would act very well. Allowing him to use that haughty 3rd person talking of himself was quintessential in making it even funnier. I loved that! (I know he talks in 3rd person sometimes either in the manga or the anime, but I find it in you one-shot to be well used). I found your story well written and with a great set pace as well. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa On: November 17, 2004 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You get a rating just because you called him "Mr. Fuzzums," and didn't just be lazy and go with fluffy. I think any cat named mr fuzzums would want to kill themself.
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Reviewed By: Moon Child (nsi) On: November 17, 2004 21:47 EST
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well, I'm not exactly sure the entire meaning of the dream of his, but it was interesting to see what Sesshoumaru would be thinking if he was stuck in a kittens body. Its fun to come against idea's you've never seen played out.
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Title: HA HA HA HA
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(nis) On: November 17, 2004 17:06 EST
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HA HA HA HA MR.FUZZUMS THATS SOOO FUNNY....SESSHOUMARU AS A CAN'T....ooh i'm crying so hard cuz i'm laughing so hard that ws halarious....i love the whole thing with buyou and sesshou(aka mr. fuzzums)....and the whole thing with him being angry and all and all you can hear is mew....that was great...lord sesshoumar as a kitten...a persion non the less...ahhh i'm done i got a nice aab work out with that story....keep up the great work..ja ne
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Reviewed By: SylverAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 16:53 EST
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!!! That was hilarious! I loved it! Of course, reading it at work was probably a bad idea, but that's beside the point. Turning Sesshoumaru into a cute, fuzzy little kitten... and his behavior wouldn't have appeared to be at all abnormal in that form! The summary of the fic made me laugh, which is what got me reading it in the first place, and I'm glad I did! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Eartha (not signed in) On: November 17, 2004 15:34 EST
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Oh man, that was hilarious!!! I would have died laughing...but my roomie was already looking at me strangely. Great job. You really did make the old inu brothers turning animal storyline into something much, much better. Keep it up!! So that's why he doesn't eat human food...
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 15:11 EST
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hehehehe poor sesshy!! Stuck in the body of a CAT of all things. I am NOT a cat person. but that was cute.
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug(when loged in) On: November 17, 2004 14:32 EST
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LOL that was so funny.
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