| "The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 15:39 CST
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i've read this story from start to finish about 6 times all ready and i still love it and i loved the teaser and i can't wate tell chapter 8
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 11:11 CST
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Interesting very very INTERESTING...cant' wait to see what Yusuke has planned for our fox...LOL...I hope you have resolved some of the family things:D
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nani? no update yet? hmm guess your working hard(or have a life ) lol well i really hope you update soon because i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story1 it's my absolute favorite yaoi paring. lol i'm even making my boyfriend read this ^_^ well hope everything goes well and that tou update soon. Toodles!!
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pout* I'm so sad that the story stopped right there... I is really good. I can't wait til Hiei joins in the fun! Keep up the excelant work! @---%----, ____________________________________________________
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Reviewed By: Shinohoshi On: September 17, 2005 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Itai!!!!! I love it!! Poor Yusuke, not being able to speak. I hope he severely punishes Kurama when he wakes up. And what will happen with Hiei? Is his threesome going to be more tahn a mere rutting? I hope so... That poor little demon needs someone that loves him... Please update soon! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Ja ne!!!!
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Title: THE SEDUCTIO OF YUSUKE URAMESHI
Reviewed By: THELLY On: September 09, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thelly here! this story was off the chain man. omg, i am like TURNED ON. YOUKO WAS ;PERFECT YOU GOT HIM RIGHT TO A T. EVERYTHING I COULD HAVE WANTED AND MORE. DUDE THIS FIC IS FUCKING AWESOME. OH AND LET YUSUKE TEAR HIEI'S ASS UP. I WANT HIEI TO EXPERIENCE A PLEASEURE LIKE NO OTHER. HIS NAME IS YUSKE URAMESHI! THIS WAS AWESOME LIKE ALL OF YOUR OTHER ONES, YOU THINK YOU COULD WRITE SOME YUSUKE/HIEI? THEY ARE A GOOD COULPE AS WELL. IT'S JUST A REQUEST ! UPDATE SOON-THELLY
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Reviewed By: Ladyfox20 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 14:14 CDT
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No problem, I love this story, so I'll live if it takes a while. How ever that will not stop me from telling you to hurry up with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Youko Lapri (lazy me =3) On: September 05, 2005 12:49 CDT
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*waves rainbow flag just because i can* YAY!!!! You rock! Poor Yusuke, though! He needs chocolate! ^^ Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lareina On: September 05, 2005 10:26 CDT
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First- I think that for the most part all the characters are in character, but Kurama seemed a little too tempermental when he confronted Hiei this chapter. I understand why he feels that way, but I think you wrote him a little too intense duringthat part. On a lighter note, for all the hentai horny-ness of ths chapter, I think that it was really sweet. The emotional aspects of this chapter were great. I liked the scene in the tub, where Yusuke expressed his concern for Kurama and how much of a beating he could take. It shows that there's more to their relationship than just lust. "Deciding it was necessary to calm the boy, who at the moment was gleefully humping his navel..." I liked that line a lot. It made me laugh. It's one of those little things that makes me feel all warm inside. The third thing I thought was great about this chapter was at the end when Yusuke was trying to say "rose whip," and Yoko didn't notice until it was almost too late. I could really sense his guilt and regret. To end this rather long and drawn out review, I would like to say that while all the hot 'n humid lemons are great, I would like to see more of the emotional aspects of Yusuke and Kurama. Sex is all well and good, but where's the fun unless the parties involved really care about each other? Until next time, Lareina
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Title: The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke
Reviewed By: mcowell529 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 10:16 CDT
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All I can say is wow. I have throughly enjoyed your story so far and cannot wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 15:01 CDT
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stop saying we only love your lemons...(which we do love) I love the entire story. I was thinking to myself as i was reading that no one ever has someone say the safe word...and then u did it. I loved it! yay! continue soon!
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Reviewed By: hColleen (log in...yeah right) On: September 04, 2005 07:42 CDT
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Ah...it's so different just reading it rather than beta'ing it...much more enjoyable...not to say I won't beta again (who'd say no to getting something this good before everyone else ;) )...and the appriciation is good too :D Oh...dear...Youko...oh...my...lol You did set up some issues that have to be resolved before you broach the threesome...as I pointed out, BDSM is about trust...more about trust than about sex, really. It was an honour to help you, m'dear...and I look forward to my promised reward ;) (are you gonna tease me with it? lol I wanna be teased...it's fun! lol) (okay, so it's not a reward for beta'ing...but still...I look forward to it :D ) Love ya bunches and talk more with ya later.
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Title: 7
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 23:06 CDT
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oh man oh man oh man, so he basically over stimulated Yusuke into passing out. And GEEZ!! take as long as you need as long as you keep making such GREAT chapters. And I am so CURIOUS as to how the heck you are going to have Kurama bring up the Hiei issue before Noon the next day! THANKS:D FANTASTIC CHapter very very INTERESTING (to say the least) man the 1001 uses for plants...LOL...THANKS again:D
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(NSI) On: September 03, 2005 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome. totally fucking awsome! this is by far my favorite yaoi fanfic ^.^ i love the way you did things....kinda funny how it turned out with youko but kinda not. lol i wonder how Yusuke's gonna take this in the mornin....and is he gonna be like compleatly weirded out byintroducing hiei ? i was thinking it was gonna happen in this chapter but you eluded it. lol damn your good. well all i can say is i LOVE your story, your lemen's are the shiznit lol and update when you can k? CUS YOU KICK ASS!!!!!!!!!!! hehe JA NE!
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Title: Oh wow...
Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 16:21 CDT
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I don't know what to say. Well, first off, sending me that teaser drove me nuts in school for a few days, and my best friend wanted to slap me cuz I kept randomly remembering it at the worst of times and like, jumping on her... squealing about Youko... The chapter was wonderful. I actually sat here and read the whole thing straight through (as in, no stopping to catch my breath... that came after I finished reading). Youko's so hot. I bow down to his wonderfully superior sexual godliness... But yes, now Kurama needs punished... Shame, shame... And I can't wait for the threesome (I've said that in every review since you promised it, haven't I?)... I love how you portray Hiei... and I can't wait to see him uke. *drool* What else... A drawing? I'll try. I have a few very nice images... if I can get my hand and brain to cooperate, I'll have one for you. ^_^ Or two. (Y'know, odd thing. When I finished reading this chapter, my brain was kinda... PTHT! and my left arm wouldn't even get itself to the keyboard to let me log in properly... First, I couldn't remember my screenname, then when I remembered I had to type it with just my right hand while laughing hysterically at the effect your story had on me... the imagery is so vivid that I don't think I even saw the words as I read them, therefore effectively not seeing anything else, either. My brain forgot I existed). Long review. Jeez. Sorry. I'm gonna go recover... *wanders off*
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