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"The Amorous Adventures of Ayame the Ramen Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ]
 Reviewed By: iLoveKakashi  On: September 05, 2009 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I luv this story!! It was funny when Sasuke brought the flowers to iruka for ayame and the a kid was like "look! That kid's got a crush on iruka sensei!!" LOL Awesome story. I thought ayame's going to end up with kakashi but then it was iruka. I mostly like the comedy parts of the story thanks for writing it!! :)
 Title: wow!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: water ghost  On: July 16, 2006 01:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
man its awsome add more lemon plz i beg u plus the scenes and everything not by meaning perverted can u make an iruka/oc hentai or romance fanfic pl i got 2 know
 Reviewed By: Lain Silver [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 16, 2006 14:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! I don't think I've ever laughed so hard! Ayame is a complete ditz...and Iruka and Kakashi aren't that smart either. And to top it off, every one was completly in character! I'm impressed! I bow to your comic greatness. *salutes*
 Reviewed By: zimori  On: April 21, 2006 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the best semi-lemon that i've ever read! :o When i first sat the story, i was like...kakashi and the ramen girl? then it was iruka, but either way i was in disbelief. i never thought about pairings that way, but you did a great job1 ^^
 Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Drak dragon star  On: March 12, 2006 16:37 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update i read your story over 5 times in a row today please write more!! i love it! i love it!!
 Reviewed By: Sakura Trees  On: January 25, 2006 21:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Great!!! i love it! more!
 Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samurai [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2005 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww more more!! and lemon!
 Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samurai [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2005 11:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
PMG that was funny as hell more please more! i wanna know what happen
 Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Niffyat  On: July 10, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! This was awesome! I actually laughed out loud, which I rarely do, but I did several times. Yeah, as much as I love the guy, Kakashi was a bit of a ass, but he was still in character. He was a jerk, but it was not obviously deliberate; his actions and words were just like the show/manga. Your depcitions of the characters was very believable in my opinion. It was written in such a way that felt like it could be a sub plot to the show, like for example, how you used "guy" a lot. And I like how you showed the characters thoughts, like Iruka's on Kakashi or Sakura and Ayame's thoughts as they talked. Really, a great story, my only complaint is the ending felt a bit abrupt. But at least it was happy! Over all, 10 out of 10!
 Title: meh
Reviewed By: Ruby_1  On: January 15, 2005 00:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I liked the beginning, but why did you make Kakashi into such an ass? I mean we all know that he is kind of distracted, but he is cool. I liked your story, the thought of Ayami having an obsession that turned out to be dissapointing. But when she said that Kakashi was a boring noodle... well that was not my favorite part. Other than that, good job.
 Title: You saw episode 105 didn't you?
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your fic! Kakashi is cute, his voice, his face, everything! I just hope Naruto isn't dubbed... then his voice would be ruined!!!!! Anyway I guess you've seen the episode when Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke try to see Kakashi's face. Funny right? Yep, I know! I never laughed so hard during the whole show! Well other than the thousand years of pain gag... ^u^ Anyway, great fic update soon! I hope Ayame and Kakashi do get together! As much as I hate giving my man way... ^u^* JA NE! !!!

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