| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Title: Fingers crossed you will update
Reviewed By: Fan On: May 27, 2020 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this years ago and just came back on the site to find
it...still no update. Its been years so I doubt it'll be updated at
this point but a girl can hope!!!! Hoping one day you'll come back
to this and write more!
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Title: Fingers crossed you will update
Reviewed By: Fan On: May 27, 2020 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this years ago and just came back on the site to find
it...still no update. Its been years so I doubt it'll be updated at
this point but a girl can hope!!!! Hoping one day you'll come back
to this and write more!
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Title: Nah. :)
Reviewed By: Exhausted On: December 26, 2012 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am certainly enjoying this fic, though I despise the chauvinism and the whole 'dominance vs submission'-thing that, almost, always appear in these Inuyasha fics. :) I must admit,though, that the whole war dispute that was in one of the former chapters is tiring. Iraq and other Muslim countries are all Taliban ruled places and to be honest, I couldn't care less about people who live by laws that belong in the 9th century, seek refugee in wealthy and prosperous countries like Denmark, who offers them support and a freedom unlike any, they would have ever had in their disgusting male-dominated countries, then proceed to complain and whine about racism and boast that their lifestyle and culture is much superior to our Western cultures, when in reality, they act like barbarians and savages - rabid animals in need of a lethal injection. I´d prefer that every troop retreated and the soldiers fighting for our countries returned to their families and we just left the savages alone - perhaps they would do the world a favor and annihilate themselves? Of course, I feel sorry for the females, but perhaps one day they will realize the slavery in which they submissively stay in and discover a spine - then perhaps they'd get treated like something more than cattle. |
Title: UPDATE PLEASE!!!!
Reviewed By: Fluffygoodness On: March 27, 2012 07:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read many many fics, yet I find myself extremely lucky to have found yours ' ! I really hope u dont abandon this story it's just too good !! :D so update update update pronto please lol |
Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2011 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. Don't leave us hanging! UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2011 15:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I. Loved. This. Chapter. WOW! Thank you for such a lovely write! I loved the banter between Kagome and Inuyasha and how Inuyasha had won the "name calling" fight by ending it with what he had begun with...calling her a bitch. Lol. On to the next chapter I go! |
Reviewed By: I On: October 03, 2010 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness I absolutely adore this fanfic! While I may not entirely agree with your position of the war, you explained your thoughts in a non-agressive, factual manner. I can admire the fact that you know what your talking about as opposed to someone blabbering about things they don't know about. I also learned some new things about the war so thanks for that as well! I hope you finish this fanfic because you have a lot of talent and its one of the most entertaining fanfics out there.
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Reviewed By: animefreak492 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 02:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to check on this fic and see that you've updated... Then I had my hopes crushed once again when I saw the date and year that it was updated :( I have to say that this is probably one of my favorite fics and I have been checking on it off and on for the past 3-5 years. I hopee you've made a complete recovery from your surgeries, and if you haven't, I hope you feel better soon :) Please update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: kyokitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 11:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this is one of the most interesting stories out there. Please disreguard those disparaging critics who can only criticize. Yes, there are some things the could be improved, but not necessarily so. I myself aspire to write, but it comes out like a 2nd grader in the attempt. So please do continue. Those who criticize and only criticize are the self important people who think they are the only thing this side of the sun that matters. Tough for them. I'd rather live in this world with a small slap and a small pat to encourage me further. Please do continue with your story. A most intriguing read, with plenty of chemistry and sizzle involved.
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing. i absolutly loved your debate speech. i always wanted to be a debater but i have to much on my plate already. for me your story is definitly among my top few. i do hope you have not givin up on such a beautiful fanfic. plz update soon.^_^
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing. i absolutly loved your debate speech. i always wanted to be a debater but i have to much on my plate already. for me your story is definitly among my top few. i do hope you have not givin up on such a beautiful fanfic. plz update soon.^_^
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Reviewed By: demi(: On: December 29, 2009 22:53 PST
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i've never before commented on your fic but i'd like to say that it's pretty brilliant. typos and grammar aside, you're a genius. i could really care less about spell & grammar check at this point, in all honesty. you've done such an incredible job with this story and regardless of whether or not it is to be continued it will always be, in my mind, one of the best works of fanfiction out there. the risks you've taken have paid off beautifully and i hope you know that you've inspired my creativity an absolute ton. i don't think i need to add that the sexual tension and, hopefully, eventual release of said tension is/will be awesome.(: do me a favor and please, even if it's not this fanfic as aforementioned, don't stop writing. you're very gifted.
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Reviewed By: ForsakenMe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is smoking hot! I've got my butt glued to my seat until i finished the story..oh my..LOL.:) Hope the next chapter would follow..*pouts*LOL. I just can't get enough of this story, thanks for graciously sharing your work. You're one talented writer.:) Can't wait for more chapter, yipee! (and hell i act like a 5 year old baby)..:D
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Reviewed By: Spoodlesxo2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 21:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where are you?!!!! Please post some more chapters! Your story is very interesting and I can't go on without knowing what happens next...and how it ends!! So PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP...update :)
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 00:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! u r an excellent writer!!plz continue don't leave us hangin....
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