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"You Already Have a Valentine" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ]
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 Reviewed By: silverkitsune89 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 27, 2006 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! This is muy awesome. Please update soon!!!
 Title: HOTTNESS!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 29, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this story rox so much it is so hott and i wanted to read a lemon in this last chapter now ur teasing the viewers V_V but oh well i really do hope u write a lemon next chapter *maybe we should get a little malik/marik action *drool* and i'm so glad u continued the story i thought u had ended it *i knew i was right ^_^* but ya im glad cuz this story rox my sox i think i've said that before heh heh anyway can't wait for the next chapter *and i'm still wishing for a lemon 0.0* Merika
 Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan  On: August 20, 2005 11:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! I saw this update a few days ago, but my computer was being stupid and wouldn't let me read it...or maybe it was MediaMiner? Anyway, now I've read it, so now I'm happy! But that was EVIL. I was expecting a nice little lemon, and BAM. You take it away! All the more reason for me to watch for your next chapter. ^^ Oh...and by the way, I didn't mean to embarrass you. Just wanted to point it out before some little flamer did. ^^' ~Almighty Neko-chan~
 Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2005 04:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
...you are so evil...and, at any rate, I wouldn't mind Ryou topping Bakura...not at all actually *drools*
 Reviewed By: Andyouthinkimcrazy?  On: August 12, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_o Poor Bakura... What will he do with himself with Ryou's dad around? >_< So short! T_T Update soon!
 Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI)  On: July 14, 2005 03:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ryou's dad is coming home...this should prove to be interesting, update soon!
 Title: Am I Right??
Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 02, 2005 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ah ryou and bakura dancing mmmm*drools* ryou and bakura dancing NAKED *drools*(running out of drool agein!) i luv this chapter i LUV IT but i can't keep fantizizning until i get more drool(heh heh -_- that's kinda gross ha ha i'm sorry) heh anyway see ya next chapter...*gasp*0.0 there is another chapter right? i mean it's not finished? am i right huh am i right ^_^ i'm sure i'm right^_^ heh heh........I am right right???????? 0.0 P.S plezzzzzzzzzzz say i'm right (falls on her knees crying) what will i read if i'm wrong? WHAT???? ;_;* single tear*
 Reviewed By: forever broken (on work)  On: June 01, 2005 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*wants you to let yami and yugi be together* it is great!! yaay! and especially the dancing part! and the part with mai and tea! and another great chapter (i said that already didn't I?) *shrugs* keep on updating!
 Reviewed By: paniwi (at school, thus not logged in)  On: June 01, 2005 04:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
the part of the dancing and stuff was really good, go you!
 Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2005 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was good omg i can't wait for more but i was kinda looking forward to "ryou with syrup" this chapter but it was still awsome lol! see ya next chapter good luck!
 Reviewed By: paniwi-chan  On: May 28, 2005 10:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
being the ignorant innocent virgin I am off course I don't know what a 69 is, although Ryou's reaction gave off a pretyy clear hint and...ok, subject change...I liked the way you made Yugi and Tea feel about eachother! It's not often that such thoughts come forward in a fanfic, I comment you! (don't I always, lol)
 Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan  On: May 26, 2005 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! *happy dance* I love the chappy. Naked, mischievous Bakura? Fine by me! XD Oh, and I just felt like pointing out that in Chapter 11, you wrote "probing the inner recesses of Ryou's tongue with his mouth", when it should be "probing the inner recesses of Ryou's MOUTH with his TONGUE". (at least, I think so...o_O) That just kind of stood out to me...^_^' Well, anyhooble, now I'm anxious to read the next chapter. So update soon! Hurry hurry hurry! ~Almighty Neko-chan~
 Reviewed By: forever broken ( to lazy to log in )  On: May 26, 2005 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
and another great chapter from the almighty you! it is so cute! ryou is going on evil! ^__^ coool!! and yugi is in love with yami right *angelface* can you make those two fall in love. pwetty please!! *puppy dog eyes* and I so like this story! so please please please update sooner
 Reviewed By: paniwi (and forever broken)  On: May 14, 2005 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
thanx for the compliment *blush* I know what a great support Reviews can be (hint hint) so it's no trouble at all, and I'll keep reviewing for you. MMH, nice nice lemon, cute too. thnx for the darker colors, highlighting is annoying, oh and if MM.org doesn't show all your reviews, go to my settings, my fanfics and click on the reviews for your stories then, it does show there (i got the same problem until I found this solution) ja ne paniwi-chan!
 Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just thought you wanted to know, but Que Sera Sera is Spanish, not French. But you're right: it does mean Whatever will be will be.
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