| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Arienishi11 On: March 01, 2005 04:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was funny, i just skipped the part when...you know....YUCK!!! I cant wait till Inuyasha and Kagome finaly meat again. So please update soon. And sorry i havnt been logging in when i write the reviews. stillsullivan@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 28, 2005 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...you definatly have some...intresting...characters in this bunch, now don't you? i see this going BAD places. a guy who apparently has a thing for InuYasha...getting him wasted...alone...with Kagome on the way. ::shivers:: i see misunderstandings up the wazoo on the horizion. if i'm wrong, then thank the kami's, if not, i'll hold on for the ride. LOL. i got to say, i laughed for a good while off the 'things that make you go yuck' comment. that was GREAT. i mean, really really awesome!!! Great job and keep it up!!!!
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Title: A decent premise. . .
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story's premise is an original one in the way it looks at Inuyasha's wait, but the bad grammar and frequent misspellings detract from the language. There is also a lack of detail that keeps the reader from becoming attached to the work. There are also a couple of plot holes where you try to deviate from the series, and that would be fine if they were more believeable. But, I do like the narrative. Perhaps a beta reader could help with misspellings and more organized details and character thought and speech.
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: February 28, 2005 21:09 EST
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Man, he still hasn't gotten Kaogme! What's taking soo long!? Oh and thanks for the warning, I defiantly didn't wan to read that yoai lemon... Demon
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Reviewed By: arienishi11 On: February 28, 2005 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havnt read the chapter yet cuz i was wondering about when you said homosexual and i dont like that and was wondering if you'd tell me what you mean. stillsullivan@yahoo.com
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Title: Hoooo-whee!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: February 28, 2005 19:04 EST
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Is Mankee off the hook or what?! I'm with Yash-kun...ain't nobody old enough to see that!! LOL To quote an old favorite song; "...I get my kicks above the waistline, Sunshine!" *guffaw* Are you sure you want to get Inuyasha drunk?? LOL
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 11:50 EST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I cant believe!!you ended it there!!! YOu have to write more sooon pleaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeee!!!!! i BEGGING YOU! Thanks for the chapter.
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Title: Arienishi1
Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 11:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I still love the fic, i cant wait tell Inuyasha comes though!!!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 00:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao i like InuYashas last statement! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this fic today and I am really enjoying it. How sweet, InuYasha's 500 year devotion. I'm not surprised. He's as stubborn as they come, and if anyone can find a way to wait that long, he would be my choice. And not wanting to lose his 'human' pack members is also very much in his character. He did without and lost so much early in his life, he would cling to and protect most fiercely anyone under his care with a single-mindedness that many would find difficult to match. Even with all of his faults, I wouldn't change anything about our favorite Hanyou and I wish him every happiness that he can find. --- Great job, I'll be waiting for the next chapter and Yash-kun's reunion with Kagome.
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Title: good!
Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 20:22 EST
Comment/Review:
good! will you please update again soon?
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: February 26, 2005 20:13 EST
Comment/Review:
YES! He's in tokyo but he's still not with Kagome! Please hurry up with the next chapter! I'm desperate!!!!!
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Reviewed By: allibaby26 On: February 26, 2005 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good! keep up the good work. I cant wait to see what will happen after the two are reunited!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: missbritt321 On: February 26, 2005 15:54 EST
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hey its really good so far you should keep it up ok i cant wait to read what happens next i wounder what theyre gonaa do when they see each other? well i wont know until you up date well thanks;)
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update again soon please? i haven't been on in live 2 days! well keep up the good work and update update update soon again please?
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