| "Pseudo Ferocity" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2013 05:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it great story and writing |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2011 20:47 EST
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When I'm in the mood to read a good light hearted fic, I always turn to this story and RM's Cop Story. It always lifts my mood. Thank you:) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2010 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story. It was lighted hearted and fun.
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely amazing piece of work. I'm actually reading all your b/v fics oldest to newest because i'm bored and have nothing else to do. your holiday fics did inspire me to write something for a friend(a OC/Piccolo get together, blah, but it's coming out good!) and after reading so much I've begun a B/V of my own where things turn out much differently on Namek. Only problem is I'm hyperactive and weird so I have a hard time keeping Vegeta...Vegeta. Unless I do the entire thing in his POV which I can't seeing as we need to know some behind the scenes stuff. arg. anyway completely loved it and inspired by your works keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Sound of Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 06:59 EST
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I really enjoyed your story. While the characters were somewhat OOC it didn't bother me as much as it usually would. In fact I think it help the story quite a bit. Its nice to read some fics that are set in a relatively real world cause there are sooo many fics that overkill with the sci-fi and magic and stuff. I don't know if you know this but I made a fanart inspired by your story so if you want to see it, its here: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/195662 Keep writing I love your work!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 22:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did an awesome job of thinking of a unique plot and carried it off perfectly. Vegeta as a 'fish out of water' having to work for a living was very entertaining to read about. Being a model and an actor makes total sense in that he's a Prince, who often had to hide his true emotions under a veneer of disdain. I liked the personal touches you put in with him setting up his apartment and trying to overcome his aversion to being intimate with women. I also liked the relationship with Caleb and his lover. Great work all round!
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Title: A Cut Above the Rest
Reviewed By: gandadiyosa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read almost every B/V fanfic out there and I must say, Pseudo Ferocity Rocks My Socks!!! This has got to be one of the very best B/V fics I've ever come across. I love the way you describe Vegeta and the audience when he gets on the catwalk. Your descriptions of Vegeta made me drooling idiot. When he winked at Bulma while strutting his stuff, I literally reverted back into a crazy teeny bopper, squealing my fool head off. God, just thinking about it still makes my insides turn to jelly. Amazing. Hot. Awesome. You Rock!!! Oh, and the last part about Bulma's pregnancy cracked me up so bad! So damn funny!
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 00:56 EST
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I HAD to read this after reading the ending at the Salon. It was really cute, and while a slightly absurd idea, it was fun and nicely done. I like Vegeta's character, and could actually see him teasing the models since they seemed to respect him on some level. Thank you for not making Bulma some super woman. *g* Even your original characters were nicely done, just around enough to provide some comedy and interaction without overpowering the story. Vegeta's reactions to sex - and Bulma - were believably awkward and uncomfortable. If I had any complaint at all, it would be that I think you rushed to get to the lemon. I understand, though (did it myself) - between work, school, etc you don't have enough time and you are afraid you won't get the story done if you don't speed things up a bit. One of the most unusual (and cutest) 3 year stories I've read. *gasps* I've read het! I'm corrupted! *g*
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Title: shittttttttttttttttttt
Reviewed By: LatinAYaoi mami On: August 06, 2005 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn this is a really good fic i really loved ur creativeness! it was wonderful .. this was perfect. the only perfect fic that i read was UNLIKELY ROMANCE but now urs is on that list as well WONDERFUL diz shit was hot !!!! beautiful
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Title: It's been ages...
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 08:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know, I know you probably can't even remember why the devil I am anymore, but as many times as I've read it... But I still gotta tell, ya, kitty This story totally rocks!!!!!!!!!!!! Hell yeah!! I don't think I've ever read an Au DBZ story that makes me laugh as hard as this one does, in a few places!You go girl!!
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Reviewed By: BV fan On: July 12, 2005 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i read this fic somewhere else (FF probably) a long time ago...and i just wanted to let you know that it's one of the best fics I've read. I thoroughly enjoyed every single chapter. i absolutely loved it, just thought id let you know ^^
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: ruthless On: April 07, 2005 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, especially the whole idea of vegeta being a model. he's sooo effn gorgeous.
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Title: You know this story still kicks ass!!!!
Reviewed By: Suzanne lady valtaya Kraft On: January 16, 2005 16:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could rate this as 12s all the way up the line I would have!!!!! I've been toying with the idea of retiring formally from fanfiction for several months now with a final chapter in the random lemon collection... but I just couldn't ignore the auto updates from your stuff and not read them all. I miss ya, and I love ya!!! ^_^ Keep writing, keep going with that over the top imagination of yours, kitty!!! You're still the best, thanks for the memories and for finishing what is still one of my fave stories!
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 00:45 EST
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I'm glad you finally posted the last chapter! It was great! I hope you have new BV's to post (hint, hint).
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