| "The Light That Never Goes Out" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Maurelle On: January 27, 2005 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maurelle loved. Can't wait for more. Yes, i'm reviewing on ch 5. lol. I'm reading the rest later. Too much stuff to do/read. Keep it up.
|
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 10:58 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a really good chapter. Yug and joey are a little oblivious. He got hurt because of some girls angry boyfriend and so he must have been scared that his yami would kill the jerk. Well can you blame him for wanting to. Please update soon cause I gotta know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^
|
Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: January 20, 2005 05:31 CST
Comment/Review:
really cool story, I hope you'll continue soon. And don't worry, most people on mm.org use the japanese names, often they refer Bakura as Ryou and Yami Bakura just as Bakura for ease too.
|
Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!! soo for its great! cant wait to see or um read the rest!!^^
|
Title: Great Story!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 02:02 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a really great story and I like it alot. poor ryou hope he gets better. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon. Buh-bye ^__^
|
Title: Great!
Reviewed By: lunar star On: January 15, 2005 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice work! Put up a new chapter. Poor Ryou. Oh well, at least Yami Bakura's looking after him.
|
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
