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| "Yes Master, My Master" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: chaonet On: February 16, 2005 08:12 CST
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oh. my. gawd. you have done such a great job in your descriptions, I CAN"T READ THIS FUCKING STORY ANYMORE! What powerful writing, and such great details. I honestly can't read past the second chapter. Just wanted to commend you for your great writing. Thanks for the oh-so-scary read, and good bye =)
| Reviewed By: sakura_cherry_tree [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! | Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd On: November 21, 2002 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this flic was awesome. I all most thought they would keep Quatre. | Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd On: November 21, 2002 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I can't beleave someone will put Quatre through so much, but this story was good. | Reviewed By: masamune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this fic is incredible. It's good to be able to read it in its entirety. Remember me? I know how much you put into this story and how hard you stuck with it. I loved it, right up my sick and twisted alley and so well done. It's a beautiful piece of work.
a sequel? hmm, i've been hoping for one. | Reviewed By: AmiGirl9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow again. I know I've reviewed this a million times on ff.net, but.. oh well. Great job, blacktears! Can't wait to here from you soon with some new chaps. Your beta, Ami :) | Reviewed By: kai narakumi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O
Oh, my, God.
*flutters eyelashes in shock*
That was freaking amazing. Oh wow. Oh freaking wow. That's... just astonishing. Amazing. Bewildering. Interesting. Intruiging. You name it, whatever adjective or synonym that goes with amazing. Anything, dear God, this was great.
I hated the killings of the boys, but it was wonderful, beautiful, ironic symbolism : Gabriel was killing himself.... in those children. He wanted someone to share his sorrow - Quatre. Yet Quatre would not allow it. Eventually Gabriel was broken.... again... and he couldn't let the angel be caged any longer. He and Cassiel were not the angels, Quatre was....
Very, very beautiful. A definite favorite. Fantastic, fantastic. I'm just stunned. Really.
I CANNOT wait to see the prequel! I loved Gabriel's character, totally go into that.... and definitely into Quatre and Trowa. Maybe even a moment of Gabriel seeing Tro and Quat? ^_^
Thanks for the great fic. Keep writing. - Kai | Reviewed By: WildfireWing On: September 23, 2002 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, a great fic. Very original! I'm very glad that you are doing a sequel; I look forward to reading it! | Reviewed By: 7 On: December 23, 2001 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a nice fic, even though not what I usually prefer. I've rated many fics before and trust me, when I give a seven it's great if the fic is placed on a 1-10 scale with one being the lowest. Also, my fav. number is seven and anything I rate seven is usually a good fic for others that like the same matirial (sorry if wrong spelling) that I do, which is usually only my best guy friend but he isn't interested in yaoi. So read this fic for your own, better rating.
Please make other fics following this one. Like the one on Quatre going back to normal life that you stated in the epi?
(p.s.I ardly ever give a higher rating that secen unless the fic is outstanding! This one was so close. If I could I would have given it a 7.9) | Reviewed By: Foxfur On: December 21, 2001 14:28 CST
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P.S. In case you didn't know, the difference between a phsychopath (I'm not sure if that's spelt right, but I think it is) and a sociopath (again, not sure on spelling) is this: A phsychopath doesn't know that what they are doing is wrong. A sociopath knows, but doesn't care. Enjoys it.
So you see what I mean? If Quatre turned into Gabriel and the other fella he would probably have been under the definition of a sociopath.
Ok, ok, enough with the lecture already... | Reviewed By: Foxfur On: December 21, 2001 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, this is the second time I've done that... tell an author that I liked their story but it was "too short" then come to find out it was just incomplete. Anyway, sorry 'bout that.
Ok, I gotta admit, It was good in the beginnig but I got a little sceptical in the end. I was afraid that you would turn Quatre into this evil phsycotic person. Either that or a sociopath. I liked the ending but again was worried you had just resigned Quatre to a fate of lonliness and, worse, no Trowa. But I truely did like how it turned out. I love the fact you put Quatre and Trowa back together.
Anyhow, I LOVED the fic! | Reviewed By: Foxfur On: December 19, 2001 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it but it was too short. I don't understand why, when an author writes a good fic and has a good plot going on, they end it. Poof.
So other than that and the "their" problem (mentioned in above comment) I liked it alot.
Oh, and one more thing. You said it had 2&3 in it. Did you mean 2x3? And if you did, I didn't see any. Mention of 3x4, yes, not 2x3. Or am I totally off?
Once again, good fic. It's be nice if you continued it. Please? | Reviewed By: psychocavalier [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2001 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good idea. I would suggest running it through a grammer check, as it tends to use their where it should use they're. The grammer mistakes aren't really that noticeable, and don't interfere with reading the fic. |
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